Another Song I Wrote ; High School Drop Out

Im Gonna Write as Many as i Can until i get a Mic, Then Release Them All at once ... Feeedback appreciated

the Chorus & The First 4 Lines of Verse 1 Is Gonna be Edited, im gonna leave it like that for now tho

Chorus : X1
Its Time To Wave Goodbye to my Future
Nothing-Left But-Regrets and to Fire My Tutor
With my Wrist cut Around the Size of a Ruler,
Im on the Next Plane Out to the Island Of Losers


Verse 1:
Only Time-Will-Tell-If These Hypothetic Winters
is the reason high school kinda left me 'Shivered'
Answered all my questions with Psychedelic Pictures
My Planes Crashing Near These Island Dwelling Figures
They Said My Name Was Forrest And To Always Dot The I's,
Cuz i Aint-Smart i used to 'Trade-Marks' Like a Copyright
"Psst, Warship's taking agriculture... Pass it along"
But I got expelled the first day for PLANTING a Bomb!
Every Lunch I'd have to Serve Kids Soup With a Knife
Cause i was in the back, bending Spoons with my mind
More-Cigs Before-Gym? Well I Aint Stoppin at One
So every Phys Ed I'd Play Dead While i Coughed Up My Lungs (*Choking*)
They said taking things literal was a Dumb Decision
Cause I started every Drama Class by trying to Dump My B!tches
When I Got Kicked Out For Life Cause i wasn't an American
i flew a plane into the school and Blamed it on a terrorist

Chorus X1

PK is jumpin on Verse 2

Almost as ridiculous as the first.
Seriously, what he hell is this about? Terrorists?
And:

"Psst, Warship's taking agriculture... Pass it along"

?

I give up trying to figure this out.

"Psst, Warship's taking agriculture... Pass it along"
But I got expelled the first day for PLANTING a Bomb!

hmm... i wonder whut it could mean

Dont call me dumb cause my lyrics go over your head bro lol And WarShip Is My Stage Name ... Im Thinkin about changing it tho

« Last edited by Rah Rain Matrix on Apr 2nd 2011 »

Don't ever discourage someone like that.

Ryuujin said:

Don't ever discourage someone like that.

If your talking to me this guy's been writing in my threads over and over repeating himself, saying im not original and calling me dumb when he isnt smart enough to figure my puns or wordplay's out lol. I Honestly let it slide the first time but it's obvious what hes trying to do

He's just stating his opinion, nothing wrong with that D;

Anyway, song is fairly decent, your actually pretty good at the rhyming parts. However, maybe you should consider some people (maybe friends) to feature with you on a track. For example, Rain Matrix featuring "insert friend here" rather than just making tracks on your own all the time, it's just a little something though.

Lol thats what im doing bro ... My other Song "Mind Numbing" Is gonna Feature Brad Knomadd (From this site) .. and this one's featuring my boy PK

and yeah i get that hes stating his oppiniun ... but in my other thread he posted like 3 times saying the same thing lol. I mean.. if he doesn't like it, why'd he bother read this one too? He thinks im getting mad or something, like 1000's of rappers haven't said i was nice and that his oppiniun means the world to me lol.

a Famous Rapper Already said Im nice So Im Good lol

Your featuring my good friend, Brad? Wow, nice, you have my blessing already xD lol. I don't think he's aiming to make you mad, somehow. He's just stating what he thinks about you, whether you care or not. He still has a right to get his point across.

Yuh me and brad go way back ... Were gonna tear that track to shreds

And he can like whatever he wants it doesn't bother me none, but if he doesn't like it he should move on, it shouldn't be that important to him to come back whenever he gets the chance to and write a new message about how he hates my work lol . It looks more like hes hating than being honest so i don't even take him seriously anymore

Anyways Thanks for reading man, stay up

Man, this one really speaks to me. I had to drop out in the 11th grade, though it was mainly because of a medical condition I had. Still had to go and get my GED. The song, tis nice. <3

Thanks bro haha i got expelled 2 months ago, they was glad to see me go. G.E.D seems like the way to go though... do you know if they'll give me the information i need to study or will i need to find it myself?

They'll give you everything you need. Here's what happened to me as far as GED goes.

I pretty much set my mind towards getting a GED, because I would have been near two grade levels behind just because of my little medical condition. I called up the high school that I used to go to, and asked about the GED program. They said they offer it as a class in the High School. So, I went to school for normal school hours through the course of about 3 months, just so I could study up on everything all day and get prepared. Took a test in November of last year, passed it, got my GED. They say the tests are really hard, but truth be told, anyone with a 9th grade education level could easily pass it. If you do decide to get a GED, then good luck! xD

« Last edited by Forgoten_Scars on Apr 2nd 2011 »

I think everyone can relate to this song in some way, I know I can. I might have to remix this & call it "College Dropout" haha. The wordplay on this one is too great, major props bro.

CRAZY CHEATS said:

Almost as ridiculous as the first.
Seriously, what he hell is this about? Terrorists?

LOL it went right over your head & kept going. You could at least ask what the song is about before judging the book by the cover. Very helpful posts you post.

CRAZY CHEATS said:

"Psst, Warship's taking agriculture... Pass it along"

?

I give up trying to figure this out.

Out of pity, I'll tell you what this line in particular is about. He's saying that Warship (him) is taking agriculture (getting weed; I'll let you figure out how agriculture is related to weed), & to pass it along, which has a double meaning of passing it along like rumor & passing it along in which what people do with weed; take a puff & pass it to the next person.

« Last edited by bradthegamemaster on Apr 2nd 2011 »

That's it. Brad's my new favorite member. I'll like anyone who will stick up for others rather than putting them and their threads down.

Okay people, tell me, what is this that's going "over my head"
And excuse me for not knowing your local terms for various drugs.

Whaddup brad! ... Dont even bother explaining my stuff to him lol its funnier when he doesn't get it

and pretty much everything is going over your head bro lol. Just cause its rap doesn't mean it has 1-dimensional lyrics. I can only imagine if i didn't dumb-down my lyrics, then spit them on a track .... Ur brain would overload trying to keep up hahaha. I mean.. u thought this song was about terrorists.... lol enough said

Honestly if you asked me nicely, i'd explain it to you. If not U can go back to your milk impersonations and let us do what we excel at

Either way i'll finish brads expo

"Psst, Warship's taking agriculture... Pass it along"
But I got expelled the first day for PLANTING a Bomb!

Planting... agriculture .... do u see a link between those lines? If thats too hard, reading (and listening, for future reference) to my songs might not be for you.

"Do u fools listen to music or do you just skim through it?" - Jay Z Quote

And Thanks forgotten, 3 months of studying was what i had in mind. i was passing 10th grade until i got kicked out So i should be in the clear then hahah.

Honestly Rain, not all of us are totally up-to-date on terminology surrounding the weed/dope culture. Least of all the terminology you use in your area.

As it stands, I've a few friends who, like you, often write songs very similar to this. Half the time I need them to explain just what they're meaning, because the terminology & references aren't something I'm familiar with. Perhaps you should remember for next time you decided to post up lyrics, not all of us follow the same culture you do and there will be things that we just do not pick up on.

In all honesty, when the majority of people see something like "I got expelled for planting a bomb" their thoughts immediately go to explosive device.

As for the lyrics themselves;

I don't know whether it's simply the way you've posted them all bunched up & together or not, but I'm struggling to see any kind of flow, any kind of overall picture/story that your trying to tell. Perhaps the remainder of the song will fix that. But that's just what I'm getting atm.

Yuhh but its not like i capped "PLANTING" for no reason, if u were actually taking in what i was saying instead of passing it off as simple lyrics, you would of got it ... most people i showed that line to understood it lol... its not even that complex really, like off the top of my head heres a few older ones

"Unless you Never die you better 'Hide' Like Jekyll, B!tch
Cause Last time i won by a 'Land-slide' Like Continental Drifts"

If You can't see me coming you should consult your Eye Doctor
Cuz I Don't Mean Luke When I Say I'll Make You a 'Sky Walker'

and Heres one i wrote that crazy cheats can relate to

"He'll be Choking to Death When he Opens This Thread
You could be a giant and my puns would still go 'Over your head' "

And theres some others in my sig. hahah I got too many to name

And i can flow to them .. it all depends on the beat your using. the first 4 lines and chorus need to be changed though, your right

I don't think you're understanding what I'm saying. They may be easily understood by you. But other people are from different cultures where different terminology is used for the exact same thing may not understand. That's all I'm saying.

Instead of running your mouth and saying "Don't bother explaining it coz he'll never understand" think about why people don't understand.

What is easily understood to you, may not be for others. Just as the reverse is also true. It all comes down to the topic at hand and the specific culture surrounding that where an individual lives.

I'm not trying to start something with you dude, just trying you help you understand where I'm coming from.

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"Dont bother explaining it cuz he'll never understand?" lmao your twisting my words i wouldnt say something like that... i said its funnier when he doesn't get it and looks dumb while he attempts to make fun of me, pretty much ... quote me

and if hes gonna write things like "This is unoriginal" then again on the same song "This is cheesy" then "I think you missed the point entirely alfred" ... then whutever he wrote in this thread .... you'd think he atleast understood whut i wrote. or atleast would be nice enough to ask what i meant instead of trying to look like an online tuff guy. you honestly don't see a problem with him constantly writing in the same 2 threads about how much he hates something he doesn't even comprehend?


Far be it from me to not love him long time