The first one is good, I like how you've made the render sort of pop out of the sig, which is really nice. The colours match, which seems to be apparent in all three of them. The text messes it up for me though...it's just not needed, and it's sort of like you've put it for the sake of being included...and the obvious fact that you've spelled stealth wrong (unless steath is a word which has meaning to you, then I'm sorry for my ignorance
) BUt overall, I really like the use of the technique that you've used, so well done
The second one is good as well, but I prefer the first one (personal preference
)I like his smile, I think it adds a bit of contrast to the overall, sort of scary effect you're going for, so nice use of the render. Lighting is good, it's believable, which is never a bad thing
The lack of flow is a bit sad, I know it's hard to create flow with still renders, but just try to get a bit of flow going next time
not a fan of the colour, but that's just me. I would have liked it to be black and white maybe, but again, personal preference. Next time though, put some obvious effects over the render, so it looks like it blends into the sig, and doesn't look pasted on to it. But having said that, overall, again, well done.
Third one, which happens to be my favourite out of the three. I like how you've used two renders, I can never make it look good, and you've made them look pretty good
Nice colour matching again, you have a knack for that. You maybe could have not blended in the right guy's sword that much, it looks like he's holding a dagger, not a sword (samurai, I'm guessing
) Good flow in this one, which is nice, overall, not too many faults...but it looks a bit too cluttered to me...try not using that many effect on one sig, try to keep it clean, unless of course this was the look you were going for, if it is, it's good, but it's a bit, just slightly, too messy for my liking. Overall though, it's well executed, and my favourite out of the three
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