The Dark Gotenks Saga

and to put it over the top...

oh, ive never seen any near this big myself. ive seen rps way bigger, but not fan fiction.

Tom that was ace!

(oh boy,improvment bombing time)

Great,after i post out about 3 more episodes of NQFP,i'll start a new topic for it,because then it'll actually be worth something.

improvement bombing? im curious as to the term... does that mean you expect me to pick it apart?

....you know what?Forget it.I'll just get the DragonBall Villian Supreme saga episode up in a min.

*decides not to "improvement bomb" since he is in a good mood* you do that. lol.

Tom told me on msn that he's doing DB VS episode.

*is lost for words* wha... he said it was finished earlier! oh whatever... ill read it when he posts it.

I asked him he said when he copy's it of word and paste's it,it only paste's HALF so he has to fill the rest in.

*is getting frustrated over nothing* It's a pity Jay isn't here for improvements,but he's gone who-knows-where.

Episode 7c:Gotenks's True and Ultimate power!

Continuing from the last time,Gotenks is just about to finish off Froozer...if he dosen't goof it up that is...

LSS4 Gotenks:Eat Die-Die Missle supreme! (launching a hoard of powerful Ki blasts,each leaving a massive scratch on Froozer's body each time one hits)Now,to finish you off!Enough toying around! (bangs both of his knuckles together,and teleports down to the side of Froozer,and kicks him through the dirt,face first)

Froozer:(with a small bit of his remaining energy,he lifts himself up) Such...power...How...did you...get it? (his face is bleeding like bleeding should be.(a LOT of blood,his eyes are bleeding a bit as well))Tell me how..you got...it...(falls to the ground,unconcious,and on the last of his strength)

JSS4 Gotenks:I trained,and trained,and trained,each time pushing myself to the limit,and beyond.*smirk* Now,taste this! (powers up greatly,and gets his arms in a position of half Final Flash and half Kamehameha) I call this oen...(slams both his arms down in front of him,and charges energy) The Final Kamehameha! (the energy builds up greatly,and fires to reveal a long,wide beam of Extreme power.As it got closer to Froozer...)

Froozer:Ha! (vanishes seconds before the blast approaches him,and appears behind Gotenks)You fool!You cannot beat me! (whacks him with a Double Axe Handle,knocking Gotenks face into the dirt)

LSS4 Gotens:ARGHHH!YOU SCUMBAG! (backflips up,behind Froozer,and charges him through the ground,and eventually pass through a mountain)

Froozer:You worthless Saiyan trash...(is getting his face smearked in rocks)

LSS4 Gotenks:Maybe so,but at least im stronger than you! (starts continously throwing Ki blasts into Froozer's back,where his tail used to be)

Froozer:I will not be defeated! (teleports again and starts kicking Gotenks around from the behind) You will die!

LSS4 Gotenks:Not if i can help it! (he teleports first,then Froozer does,and both start jumping around everywhere throwing punches and kicks,each both being blocked,guarded,and contact.Both eventually stop,and lock hand-to-hand,and charging up energy) There's no way i can lose to someone as weak as you,for I am Gotenks!The strongest warrior ever! (his power increases higher,lightning surging through his body onto Froozer)

Froozer:Neither will i,as i will NOT lose to a Saiyan Monkey like you! (his power goes even higher,and about reaches the same as Gotenks)

LSS4 Gotenks:You may now be as strong as me now,but we can still beat you! (they both go back to teleport fighting again,each getting blocked this time)

To be contiued...in part 4,the final part of the chapter!

*Speechless....* That should sum it up.

Wait,i spot something wrong at the bottom.Take a closer look...I'll have to edit it.

I noticed that it's kinda hard not to...

What's "kind hard" ?Making mistakes?

Kinda hard to not notice you made that mistake when you read through it I didn't mean any offense.

You didn't do any sort of offense whatsoever.

Trivia question:What would happen if Sonic,Tails and Knuckles were to break into SSMB and pick a fight with the entire game characters?It would equal Chaos,destruction,and Super Sonic killing everything.

Whould it now?

If you think about it,if Sonic's power level in DBZ would be equal to how strong,fast,and intelligent he is,he obviously has over 1 mil in normal.As Super,he must get at least 50 mil in power.Think about it,Super Sonic = Super Saiyan Sonic.

you might be right, you might be wrong, but there is one problem... even with all the speed, sonic still cant fly, unless im sadly mistaken.

Actually I think Sonic can fly as Super Sonic.