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~Ray~ Posted: 17:43 Mar11 2005
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i will be back saturday or today hope you like the Comic
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 17:49 Mar11 2005
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LIKE IT I LOVED IT DUDE!!!!!!!!
THE 2 MOST POWERFUL SAIYANS IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Xyber Posted: 20:05 Mar11 2005
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You have a fan...(DBZ_DUDE)...
Sighs...
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 20:36 Mar11 2005
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GOT THAT RIGHT!!!
THE 2 MOST POWERFUL SAIYANS IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Ray~ Posted: 20:41 Mar11 2005
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im back
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 20:42 Mar11 2005
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HI
THE 2 MOST POWERFUL SAIYANS IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Ray~ Posted: 20:42 Mar11 2005
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the next one may be today im not sure
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 20:45 Mar11 2005
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IM YOUR BIGGEST FAN ~RAY~!!!!!!!1
THE 2 MOST POWERFUL SAIYANS IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Ray~ Posted: 20:46 Mar11 2005
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so dbz dude if you love this comic so much i would like to know do you want me to make the next episode now?
~Ray~ Posted: 20:46 Mar11 2005
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so dbz dude if you love this comic so much i would like to know do you want me to make the next episode now?
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 20:47 Mar11 2005
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SURE AWSO0ME!!!
THE 2 MOST POWERFUL SAIYANS IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Ray~ Posted: 20:49 Mar11 2005
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ok i will now
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 20:49 Mar11 2005
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YES!!!!!!!!!
THE 2 MOST POWERFUL SAIYANS IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 20:59 Mar11 2005
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UUMMM WHERE IS IT???
THE 2 MOST POWERFUL SAIYANS IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Ray~ Posted: 21:11 Mar11 2005
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im almost done
~Ray~ Posted: 21:19 Mar11 2005
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done look down
Chapter 5
Rayku and Vegeta return to Earth
Rayku:well im back on earth
Vegeta:great so now what
Rayku: lets go find Goku and Ray
Vegeta:fine
(Rayku and Vegeta found Goku and Ray)
Ray:dad your ok I mean Rayku
Rayku: yeah I came back to earth
Goku:great so you and Vegeta got to come home
Rayku and Vegeta: for 5 days
Goku:what
Rayku and Vegeta: for 5 daysssss
Goku: well we better use our time wisely then
2:13 pm day 1
Goku:Vegeta how about me and Ray verse you and Rayku?
Rayku:yeah that would be
Vegeta: shut up I will choose my decision soon enough ... Fine
Rayku:yesss
Goku:alright lets go then
(pow kaboom kamhama hyoke haaaaaaaaaa kennnnnnnn)
Goku: tough battle
Ray: but we won
Vegeta: we lost because of you
Rayku: hey I cant beat Ray
Vegeta: Kakorot was simple
Ray: admit it we won
Rayku and Vegeta: we did stupid
Ray: hey I was just saying admit it
Rayku:whetever
Ray: you better respect me as your son at least
Rayku: if I am your father who did I get with or Marry
Ray: this girl named Sango
Rayku: Sango!!!!!!!! Thats who I married with
Ray: yeah
Rayku I dont know if im going crazy or hearing things
Ray:come Rayku I need to tell you secretly
Rayku:what
Ray:Sango has had a crush on you since 6th grade thats what she told me dont tell her though
Rayku:ok (wow I never knew she had a cruch on me thats why she married me in the future)
Ray:ok keep it a secret
Rayku:fine
Goku and vegeta leave
Ray:lets leave since they left
Rayku: nah id rather stay here and train
Ray:ok fine be that way
Well now that Rayku and Vegeta returned who knows who else returned next time on this comic ???? and ?????? fuse to make ?????? and defeat ??????? who knows what will happen I do
Chapter 6
Gogeta comes
Chapter 5
Rayku and Vegeta return to Earth
Rayku:well im back on earth
Vegeta:great so now what
Rayku: lets go find Goku and Ray
Vegeta:fine
(Rayku and Vegeta found Goku and Ray)
Ray:dad your ok I mean Rayku
Rayku: yeah I came back to earth
Goku:great so you and Vegeta got to come home
Rayku and Vegeta: for 5 days
Goku:what
Rayku and Vegeta: for 5 daysssss
Goku: well we better use our time wisely then
2:13 pm day 1
Goku:Vegeta how about me and Ray verse you and Rayku?
Rayku:yeah that would be
Vegeta: shut up I will choose my decision soon enough ... Fine
Rayku:yesss
Goku:alright lets go then
(pow kaboom kamhama hyoke haaaaaaaaaa kennnnnnnn)
Goku: tough battle
Ray: but we won
Vegeta: we lost because of you
Rayku: hey I cant beat Ray
Vegeta: Kakorot was simple
Ray: admit it we won
Rayku and Vegeta: we did stupid
Ray: hey I was just saying admit it
Rayku:whetever
Ray: you better respect me as your son at least
Rayku: if I am your father who did I get with or Marry
Ray: this girl named Sango
Rayku: Sango!!!!!!!! Thats who I married with
Ray: yeah
Rayku I dont know if im going crazy or hearing things
Ray:come Rayku I need to tell you secretly
Rayku:what
Ray:Sango has had a crush on you since 6th grade thats what she told me dont tell her though
Rayku:ok (wow I never knew she had a cruch on me thats why she married me in the future)
Ray:ok keep it a secret
Rayku:fine
Goku and vegeta leave
Ray:lets leave since they left
Rayku: nah id rather stay here and train
Ray:ok fine be that way
Well now that Rayku and Vegeta returned who knows who else returned next time on this comic ???? and ?????? fuse to make ?????? and defeat ??????? who knows what will happen I do
Chapter 6
Gogeta comes
~Ray~ Posted: 21:22 Mar11 2005
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how is it?
~Ray~ Posted: 21:23 Mar11 2005
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Villans in the next few chapters in order (no info)(note dont say I spoiled the next chapter cause youre the one reading)
Janemba
Cooler
Majin Vegeta
Evil Rayku
Janemba
Cooler
Majin Vegeta
Evil Rayku
~Ray~ Posted: 21:46 Mar11 2005
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episode 6 is under way
~Ray~ Posted: 21:53 Mar11 2005
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Chapter 6
Gogeta comes
Day 5 comes today
Goku:well Vegeta travling to HFIL with you was a great idea
???:roarrrrrrrrrr
Vegeta:what the Hell was that?
Goku:I dont know but it sounded dangerous
???: fight me fight meeeeeeee
Goku:come on vegeta lets go find that beast
Vegeta: alright kakorot lets go
So they went and found a beast called Janemba
Janemba:Roarrrrrrrrrrrr fight me now!!!!!!!!!!
Goku:lets fight him haaaaaaaaaaaa
Vegeta: right haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss3 Goku:alright then lets go
Ss2 Vegeta: Kakorot wait who is that he has in his hand
Ss3 Goku: uuuuhh its Rayku!!!!!!!!
???: nobody hurts my dad Hyoken waveeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss3 Goku: nice job Ray you beat him
Ray: yeah simple
Janemba:errrrrrrrrr
Ss3 Goku :Ray behine you
Ray:what the
Janemba uses a power that knocks ray out and grabed him
Ss3 Goku: ohno we better fight him
Goku and Vegeta fight but they are too weak to beat him so Goku asks Vegeta to fuse
Piccon: you ******* Janemba ill kill you haaaaaaa
Janemba: dieeeee you foolsssss
Goku and Vegeta: fuuuuu sioooonnnnnnn haaaaaaaa
Gogeta:now we will kill you spirttaul beam of deathhhhhh
Janemba:nooooooo how can this be?
Gogeta:yes we beat him
???:you may have beat him but not me
Gogeta turns around
Gogeta:uuhhhh its Cooler no problem I will kill him easily haaaaaaaaaaa
Cooler:yes im dead because of Goku that saiyan is going to pay hes a dumbass punk saiyan
Gogeta unfused
Goku:&
Cooler:Goku its you now its time to dieeeee
So they fought and Vegeta worked with Goku to beat Cooler so they succeded on winning
Now two Villans down 2 to go how willGoku or Vegeta win these next two or will Vegeta be a battle next time Goku fights ????? ??????
Chapter 7
Is Rayku dead or alive
Chapter 8 is
Gokus anger
Gogeta comes
Day 5 comes today
Goku:well Vegeta travling to HFIL with you was a great idea
???:roarrrrrrrrrr
Vegeta:what the Hell was that?
Goku:I dont know but it sounded dangerous
???: fight me fight meeeeeeee
Goku:come on vegeta lets go find that beast
Vegeta: alright kakorot lets go
So they went and found a beast called Janemba
Janemba:Roarrrrrrrrrrrr fight me now!!!!!!!!!!
Goku:lets fight him haaaaaaaaaaaa
Vegeta: right haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss3 Goku:alright then lets go
Ss2 Vegeta: Kakorot wait who is that he has in his hand
Ss3 Goku: uuuuhh its Rayku!!!!!!!!
???: nobody hurts my dad Hyoken waveeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss3 Goku: nice job Ray you beat him
Ray: yeah simple
Janemba:errrrrrrrrr
Ss3 Goku :Ray behine you
Ray:what the
Janemba uses a power that knocks ray out and grabed him
Ss3 Goku: ohno we better fight him
Goku and Vegeta fight but they are too weak to beat him so Goku asks Vegeta to fuse
Piccon: you ******* Janemba ill kill you haaaaaaa
Janemba: dieeeee you foolsssss
Goku and Vegeta: fuuuuu sioooonnnnnnn haaaaaaaa
Gogeta:now we will kill you spirttaul beam of deathhhhhh
Janemba:nooooooo how can this be?
Gogeta:yes we beat him
???:you may have beat him but not me
Gogeta turns around
Gogeta:uuhhhh its Cooler no problem I will kill him easily haaaaaaaaaaa
Cooler:yes im dead because of Goku that saiyan is going to pay hes a dumbass punk saiyan
Gogeta unfused
Goku:&
Cooler:Goku its you now its time to dieeeee
So they fought and Vegeta worked with Goku to beat Cooler so they succeded on winning
Now two Villans down 2 to go how willGoku or Vegeta win these next two or will Vegeta be a battle next time Goku fights ????? ??????
Chapter 7
Is Rayku dead or alive
Chapter 8 is
Gokus anger
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