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Rayku Posted: 16:38 Mar22 2005
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thanks guys so theres only 10 more to go then Future Saga
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 18:07 Mar22 2005
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yes and then ill learn some new tricks and be able to go to USSJ17!!!ok?
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Rayku Posted: 15:46 Mar23 2005
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ok sure
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 16:14 Mar23 2005
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Tnx!
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DBZ_DUDE Posted: 17:35 Mar23 2005
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So uuuhhh where is it???
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Rayku Posted: 19:15 Mar23 2005
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oh sorry i didnt know you guys wanted me to... you know make the rest of the COmic ok ill get to it
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 20:11 Mar23 2005
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Chapter 30 (Part A)
1 year later
Jay:well,so far a year has pasted by and none of the enemies we killed have come back to life
Kid Rayku:yeah I know
Vegetunks:hey, where did they go any way
Z World
Cell:errrrr those fools how could we get killed by those kids?
Frieza:they?re stronger then us that?s why
Cooler:well when we come back to life,we better be ready to kill them so lets train
Dark Kid:I hate them all Jay,Rayku and Vegetunks errrrr they all give me a headack or worse they Kill me twice I would be never exist but since I went to Z World im alive forever
Earth
Jay:ohh well it don?t matter anyway
Kid Rayku:yeah your right but still why do we care for them there all evil anyway so we shouldn?t have a care for them
Vegetunks:yup
Jay:I see your point yeah you are right Rayku
Kid Goku:hey you guys where are all the Villains?
Jay:they?re dead
Kid Goku:wow so many warriors dead too bad I wanted to kill some of them
Kid Rayku:well nobody so far has came back to life
Jay+Vegetunks:?
Kid Rayku:hey I have and idea
Jay: what
Z World
Cooler:hey I can go to Earth
Frieza:wait Brother I cant go
Cell: nether can I
Dark Kid:none of us can go but Cooler
Cooler:yeah cause I didn?t get killed twice
Frieza:I didn?t get killed twice and im still stuck here
Cooler: oh well
(Cooler leaves)
ohh no Cooler has escaped from Z World will he hurt any of our Heroes or shall he surprise them or get the jump on them?
Next time on Dbzw he will come back to life and Rayku and Goku will use there power to defeat Cooler and Jay and Vegetunks may need to help
Chapter 30 (Part B)
1 year later
Chapter 30 (Part B)
1 Year Later
Kid Rayku: hey how about me and Goku tour around this new city
Kid Goku:yeah that works
Jay: hmmm I don?t know but hey there are no evil doers so go ahead ill see you guys later
(Jay and Vegetunks leave)
Kid Rayku:so Goku where should we go?
Kid Goku:I don?t know maybe?.. grassland since its nice out there lets look for it
Kid Rayku:ok
They travel to the grassland
GrassLand
Rayku and Goku relax
Boommmmmmmmmm (a big boom) (huge explosions)
Kid Rayku:what the heck?
Kid Goku: whats happening?
???:mahahahahahahahaha mahahahahahaha dieeeeeeeee SuperNova!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kid Rayku:who are you and why are you here?
Cooler:I am Cooler the one you killed and now im back for revenge Goku
Kid Goku:uhh
Kid Rayku: shoot I thought you were already dead
Kid Goku:its either fight or die haaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kid Rayku: your right Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss1 K. Goku:now im going to fight
Cooler:I see your back to your kid ages Goku
Ss1 K. Goku:yeah I am but oh well ha!!!!!
(explosions battle sounds punching kicking and more explosions)
ss1 K. Rayku: (whoa! Gokus doing good out there)
ss1 K. Goku:I haven?t had I fight like this in awhile
ss1 K. Goku:Hyyyoookkenn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cooler: mahahahahahahahahaha your too weak Kid im way stringer then that
Ss1 K. Rayku: errrr, ha!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss1 K. Goku:whoa hes really strong (man Rayku your using a bunch of power)
Ss3 K. Rayku:now how do you like this Hyyoookenn!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cooler:oh no the blast is too strong ahhhhhhhhhh
Jay:Goku,Rayku are you guys o..k??
Ss3 K. Rayku:yeah we could do it
Kid Goku:it was no sweatKid Rayku: yeah I know
Whoa Cooler came back to life and Kid Goku and Rayku beat him alone
Next time on Dbzw 6 mounths will have pasted,
after another warrior will Come back to life I
think the last one.
Chapter 31 (Part A)
Cybers back
1 year later
Jay:well,so far a year has pasted by and none of the enemies we killed have come back to life
Kid Rayku:yeah I know
Vegetunks:hey, where did they go any way
Z World
Cell:errrrr those fools how could we get killed by those kids?
Frieza:they?re stronger then us that?s why
Cooler:well when we come back to life,we better be ready to kill them so lets train
Dark Kid:I hate them all Jay,Rayku and Vegetunks errrrr they all give me a headack or worse they Kill me twice I would be never exist but since I went to Z World im alive forever
Earth
Jay:ohh well it don?t matter anyway
Kid Rayku:yeah your right but still why do we care for them there all evil anyway so we shouldn?t have a care for them
Vegetunks:yup
Jay:I see your point yeah you are right Rayku
Kid Goku:hey you guys where are all the Villains?
Jay:they?re dead
Kid Goku:wow so many warriors dead too bad I wanted to kill some of them
Kid Rayku:well nobody so far has came back to life
Jay+Vegetunks:?
Kid Rayku:hey I have and idea
Jay: what
Z World
Cooler:hey I can go to Earth
Frieza:wait Brother I cant go
Cell: nether can I
Dark Kid:none of us can go but Cooler
Cooler:yeah cause I didn?t get killed twice
Frieza:I didn?t get killed twice and im still stuck here
Cooler: oh well
(Cooler leaves)
ohh no Cooler has escaped from Z World will he hurt any of our Heroes or shall he surprise them or get the jump on them?
Next time on Dbzw he will come back to life and Rayku and Goku will use there power to defeat Cooler and Jay and Vegetunks may need to help
Chapter 30 (Part B)
1 year later
Chapter 30 (Part B)
1 Year Later
Kid Rayku: hey how about me and Goku tour around this new city
Kid Goku:yeah that works
Jay: hmmm I don?t know but hey there are no evil doers so go ahead ill see you guys later
(Jay and Vegetunks leave)
Kid Rayku:so Goku where should we go?
Kid Goku:I don?t know maybe?.. grassland since its nice out there lets look for it
Kid Rayku:ok
They travel to the grassland
GrassLand
Rayku and Goku relax
Boommmmmmmmmm (a big boom) (huge explosions)
Kid Rayku:what the heck?
Kid Goku: whats happening?
???:mahahahahahahahaha mahahahahahaha dieeeeeeeee SuperNova!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kid Rayku:who are you and why are you here?
Cooler:I am Cooler the one you killed and now im back for revenge Goku
Kid Goku:uhh
Kid Rayku: shoot I thought you were already dead
Kid Goku:its either fight or die haaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kid Rayku: your right Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss1 K. Goku:now im going to fight
Cooler:I see your back to your kid ages Goku
Ss1 K. Goku:yeah I am but oh well ha!!!!!
(explosions battle sounds punching kicking and more explosions)
ss1 K. Rayku: (whoa! Gokus doing good out there)
ss1 K. Goku:I haven?t had I fight like this in awhile
ss1 K. Goku:Hyyyoookkenn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cooler: mahahahahahahahahaha your too weak Kid im way stringer then that
Ss1 K. Rayku: errrr, ha!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss1 K. Goku:whoa hes really strong (man Rayku your using a bunch of power)
Ss3 K. Rayku:now how do you like this Hyyoookenn!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cooler:oh no the blast is too strong ahhhhhhhhhh
Jay:Goku,Rayku are you guys o..k??
Ss3 K. Rayku:yeah we could do it
Kid Goku:it was no sweatKid Rayku: yeah I know
Whoa Cooler came back to life and Kid Goku and Rayku beat him alone
Next time on Dbzw 6 mounths will have pasted,
after another warrior will Come back to life I
think the last one.
Chapter 31 (Part A)
Cybers back
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 21:40 Mar23 2005
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That was totaly wicked!!!
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die_zombie Posted: 23:37 Mar23 2005
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i think this should be moved to a dbz forum...
Join this site...http://s14.invisionfree.com/ChaoticRoleplayRealm/index.php?
and this one...http://gameknot.com/?rfr=diezombie...when you sign up the second one, where it says referals by, type in diezombie
and this one...http://gameknot.com/?rfr=diezombie...when you sign up the second one, where it says referals by, type in diezombie
Rayku Posted: 13:48 Mar24 2005
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this is a dbz forum though
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
darkboarder_77 Posted: 13:52 Mar24 2005
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There is no current Dragon Ball Z forum. There may be one in the future, though. I will bring this up with Rich.
Rayku, this is General Chat. This is a forum for anything relevent that is within reason.
Rayku, this is General Chat. This is a forum for anything relevent that is within reason.
Owner of the formerly ranked number one Halo PC modded server in the world, FRIGID MASS CTF WAR. Joiner-friendly mods and five-minute hotfixes = loyal clientele.
Been here since February 2004. It's May 2022 as of writing this. Wish Rich would revive this place. Guess I'm only here for the nostalgia now.
Been here since February 2004. It's May 2022 as of writing this. Wish Rich would revive this place. Guess I'm only here for the nostalgia now.
abcdefg Posted: 14:55 Mar24 2005
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Dont be sad this took awhile to do i find it wicked
Can you guess who i realy like on this site??? If you can tell me.
Rayku Posted: 15:06 Mar24 2005
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next chapter will be here in lik one minute dbz_dude
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 15:36 Mar24 2005
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Chapter 31 (Part A)
Cybers back
Kid Rayku:well its been 6th mounth ever since the last evil doer was killed
Kid Goku: I know its so boring now that there all gone
Kid Rayku:I would like to face them but in my older form cause im way stronger then this
Kid Goku:hey I enjoy being a kid its pretty cool to be a kid again
Kid Rayku:yeah but I hate being 7 instead of 14
Jay:wow no villains and its been so long
Kid Rayku:I don?t want any Villains if I wanted Villains I would ask but still besides its been 6th mounth and im still not back to my normal size
Vegetunks:well you better get use to it cause we aren?t looking for the z balls nore the dragonballs
Kid Rayku:why?
Jay:cause we don?t want to waste time doing it
Kid Rayku:hey there all at Kamis lookout
Jay: how do you know?
Kid Rayku: cause the place where they were used is where they scatter at
Jay:ok so you go and look there and me and Vegetunks will stay with Goku
Kid Rayku:fine then see ya
Kid Goku:bye Rayku
(Rayku leaves)
Kamis lookout
Kami:why hello Rayku its been awhile what do you need?
Kid Rayku: hey can I look for the z Balls here?
Kami: sure
Rayku looks for the Z balls and finds 6 of them and then somebody knocks him out
Rayku wakes up at this wired place
Cyber:hello cus mahahahahahahahaha
Kid Rayku: Cyber what are you doing here?
Cyber: looking for the Z balls too bad I found the last one
Kid Rayku:errrr well aren?t you going to let me go?
Cyber:not after you killed me while you were fourteen
Kid Rayku:so what are you getting revenge or something?
Cyber: yeah cus I wanted to kill you ever since you killed me
Kid Rayku:why don?t you think this over and set me free?
Cyber:cause doing that wouldent be having revenge
Kid Rayku: where are we though?
Cyber: im in Jason city at my house
Kid Rayku:well bad place to pick to take to
Cyber: why is that?
Kid Rayku: cause my older bro lives in this city matter a fact he owns the city
Cyber:yeah whats he gonna do?
Kid Rayku: hes way stronger and bigger then you
Cyber: like he could beat me
Kid Rayku:he could I seen him beat Dark Kid in 9 seconds
Cyber: well that may be impressive but I think im still stronger
Kid Rayku: whatever cyber
Cyber: you better not disrespect me im older and stronger then you and I would be even is you were 14 cause im now 16 instead of 15
Kid Rayku:so what if you older I don?t care
(Note: Rayku is chained up and cant move)
Cyber:I said don?t disrespect
Cyber punches Rayku in the sto(a)mack
Kid Rayku: ah that hurt
Cyber:if you want another then keep disrespecting me
Kid Rayku: (aww man im too weak to face him now that im a kid)
Cyber: you better start talking or ill keep punching
Kid Rayku: fine I will then JASON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cyber: shut up shut up!
Kid Rayku: JASON!!!!!
Cyber does another punch
Kid Rayku:ahhhhhhhh JASON!!!!! Help!!!!!!!
Jason breaks in through a window
Jason:so I knew you were hiding something Cyber you may be family but I will still kill you!!
Now that Jason has arrived should he help out Rayku or shall he fail to beat Cyber?
Next time on Dragonball z warriors Cyber and Jason will have a showdown and after awhile of waiting Jay will look for Rayku and wont find him for awhile.
Chapter 31 (Part B)
Cybers back
Chapter 31 (Part B)
Cybers back
Cyber:kill me mahahahahaha
Kid Rayku:hey Jason glad to see you
Jason:good to see you too bro,now to take care of him Hyyyyooookeennnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! (its hyokeen for Jason and Jack)
Cyber was destroyed
Meanwhile
with Jay,Vegetunks and Goku
Jay:where the hecks Rayku?
Vegetunks:lets go look for him
Jay:no im going its like im his dad but im watching him until hes back to 14
Vegetunks:oh fine I will wait here then
Jay goes and searchs for Rayku
In Jason city
Jason:now that hes gone im going to untie you
Jason un ties Rayku
Kid Rayku:thanks Jason
Jason:wait a sec why are you so small you know you?re a kid
Kid Rayku: uhh well I got turned into a kid by Shenron z shenron
Jason:you mean the Z b-a-l-l-s turned you little
Kid Rayku:yeah
Now that Jason and Rayku are united they killed Cyber
Next time on Dbzw Jay and Vegetunks will go to Z World and they will kill the evil doers.
Cybers back
Kid Rayku:well its been 6th mounth ever since the last evil doer was killed
Kid Goku: I know its so boring now that there all gone
Kid Rayku:I would like to face them but in my older form cause im way stronger then this
Kid Goku:hey I enjoy being a kid its pretty cool to be a kid again
Kid Rayku:yeah but I hate being 7 instead of 14
Jay:wow no villains and its been so long
Kid Rayku:I don?t want any Villains if I wanted Villains I would ask but still besides its been 6th mounth and im still not back to my normal size
Vegetunks:well you better get use to it cause we aren?t looking for the z balls nore the dragonballs
Kid Rayku:why?
Jay:cause we don?t want to waste time doing it
Kid Rayku:hey there all at Kamis lookout
Jay: how do you know?
Kid Rayku: cause the place where they were used is where they scatter at
Jay:ok so you go and look there and me and Vegetunks will stay with Goku
Kid Rayku:fine then see ya
Kid Goku:bye Rayku
(Rayku leaves)
Kamis lookout
Kami:why hello Rayku its been awhile what do you need?
Kid Rayku: hey can I look for the z Balls here?
Kami: sure
Rayku looks for the Z balls and finds 6 of them and then somebody knocks him out
Rayku wakes up at this wired place
Cyber:hello cus mahahahahahahahaha
Kid Rayku: Cyber what are you doing here?
Cyber: looking for the Z balls too bad I found the last one
Kid Rayku:errrr well aren?t you going to let me go?
Cyber:not after you killed me while you were fourteen
Kid Rayku:so what are you getting revenge or something?
Cyber: yeah cus I wanted to kill you ever since you killed me
Kid Rayku:why don?t you think this over and set me free?
Cyber:cause doing that wouldent be having revenge
Kid Rayku: where are we though?
Cyber: im in Jason city at my house
Kid Rayku:well bad place to pick to take to
Cyber: why is that?
Kid Rayku: cause my older bro lives in this city matter a fact he owns the city
Cyber:yeah whats he gonna do?
Kid Rayku: hes way stronger and bigger then you
Cyber: like he could beat me
Kid Rayku:he could I seen him beat Dark Kid in 9 seconds
Cyber: well that may be impressive but I think im still stronger
Kid Rayku: whatever cyber
Cyber: you better not disrespect me im older and stronger then you and I would be even is you were 14 cause im now 16 instead of 15
Kid Rayku:so what if you older I don?t care
(Note: Rayku is chained up and cant move)
Cyber:I said don?t disrespect
Cyber punches Rayku in the sto(a)mack
Kid Rayku: ah that hurt
Cyber:if you want another then keep disrespecting me
Kid Rayku: (aww man im too weak to face him now that im a kid)
Cyber: you better start talking or ill keep punching
Kid Rayku: fine I will then JASON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cyber: shut up shut up!
Kid Rayku: JASON!!!!!
Cyber does another punch
Kid Rayku:ahhhhhhhh JASON!!!!! Help!!!!!!!
Jason breaks in through a window
Jason:so I knew you were hiding something Cyber you may be family but I will still kill you!!
Now that Jason has arrived should he help out Rayku or shall he fail to beat Cyber?
Next time on Dragonball z warriors Cyber and Jason will have a showdown and after awhile of waiting Jay will look for Rayku and wont find him for awhile.
Chapter 31 (Part B)
Cybers back
Chapter 31 (Part B)
Cybers back
Cyber:kill me mahahahahaha
Kid Rayku:hey Jason glad to see you
Jason:good to see you too bro,now to take care of him Hyyyyooookeennnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! (its hyokeen for Jason and Jack)
Cyber was destroyed
Meanwhile
with Jay,Vegetunks and Goku
Jay:where the hecks Rayku?
Vegetunks:lets go look for him
Jay:no im going its like im his dad but im watching him until hes back to 14
Vegetunks:oh fine I will wait here then
Jay goes and searchs for Rayku
In Jason city
Jason:now that hes gone im going to untie you
Jason un ties Rayku
Kid Rayku:thanks Jason
Jason:wait a sec why are you so small you know you?re a kid
Kid Rayku: uhh well I got turned into a kid by Shenron z shenron
Jason:you mean the Z b-a-l-l-s turned you little
Kid Rayku:yeah
Now that Jason and Rayku are united they killed Cyber
Next time on Dbzw Jay and Vegetunks will go to Z World and they will kill the evil doers.
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 16:35 Mar24 2005
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2 words:LOVE IT!!!
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Rayku Posted: 16:39 Mar24 2005
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thanks dbz dude you know youmake a great fan
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 16:52 Mar24 2005
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hey Dbz due can you do me a favor?
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 17:03 Mar24 2005
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is it quiet in here or what
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 17:05 Mar24 2005
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im really starting to get lonley now
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 17:05 Mar24 2005
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I dont know and what is the favour?Anything i can acomplish is ok!!!
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