The longest chapter ever so far chapter 13
(i think)
Chapter 13
Will Ray make it?
Rayku:I cant last much longer Vegeta
Ss4 Vegeta: keep control of your power so you don?t use it all at once
Rayku:I cant, just hurting Janemba uses all my power
Ss4 Vegeta: your pathitic
Rayku:no im just not that strong
Ss4 Vegeta:he its not my fault your weak blame your parents
Rayku:hey don?t say its there fault cause there not here
Ss4 Vegeta:don?t you mean dead
Rayku:whatever
Ray keeps on traveling to find Rayku
Ray:hey theres a big monster like King Kai said
(King Kai:now make sure you watch our for a big monster)
(Ray:ok I will look out for one)
Ray:wow that beast is huge hey I sence Vegeta and My dad
Ss4 Vegeta:Rayku get ready to fight
Rayku:y
Ss4 Vegeta:cause some bodies coming
Rayku:I cant I cant get up
Ss4 Vegeta:whoa this guy is so powerful
???:dad is it you
ss4 Vegeta:Trunks?
???:no its me Ray
ss4 Vegeta:haaa ???..
Rayku:Ray howd you get here?
Ray:Goku helped me get here then King Kai guided me
Rayku:ok at least I can reast knowing your ok
Ray:you rest at least I know your ok
Rayku:hey I need some power do you think you can give me some
Ray:ok
Ray gave Rayku some power
Rayku:alright now haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss3 Rayku:ok Vegeta lets kill this guy
Vegeta was on the ground from a hit
Ss3 Rayku:uhoh
Ray:don?t worry dad but how did you get super saiyan 3?
Ss3 Rayku:ummmm he made me angry and I used super saiyan 3
Ray:don?t lie to me you know I can hurt and kill you dad
Ss3 Rayku:yeah I know but protect me right now
Ray:ok
Janemba:someone fight me
Ray:ok I will fight him
Rayku:thanks son
Rayku started to rest
Ray and Janemba started to fight
Ray: man he s tough but I will keep this up until my dad wakes up
So they started battling once again
Janemba:this guy is stronger than I thought
Ray:ha it looks like im going to beat you
Janemba:trapper balls
Ray:what the?
Ray got traped by one of the balls so did Rayku
Janemba:now that your trap I will attack your father and kill him final destruction!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rayku:what the I cant move im traped in this ball!! No!!!!!!!!!!!
Vegeta:final flash!!!!!
Janemba:you people love annoying me don?t you errrrrrr!!!!!!!!! Haaa haaa haaa die Vegeta
Vegeta:how dare you uhh
Rayku:Vegeta r u ok?
Vegeta:?
Ray:Vegeta errrrr y you!!!!!!!!!
Ss2 Ray:NOW HOW WILL U BEAT ME!!!!!!!!!!!
Janemba:uhhh no please don?t kill me
Ss2 Ray:after you tried to kill Vegeta and my dad!!!!! Never!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hyoken wave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Janemba was eliminated but I fighter was on earth and he was really strong no body knew
Who he or she was he seemed powerful enough to beat Janemba in one blow
Ray:dad do you sence that power?
Rayku:yeah its really powerful
Ray:im going to check on who ever it is come with me
Rayku:I cant im dead for good now
Ray:well dad see ya then
Earth
???:is there any body in this city or what?
Bulma:who are you?
???:my names Jay and im looking for this powerful power
Bulma:Jay why are you here looking for the power this is capsule corporation?
Jay:because I don?t know where else to look yet
Ray:hey who are you
Bulma:he ssaid his name is Jay
Jay:you must be that powerful power I was looking for
Ray:yeah but I was sencing your power
Jay:then why can I still sence the strong power
Ray:so can I
Jay:that?s wired
Ray:hey Jay do you want to hangout with me or someone who needs you
Jay:yeah after I tell my family that I found the strong power I mean you
Ray:ok come back here after
Jay went back to his family in another city
???:so Jay did you find the power
Jay:yeah I found it
???:ok
Jay:alright bro
???:wait before you leave your girlfriend stoped by
Jay:ok thanks
Jay left
Nancy:he Jason do you think we should really let him go out alone
Jason:yeah its ok with me let him take care of himself
Back at Capsule Corp.
Jay:im back
Ray:ok lets go then
Jay:where?
Ray:follow me
Jay follows Ray to Otherworld
Jay:where r we?OtherWorld?
Ray:yeah
Jay:why
Ray:cause my dad may need you to protect him
Jay:why cant you though
Ray:because im not strong enough if Vegeta wasent there with us then my dad wouldn?t be here right now
Jay:ok but I cant do it all day or all the time cause I have school
Ray:ok
Ray:here he is
Jay:that?s him sleeping but he looks like a kid around my age but older
Ray:he is a kid but a teenager
Jay:then why are you taller and older then him?
Ray:because I came from the future
Jay:ok I understand
Ray:so can you watch him for a while?
Jay:ok fine
Jay watches Rayku for time and time until he gets fed up with watching him then he trys to leave and then
Rayku:hey who are you
Jay:my names Jay and your son wanted me to watch you whats his name any way?
Rayku:its Rayku or you can call him Ray like me
Jay:whats your name?
Rayku: its ?Rayku?
Jay:ok Rayku im leaving now see ya man
Rayku:bye Jay
Jay leaves
???:hello Rayku can you here me
Rayku:who are you?
???:im the old Kai or call me Elder Kai
Rayku:ok Elder Kai
Elder Kai:im going to let you have my life in order to go and make sure your son and any body else is safe ok?
Rayku:really alright
Wow what great luck Rayku gets a new life now that the Elder Kai lets him have his life what great luck for Rayku now how will he use his life will he use it will or bad?lets just make sure he doesn?t get himself killed
Chapter 14
Who is Jay
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?