Ok, tomsmiley, tell me what you think of my first major bio:
Mortal Name: Lukas Storm
Demon Name: Umbraextraho
Age: 17 (Demon: Approximately 4,500)
Height: 6'3" (Demon: Variable. At average, 9'4")
Weight: 164 lbs. (Demon: Variable. At average, 362 lbs.)
Weapons: Knives, handguns, and chains as a human. As a demon, his own body, his claws, sabers, wings, tails, and any shadow, is a lethal weapon.
Skills: Very aglie and muscular. He is also able to sense what nearby others may be thinking or doing. He can also fade away, partially or whole, and become invisible to all senses. Umbraextraho's talons can render flesh and pierce diamond without effort.
Magic: Complete mastery and manipulation of shadows. Even the slightest amount of darkness can be used to wipe out a dimension. Umbraextraho is also skilled with flight, wind magic, fire magic, and electrical magic.
Personality: Very hardened. Cares only for himself. Sometimes remains silent in lonliness and depression. When angered, he seeks vengeance and developes a thirst for blood. When delivering judgment, he is fierce, swift, relentless, and unmerciful, even to the most innocent victim. He is never happy nor satisfied with anything. He also harbors a deep hatred for everyone, especially those involved in his mysterious past, all of which are beyond dead. His belief on the meaning of life is for him to end it.
Appearance: Lukas is a young man who usually wears a black shirt under a white jacket, which always seems to be open. Umbraextraho is Latin for Shadow Dragon, so that is what he is. His complete body is shrouded and silhouetted in shadows. The only thing that pierces through the darkness are his crimson, bloodshot eyes with no pupils. The eyes are hypnotic, and those who gaze into them feel a tremendous and unimaginable pain that undoubtedly leads to death.
History: Shadow Dragon Demon Umbraextraho had been spawned from the darkest pit in hell. His spirit fed on the shadows and the souls of the truly unworthy, in hell, the mortal world, even in heaven. His hunger grew as did his lust for power. When he emerged from his pit, he rapidly killed off many, thus increasing his already-infinite power. His meddling eventually got himself in trouble with his superior, Satan. Umbraextraho was left with a choice to cease killing for 10 millenia or be forever cursed by being merged with a mortal human. He replied that it would be impossible for him to survive without killing, so he was sentensed for his marking. The marks then appeared as scars on his host, Lukas Storm. Luke, prior to the curse, lived in one of the most prosperous towns in Terram, now only a distant memory. Once the transformation was completed, Umbraeztraho obliterated the village and everyone in it. In its ruins, he left an oath of revenge, that swore that he would destroy Satan with his bare hands. He carried that burden as he traveled among the rest of the humans, angered and hateful, as well as killing off whoever he could.