Fan Fic: The Freedom of Legendary Pokemon

In the world of pokemon many have been seen, while some remain a mystery. So far in the world of pokemon there have been over 500 pokemon seen by people and they think more exist. Most people have thought to catch all legendary pokemon most people have succeeded, Now there is only 3 legendary pokemon left, Lucario, Mew and Manaphy three pokemon have teamed up to find a trainer to help them, The person they got is Ash Ketchum from pallet Town. Ash has just competed in the Shinnoh championships and has one his way to the finals. So now he begins the championship finals against grey Ash? rival from Shinnoh.

?You ready Pikachu? said Ash calmly.
?go Infernape? said Grey.
?you can go first Grey? said Ash.
?Infernape use Flame blitz? said Grey
?Pikachu Dodge using quick attack, then use volt tackle? said Ash
?Infernape dodge? said Grey
but it was to late as Pikachu?s attack hit Infernape with incredible speed.
?yes, well done Pikachu? said Ash,
?Infernape use Flame Wheel? said Grey.
?Pikachu, jump then use iron tail? said Ash
?infernape you jump too and use brick break? said Grey
?Pikachu hang tough? said Ash as Pikachu fell through a boulder
?Pikachu is unable to battle the victory goes to infernape and the winner is Grey? said the announcer
?no Pikachu? said Ash
?you had no chance? said Grey

?Man that guy, gets on my nerves? said Ash
?is your Pikachu alright? said nurse Joy
?everyone is ok when you?re here nurse joy, as you light up the stars, will you go out with me? said Brock
Nurse Joy blushed, but then Brocks pokemon, Groudant used poison jab on Brock and pulled him away.
?well there goes Brock again? said Dawn
?Lets go? said Ash
?are you sad Ash? asked Dawn
?well ya I just can?t beat Grey no matter how hard I try? said Ash
?you will beat him eventually? said Dawn
?thanks Dawn? said Ash

Just then ash heard a voice
?Dawn did you say something? asked Ash
?no I didn?t ash Why? asked Dawn
?oh no reason? said Ah looking around suspiciously
?Ash what are you doing? said Dawn
?Oh sorry, I don?t know what came over me? said Ash
?Ash? called a creepy voice
?ah, who?s there? said Ash
?Who are you talking to Ash? said Dawn
?hey guys, What?s up? said Brock
?Ash is acting weird? Dawn told Brock
?He acts that way sometimes? said Brock
?Ash over here? said the voice
Ash walked over to where the voice called and Ash found a staff.

?hey Brock, isn?t this the staff I got in that castle before? said Ash
?ya it is? said Brock suspiciously
Just then a shadow appeared at the top of the staff in the crystal ball
?Ah? screamed Dawn
?Ash we need you? said the voice in the crystal ball as a twister appeared sucking Ash into the ball
?Dawn grab Ash now? shouted Brock
?come and help pull Ash? shouted Dawn pulling out her pokeballs
?come on out Sudowoodo and pull Ash? said Brock
?Arcanine help them? said officer Jenny
But just then Ash got sucked into the crystal ball

?where am I? said Ash
?I thought you would remember? said the voice as the person appeared
?Lucario is that you? said Ash
?yes it is Ash, I see you haven?t changed? said Lucario
?how is Mew? Ash said to Lucario
?Mew is here actually? said Lucario as Mew appeared
?hey Mew? said Ash
?ok now Ash we need your help? said Lucario as Manaphy appeared
?what do you need? said Ash
?lately trainers have travelled to sacred pokemon grounds to find legendary pokemon and most of them are now gone, Me Mew and Manaphy are left, we need your help? said Lucario
?ok I will help you? said Ash
?we will be with you only you can see us, till you call us into battle? said Lucario
?ok, but how do I get them back? said Ash disappearing
?make a bet with the trainer if you win they let the legendary free and if you lose you will give them something in return? said Lucario

meanwhile Dawn and Brock were fighting about how to get Ash back, then Ash appeared in front of them.
?Ash what happened? said Brock and Dawn simultaneously
?well I am needed by pokemon because legendary pokemon are being captured and I must get them back? said Ash
?Ash there is a legendary nearby? said Lucario invisible to Dawn and Brock
?where? said Ash
?in front of you walk past now? said Lucario
?hey kid? said Ash
?ya what you want? said the person
?I?m Ash? said Ash
?I?m Jeremy? said Jeremy
?I hear you have a legendary pokemon? said Ash
?how do you know? said Jeremy
?my pokemon told me? said Ash
?let me guess you want to fight him? said Jeremy
?ya, but on one condition? said Ash
?what?s that? said Jeremy
?if I win you release the legendary, and if you win you get anything you want? said Ash
?deal, come on you Groudon? said Jeremy
?come on out Lucario? yelled Ash
?cool? said Jeremy
?you can go first? said Ash
?Groudon use sunny day? said Jeremy
?stay still Lucario? said Ash
?now Groudon use first blast? said Jeremy
?Lucario jump, then use iron tail? said Ash
?Groudon use dig? said Jeremy
?Lucario follow it? said Ash
Lucario followed Groudon in the hole and then the ground cracked as Groudon appeared flying into the air from Lucario?s iron tail
?Groudon no? yelled Jeremy
?now Lucario use aqua sphere? said Ash
?Groudon dodge? said Jeremy
but Groudon was too slow as it weights a lot and got it and fell to the floor
?now Lucario use earthquake? said Ash
?Groudon use dig? said Jeremy
?Jeremy shouldn?t have done that? said Brock
?why? said Dawn
?earthquake can hit pokemon under the ground? sad Brock
?Groudon appeared badly hurt as it fell to the floor
?Groudon is unable to battle, Lucario is the winner and the victory goes to Ash? said the announcer

?now release Groudon? said Ash
?No? said Jeremy
?pikachu use get ready to use thunder? said Ash
?ok fine I will release Groudon? said Jeremy
?ok, lets go guys? said Ash as Jeremy release Groudon

just then ash disappeared again
?Ash well done? said Lucario as Manaphy and Mew cheering with Groudon with them
just then Groudon growls
?Groudon says thank you? said Lucario
?it was no problem? said Ash
"You did well with using my move's Ash" said Lucario
?where are we going next? says Ash
?your heading to Orenburg? said Lucario as Ash and Brock started to disappear
?ok we will head off soon? said Brock
just then Ash and Brock started to disappear
?bye Lucario mew and Manaphy? said Ash and Brock
?ok lets go? said Ash

?Ash its getting dark we should head to a pokemon center now? said Brock
?can you find any on the map Brock? said Dawn
Just then a woman walks by
?excuse me miss do you know where the closest pokemon center is? said Ash
?hi I'm Brock, I'm just visiting and im free for dinner tonight? said Brock
just then Groudant uses poison jab on Brock
?a pokemon center, um?. There isn?t one near here the closest one is like 10 miles in the next town? said the woman
?oh ok? said Ash
?lets camp out? said Dawn
?we might as well? said Ash
?who has the tent? said Brock
?I thought you had the tent? said dawn
?I thought dawn had the tent? said ash
?I thought Ash had the tent? said Brock
?we have to sleep under the stars? said ash

?hey look a bunneri? said dawn
?im gonna catch it ok dawn? said ash
?ya ok Ash? said Dawn
?go Pikachu, use thunder bolt? said Ash
bunnieri dodged using quick attack
?man it's fast? said Brock
?Pikachu use quick attack? said Ash
Pikachus attack hit
?hey bunnieri is looking weak, I think Pikachu?s quick attack was very hard? said Dawn
?go pokeball? yelled Ash
?yes bunnieri was caught? yes Brock
?ok lets camp out now? said Ash

while asleep Ash had a weird dream
?where am I? said Ash
?Ash move you Pikachu now right now? said a voice
just then a pokemon runs up and hits Pikachu with take down
?Pikachu move? yelled Ash
?pika, Pikachu? said Pikachu
?Pikachu move right now? said Ash running towards Pikachu grabbing Pikachu but taking the take down
?ah? yelled ash as he woke up

Ash looked at his stomach where the dream take down was hit and there it was a bruise of a pokemon
?Ash what happened? said Dawn
?I don?t know I was in my dream and I toke a take down and then I woke up, it doesn?t matter lets get back to sleep? said Ash
?I dunno Ash that sounded weird? said Brock lets check it out later? said Brock



End Of Part One



Part two



In the morning when Ash got up Brock and Dawn were staring at him to Ash?s first surprise of the day.
?ah? screamed Ash
?sorry Ash, but we couldn?t sleep when we saw your bruise last night? said Brock looking at Ash
?Did you have any more weird dreams last night Ash? asked Dawn
?No I didn?t? said Ash
?Ash let?s go? said Lucario
?Ok? said Ash quietly
?Where are we heading now Ash? asked Dawn
?We are heading to Orenburg city? said Ash putting on his cap

?Do you want breakfast? asked Nurse Joy knocking on the door of the room where Ash Brock and Dawn were
?No Nurse Joy I only want you? said Brock in love
then Groudant came out of his pokeball and use poison jab on Brock and then took him away from nurse joy.
?Yes please Nurse Joy? said Ash
?Ok it will be done soon? Nurse Joy told them.
?ok we will be out soon? said Ash
?Ok then? said nurse joy walking away to the kitchen

?Hey guys have you seen Pikachu? said Ash worryingly
?No I haven?t seen Pikachu since last night? said Brock
?Pikachu? yelled Ash
Then Ash Brock and Dawn searched the entire pokemon center for Pikachu but she was nowhere in the Pokemon Center then Ash walked outside the Pokemon Center to see Pikachu walking in the forest walking straight out of sight
?Pikachu come back? said Ash following

As Ash followed Pikachu into the forest he didn?t catch up to get Pikachu but instead to see what was going on with Pikachu, In the middle of the forest Pikachu stopped in front of a giant rock, then a pokemon appeared from the back of the rock.
?what pokemon is that? said Ash quietly
then the pokemon charged at Pikachu just like in his dream
?Pikachu move? yelled Ash running to Pikachu
As Ash got to Pikachu he moved in front of Pikachu to protect her and then as took the take down
?Ah? yelled Ash falling onto the forest floor as the Pokemon disappeared from sight.
Ash grabbed Pikachu and walked back to the pokemon center with Pikachu in his hands
?Ash, what happened? asked Brock

As Ash told Brock what happened Pikachu woke up and ran away from something, then a cloud of smoke appeared behind Pikachu and then disappeared with Pikachu along with it
?Pikachu? yelled Ash
?Not again? said Brock as Ash ran off again but not getting far as Ash fainted just before he turned a corner
?Ash? said Dawn
?What?s Wrong? asked nurse Joy
?Ash fainted? said Dawn as Brock ran after Pikachu
?Get him to bed Dawn? said nurse Joy
?Ok? said Dawn

?Pikachu? yelled Brock still running to find a trace of Pikachu Brock searched the infirmary, and all the bedrooms and at the reception of the pokemon center but Pikachu was nowhere to be seen, then Brock looked outside for Pikachu searching the entire town and still no sign of Pikachu, and then Brock looked up and saw team rocket?s balloon, Brock ran through a building to get to the roof and jumped on team rockets balloon

?Give back Pikachu? said Brock
?Ah the twerp? said Jessie
?No way we finally have Pikachu and we are not giving Pikachu back? said James
?Ya so get off? said meowth
?Not without Pikachu I?m not? said Brock grabbing Pikachu and jumping onto a building
?Go sviper use poison tail? said Jessie
?Go Cacnea? said James
?Go sudowoodo? said Brock
then Cacnea turned around and grabbed onto James
?Get off me and attack with neddle arm? said James
Cacnea and sviper both attacked sudowoodo at the same time
?Use Rock throw? said Brock
as sudowoodo used rock throw Pikachu used thunder to send Jessie James Meowth Cacnea and Sviper flying away
?Ok Pikachu lets get back to Ash? said Brock

as Brock got back to the pokemon center, Ash got up
?Pikachu? yelled Ash when he woke up
?Ash it?s ok Pikachu is here? said Brock as Pikachu jumped onto Ash
?Ok now lets get to Orenburg? said Ash
?Ok? said Dawn and Brock


« Last edited by max gamer on Aug 27th 2007 »

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i will write more pan i can promise you that

If it's going to be even remotely like this, I'd rather you didn't.

i am gonna write more and it will be more discriptive Cez

I have sugestions for you max, paragraphs are needed, caps for the important words like first word of a sentence or a character or a location and peroids. Other than that, I'll say you got a great idea, but have hard time trying to get it into words, don't worry that's a writer's block, so take your time correcting, I know you can fix it, just take your time.

ok thanks superman5
i do take my time to figure out what to say

hmm. funny way to start an RP.

this isnt a rp this is a fan fiction

yeah, he's right

i put up more of the fan fic guys

Its better, and I have a suggestion for you, for chapter 3 you post it, ok, that way, nobody gets confused which posts are for chapter 1 or 2.

post it and no editing the first post is it

yeah, thats what what most people do anyway, because they don't want people get confused if you fixed it or added another chapter.

oh ok then thats for the suggestion superman5

Ever hear of punctuation?

You have no chance of getting the mod spot here if you bump old topics.
Closure needed please

Done and done.