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here goes...
Chapter 1: new foes
it is 10 years after black hole has been complety vanquished,or so it seems...
Recently a new force dubbed "The circle" have invaded 3 countries,but the most ferociouis attacks are in macro land. People are thinking that there are some connections with The Circle and Black Hole.....
"jake,Calm down!"
screamed Rachel. The circle was attacking a small base in Orange star,so jake + rachel try to stop it."OMFG!!!!" screamed jake "why the h*ll do they always attack us first?!? it just boils me up!"
"heh heh heh" called a voice from the shadows "get him angry so he can't think right..."
thats it for chapter 1, tell me what u think
« Last edited by oinky on May 8th 2006 »
Chapter 1: new foes
it is 10 years after black hole has been complety vanquished,or so it seems...
Recently a new force dubbed "The circle" have invaded 3 countries,but the most ferociouis attacks are in macro land. People are thinking that there are some connections with The Circle and Black Hole.....
"jake,Calm down!"
screamed Rachel. The circle was attacking a small base in Orange star,so jake + rachel try to stop it."OMFG!!!!" screamed jake "why the h*ll do they always attack us first?!? it just boils me up!"
"heh heh heh" called a voice from the shadows "get him angry so he can't think right..."
thats it for chapter 1, tell me what u think
« Last edited by oinky on May 8th 2006 »
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CHAPTER 2: Combat tryouts
"So, you are the orange star, with such apes guarding this country,we'll have it captured so soon..."called the same voice,"SHUT UP!!!" screamed jake."Sputter, now!" yelled a voice from the shadows,"okay, okay" replied this so-called "sputter"."All boneguard here, MARCH!!"he yelled."jake,come on!! We're outnumbered badly!"yelled rachel."then retreat, dumb*ss replied jake.
sorry bout swears
"So, you are the orange star, with such apes guarding this country,we'll have it captured so soon..."called the same voice,"SHUT UP!!!" screamed jake."Sputter, now!" yelled a voice from the shadows,"okay, okay" replied this so-called "sputter"."All boneguard here, MARCH!!"he yelled."jake,come on!! We're outnumbered badly!"yelled rachel."then retreat, dumb*ss replied jake.
sorry bout swears
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CHAPTER 3: anger manegment
Rachel was flabberghasted; Jake never spoke this way to commanders "troops, retreat!" called rachel. But jake stayed, toke out a pistol, and tried to kill a solder."jake what the friking hey was that for!?!?! Strap him up!" called rachel."this is sputter, alls good, we've used your tactics and gotten jake insane, over"
Rachel was flabberghasted; Jake never spoke this way to commanders "troops, retreat!" called rachel. But jake stayed, toke out a pistol, and tried to kill a solder."jake what the friking hey was that for!?!?! Strap him up!" called rachel."this is sputter, alls good, we've used your tactics and gotten jake insane, over"
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chapter 4: WTF
Lash (recruited by the circle after black hole's loss to the allied nations) stood there looking on in total awe as the orange star troops continued forward into utter destruction. due to the heavy loss of units the circle had been victorious this and many more times untill the allied nations found themselves almost completely anniliated
Lash (recruited by the circle after black hole's loss to the allied nations) stood there looking on in total awe as the orange star troops continued forward into utter destruction. due to the heavy loss of units the circle had been victorious this and many more times untill the allied nations found themselves almost completely anniliated
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wat is this about it should be closed
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uhhhh, is this roleplay
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ohhhhhhhh well i was wonderin and r u sure
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nope its just a guess
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no it is an opeinun read the end of the first post
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ohhhh, that explains sooooo much
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yes and it needs to be closed
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i will do so when i become a mod
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yea i will before u and this is off topic so we need to stop posting here
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