Land of Pride

As Sora and co. traveled to a new world Simba's crystal started to glow redder and redder.

"What's going on?" Sora said.

"I'm not sure, but lets let him out to see what's going on." Donald replied.

So Goofy did as told and let him out just as they landed.

"This is my.... my home!" Simba said.

"You can talk?!?" the trio said.

But Simba had raced off to a familiar cliff.

As Sora, Donald, and Goofy reached the cliff they saw Simba talking to a warthog and a prairiedog.

"I can't belive our home is.. is still here." Simba told the two animals.

"We thought you were never coming back."

"Hi, I'm Sora and this is Donald and Goofy"

"Hi Sora, I am Timone and my larger friend is Pumba"

"We, were so worried about you Simba, especially since the monsters appeared."

"Monster's?" Sora said.

"The dark creatures that keep attacking our land."

"Oh you mean....." Sora started to say 'Oh you mean the heartless.' but he was interupted with
a Darkside ready to attack.

Will Sora be ok or will he be swallowed by the darkness?



Is this a bad start to a story? And should I rename it?

It's pretty good so far.

Its short but i will make longer chapters if i continue with this

Ch.2 Land of Pride

The Darkside was no match for Sora?s experience.

Sora quickly defeated the foe and followed Simba, Donald, Goofy, Timone, and Pumba down to the bottom of the large cliff.

?Scar is really controlling these days, Simba,? Pumba said, ?He keeps taking more and more of our land and soon we will be a part of his territory.?

?But I thought he was taken by darkness when our world was crushed, that?s right, our world was taken by darkness. Why is it still here?? Simba asked.

?It was, we were floating in a dark area until a bunch of white comet looking things were almost raining upwards.? Timone replied.

?Yeah, that was the last time I saw?? Sora faded away with sorrow.

?And for about two years after that our world seemed to go back to normal, but then the monsters started to appear again.? Pumba told the gang.

?That?s because the world border was broken by heartless again.? Goofy said.

?So that means?..? Timone and Pumba replied at the same time.

?Yes, you will be returning to darkness.? Scar interrupted.

?SCAR!!? Simba, Timone, and Pumba said in chorus.

?That?s right. Ah, and nice to see you again Simba, to bad it won?t last. ATTACK!!?

Scar had summoned 2 neo shadows. Sora pulled out the Metal Chocobo and began to slash away.

Goofy and Donald had taken care of one while Sora and Simaba fought off the other one. Timone and Pumba had hid behind a semi large rock in fear.

Sora?s Neo Shadow was defeated so Simba and Sora ran to help the other two.

Sora cast Firaga on the creature but it grew larger.

?What the..? Sora said.

?It has a magic protectant field around it.? Donald replied to the frightened Sora.

?Let?s get him!? Simba shouted.

Just as Sora hit the creature with the keyblade he grew bigger.

Will they live to see Scar?s deviase plan, or will they fall in the heat of battle?


I don't like this as much as the first one

Another fan fic I see.

Ya its my first one

It's good, and a lot better than mine; DBZ universe in the fan fiction area.

Thanks but its nowhere near Invisible's stories

Ummmm... I saw something similar on another forum site....

Thats where i got the idea about the simba's world thing, but i didn't copy it

Nice fan fic. How long is it going to be?

I'm not sure but since its my first one, I don't think it will be too long

Hey, Things Change was MY first fanfic! Look how long that was!

Oh it was your first. Nice job!

this is,... unexpected, i've only just noticed this. It's pretty good, gives me an idea 4 some reason of a circus world for dumbo in Kh2 where sora has to kill heartless while tightrope walking. I'm not not taking the mickey outta you, your story is quite good, i mean it.

FINISH YOUR OTHER STORY FIRST, KEYBLADE MASTER!!!

hey, i wasn't plannin on doin this 1 in the first place