Fusion_Blastoise Posted: 03:45 May10 2009
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You guys always give the harshest critisim, but I love it n_n. Thanks to all who rate the following two sigs. Tell me how they could be improved, what I could do to them.
I made them for a SOTW on another site... tear em to shreds... (but please leave me with some dignity )
KIRBY II
SAMUS SIG:
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I made them for a SOTW on another site... tear em to shreds... (but please leave me with some dignity )
KIRBY II
SAMUS SIG:
« Last edited by Fusion_Blastoise on May 14th 2009 »
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Olimar rules on Brawl!
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02 Dissociative. Posted: 04:42 May10 2009
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There's a reason.
The Kirby one is kind of ok, but it doesn't look like you've done much.
Signature by Vasco.
The Kirby one is kind of ok, but it doesn't look like you've done much.
Signature by Vasco.
goal machine Posted: 04:48 May10 2009
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The only reason I won't give harsh criticism is because i'm only new to graphics, and I can't do much better lol. But One thing is that it doesn't appear you have done much to the image, just stuck it on a background basically, try to be more inventive, and creative. 
Vasco Posted: 09:43 May10 2009
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Haha, Sc doesn't really give harsh critique, try graphics sites and you'll see 
No text for both, to start with. The fonts don't fit. As a tip for the future, don't put your text in the corners ;)
About the first, it's somewhat blurry, try a sharpen filter. The colors are also a bit pale, experiment messing with the saturation. The second is a good start, but looks really unfinished. You need to add much more to the background.
They're an improvement when compared to your others though, so keep practicing
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No text for both, to start with. The fonts don't fit. As a tip for the future, don't put your text in the corners ;)
About the first, it's somewhat blurry, try a sharpen filter. The colors are also a bit pale, experiment messing with the saturation. The second is a good start, but looks really unfinished. You need to add much more to the background.
They're an improvement when compared to your others though, so keep practicing
againstall has invaded
BECKY = 10/10
Green_Fire Posted: 10:06 May10 2009
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Why am I not seeing this second tag?
Vas said it, try PlanetRenders and you'll see what we mean.
Well, I CAN see the Bowser one, so:
:It's got a blurry focal.
:Brushes are okay for beginners, but just don't rely on them too heavily. *coughPhilXZcough*
:Your focal is blended a bit much.
:Like Vas said, get a different font and place it somewhere else, or remove it completely.
The main places you usually should sharpen are the face, and any other focal points i.e. hands and such. I usually sharpen the eyes of my renders, some of the face, and blur some of the distant parts of the render.
Vas said it, try PlanetRenders and you'll see what we mean.
Well, I CAN see the Bowser one, so:
:It's got a blurry focal.
:Brushes are okay for beginners, but just don't rely on them too heavily. *coughPhilXZcough*
:Your focal is blended a bit much.
:Like Vas said, get a different font and place it somewhere else, or remove it completely.
The main places you usually should sharpen are the face, and any other focal points i.e. hands and such. I usually sharpen the eyes of my renders, some of the face, and blur some of the distant parts of the render.
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02 Dissociative. Posted: 06:10 May11 2009
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I didn't even realise there was text.
Signature by Vasco.
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InvertAlpha Posted: 17:14 May12 2009
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^That's just harsh, man.
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Fusion_Blastoise Posted: 02:57 May13 2009
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Hehe, thanks for the advice n_n.
I've got a vesrion two of the Kirby sig, I'll Edit it to the first post...
Here they are:
With Text
Without Text
More constructive critiscim is welcomed n_n.
« Last edited by Fusion_Blastoise on May 13th 2009 »
Credit to Ozzo for this firggin awesome sig!
Olimar rules on Brawl!
Brawl Details:
FC: 3180-5394-7053
Name: Fuse
I've got a vesrion two of the Kirby sig, I'll Edit it to the first post...
Here they are:
With Text
Without Text
More constructive critiscim is welcomed n_n.
« Last edited by Fusion_Blastoise on May 13th 2009 »
Credit to Ozzo for this firggin awesome sig!
Olimar rules on Brawl!
Brawl Details:
FC: 3180-5394-7053
Name: Fuse
Vasco Posted: 09:00 May13 2009
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Kirby II is better, but it still needs more to the BG. Colors also need some work, too bright. Keep practicing, you'll get there
By the way, do you mind starting to upload your tags to tinypic.com, or any other site? The one you're currently using is REALLY slow, and sometimes I can't even see the images.
againstall has invaded
BECKY = 10/10
By the way, do you mind starting to upload your tags to tinypic.com, or any other site? The one you're currently using is REALLY slow, and sometimes I can't even see the images.
againstall has invaded
BECKY = 10/10
Fusion_Blastoise Posted: 03:47 May14 2009
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Thanks for more advice n_n.
I've got a new sig I'd like some critique on if possible... I like it but I wanna know what you think.
« Last edited by Fusion_Blastoise on May 14th 2009 »
Credit to Ozzo for this firggin awesome sig!
Olimar rules on Brawl!
Brawl Details:
FC: 3180-5394-7053
Name: Fuse
I've got a new sig I'd like some critique on if possible... I like it but I wanna know what you think.
« Last edited by Fusion_Blastoise on May 14th 2009 »
Credit to Ozzo for this firggin awesome sig!
Olimar rules on Brawl!
Brawl Details:
FC: 3180-5394-7053
Name: Fuse
goal machine Posted: 04:11 May14 2009
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I like it better than the other two, but i don't like the colour of text, might want to make it look more with the tag, I can't really talk though, i'm the worst ever text person :/
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