The design is awesome, and it's a really nice piece overall. If I had
to quibble with anything it'd be the text - it doesn't seem to blend in quite as well as all the other bits. It seems a bit more saturated than the design, and doesn't really match the texture of the wall which looks rough and dirty.
But it's nothing that I'd go on about if you weren't specifically asking for critique for something so important. It's really good, and the text is just a minor thing that I'm deliberately being picky over.
Hope this was of some help...? Well done to you either way, hehe.
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