jamarie Posted: 09:36 Mar14 2010
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No, seriously, it is.
I've been here for five years now, and there's no other people I'd pick to help criticise and improve my work, but it's for my A-Level art exam and it's really important to me that I get this right. Otherwise I'll be claiming benefits for the rest of my life =D
I know as a piece of GFX it isn't of epic proportions, but I made the design myself using ink and paper. So, what do you guys think?
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I've been here for five years now, and there's no other people I'd pick to help criticise and improve my work, but it's for my A-Level art exam and it's really important to me that I get this right. Otherwise I'll be claiming benefits for the rest of my life =D
I know as a piece of GFX it isn't of epic proportions, but I made the design myself using ink and paper. So, what do you guys think?
http://i21.photobucket.com/...Wall.png
[right]~ J A M A R I E // C R Y S T A L U T O P I A ~[/color][/right]
Catharsis Posted: 11:54 Mar14 2010
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The design is awesome, and it's a really nice piece overall. If I had to quibble with anything it'd be the text - it doesn't seem to blend in quite as well as all the other bits. It seems a bit more saturated than the design, and doesn't really match the texture of the wall which looks rough and dirty.
But it's nothing that I'd go on about if you weren't specifically asking for critique for something so important. It's really good, and the text is just a minor thing that I'm deliberately being picky over.
Hope this was of some help...? Well done to you either way, hehe.
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But it's nothing that I'd go on about if you weren't specifically asking for critique for something so important. It's really good, and the text is just a minor thing that I'm deliberately being picky over.
Hope this was of some help...? Well done to you either way, hehe.
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Craizen Posted: 19:57 Mar14 2010
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I honesty love it. My only prob is the area around the shoes. Could blend just a tiny bit better there.
ozzo Posted: 19:51 Mar15 2010
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it doesnt look like graffiti 'sprayed on'
but omg jamarie thats awesome, and I think the effect of 'graffiti coming alive' means it doesnt matter if it looks sprayed on, cause its popping out of the wall. plus it makes it more interesting. I wouldnt try to make it look like its sprayed on if I was you.
btw I love it so much.
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omg its loverly.
I love graffiti :D
but omg jamarie thats awesome, and I think the effect of 'graffiti coming alive' means it doesnt matter if it looks sprayed on, cause its popping out of the wall. plus it makes it more interesting. I wouldnt try to make it look like its sprayed on if I was you.
btw I love it so much.
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omg its loverly.
I love graffiti :D
jamarie Posted: 17:38 Mar16 2010
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Thanks guys, that's really eased my mind =D
Bex: yeah I didn't really want it to look real as well =)
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Bex: yeah I didn't really want it to look real as well =)
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v-gamer Posted: 14:50 Mar17 2010
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I have three things to say about this:
1) I'm not a big fan of the blending, I think the converse shoes could use a bit less contrast.
2) The text doesn't really fit in, but I guess most of that can be fixed by doing the same as the shoes.
3) Everything else is Perfect. Notice that Perfect has been capitalized. I love the grafitti, the lines, the colors, the concept, the composition - just about everything. My only "issue" is blending, and it's just the shoes and text that might be able to do with less contrast.
1) I'm not a big fan of the blending, I think the converse shoes could use a bit less contrast.
2) The text doesn't really fit in, but I guess most of that can be fixed by doing the same as the shoes.
3) Everything else is Perfect. Notice that Perfect has been capitalized. I love the grafitti, the lines, the colors, the concept, the composition - just about everything. My only "issue" is blending, and it's just the shoes and text that might be able to do with less contrast.
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Layne. Posted: 16:06 Mar17 2010
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Not a big fan of the text, but it's fantastic, I love it to bits, awesome jama. :D
Also....Shoes....<3
Nicooooole<3
Also....Shoes....<3
Nicooooole<3
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