((I'm letting it fly here, but you really need to clean up your Role Playing ss2. I realize you're letting hits in, but considering that you basically have six characters fighting, you need to give other people a better shot. I damaged you all of... what, two times? And you casually absorb some of my better attacks with nothing more than a sentence of description. You need to learn to give ground, and not deflect attacks so easily. I was reluctant about letting Pain fly, and I realize why now. Give others a better shot in later rounds or get kicked out.))
Fan dug her dagger deep into the ring, gradually slowing her pace. When she finally stopped, she was mere inches away from the edge of the ring. Sensing danger, she quickly sent a flare of dark energy out to fend off her attackers for a few seconds. She stood for a few seconds at the edge of the ring, as if their barbaric side of her simply didn't know what to do. Finally, it seemed like she reached a decision. Slowly, she placed her hands in front of her chest and waited. A moment later, a small black spark emerged from her chest and set in between her hands. It was no bigger than a gnat, and simply sat there flickering. Then, without warning, it grew it about the size of a beach ball. Around her, the ring started to crack and vibrate, sending a chill through the crowd.
Fan's reflexes even seemed to partially reach to words. Her mouth opened, and in a trance-like voice, she said two words. "Shadow Nexus."
"What... the hell is that thing?" Hiei stammered. "Energy is leaking out of every inch of that thing. The power is greater than I could ever imagine... but it's so unstable!"
Magni was nearly on the same wavelength as Hiei. "If that thing goes off..." he muttered, "she'll destroy everything and everyone, herself included, for miles. I have..."
"...to stop her!" Hiei drew his sword and placed his foot on the railing of the balcony. Magni pulled his bolter out. Just as the two of them were about to spring into action, they stopped. It seemed they wouldn't be needed.
Fan seemed to waver, and a ripple went right across the dark sphere. Slowly she began to sway back and forth, her eyes fluttering slightly. It seemed that all the damage she'd been taking had finally caught up with her. It seemed as if everything then stopped for a moment. Fan's attack collapsed in on itself harmlessly, and she fell backwards with a gasp. She then landed with a dull
thud outside the ring.
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