Not bad, you got some depth and some composition in there. Protip, don';t bundle c4ds at edges, it's a cheesy thing that if you break now, you won't get stuck in the cycle I see a lot of other beginners do. If you do place at edges, be sure to space and spread across the tag, placing the c4ds in a way they add to the composition and interest/interaction with focal in the piece. Don't smudge on the focal like that too, leave it sharp and clean for great tag quality
I have high hopes for you <3
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