It's good, you have a few good effects and techniques going on, and I like the way that the render blends into the bg. Although, the colours don't really suit the render, even though it is a water type :P
And as steelers said, stay the heck away from text, until you get really good, not even I use text that often, and when I do, it fails epicly xD
You've got some depth, and overall, it isn't half bad (: definite improvement in my eyes.
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