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I decided to do a bit of creative writing, and this is what I've written so far:
Darkness
Darkness. All I see when I awake from my dream. Not any of the old dirt on the ceiling, not the grey silk curtains, not the creaky old table sitting by the window. Just darkness. Pure darkness. I roll over to check the time. 3:12AM. Ugh, not another one of these midnight awakenings. These have been occurring quite frequently lately, where I wake from my dream to find the time to be exactly 3:12 in the morning. I can never figure out why it happens to me, let alone why the time is always 3:12. I lie back down to try to return to my dream, but like always, I can't. I just lie there until sunrise, thinking about everything. About the lies, the darkness, the others.
I decide to stand. I walk along to the table, touching the walls to guide me through the dark. Slowly stepping along, I find the table. Sitting here always brings me peace; I've never understood why. While I sit, I feel the cool breeze flow through the small window. I stand once again, this time walking over to the window. I peer out into the street. Not a single speck of light to be seen other than the moonlight. I slowly stroll back to bed. When I turn to look at the clock, it says 3:12. Of course, my only way to tell the time during this darkness is gone. I collapse on top of the hard mattress and try to sleep. Try to re-visit my dreams; of hope.
So, what do you think? I wrote this quite quickly so it's obviously not perfect, but let me know what you think. (it is not completed)
« Last edited by Matt77 on Jul 13th 2016 »
~ Sometimes people change, but sometimes you just open your eyes & realise who they truly are ~
It isn't bad, though the whole 'trapped in darkness' thing is a bit cliche. Not bad writing though. Remember to try and say what you want to say in as few words as possible; nobody likes too much fluff.
Eh. There's nothing wrong with a bit of flowery description every once in a while. But some people let their overuse of imagery and description take over their writing and the message can get buried.
Matt: Seriously, keep it up. You have a good start, and I personally think you're pretty good.
I too have been doing some writing lately. My ultimate goal is to write a book. I have the first chapter done and know where I'm going with it, but I've been procrastinating on continuing.
I understand. It's useful for keeping yourself organized if you have a lot of characters or settings. Just something to keep in mind, even if it's just a hobby.
In most things I write I get into this annoying habit of adding in multiple characters that just ruin the story. I'll be sure to stop that with this story.
~ Sometimes people change, but sometimes you just open your eyes & realise who they truly are ~
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