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DBZ_DUDE Posted: 15:38 Mar30 2005
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Uuuummmm r u here Rayku???
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Rayku Posted: 18:28 Mar30 2005
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yeah i have been sick for a few days (2)
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 11:33 Mar31 2005
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Chapter 4
Dark Kid rules
Dark Kid: well who do we have here?
Cooler:that?s Vegetunks
Rayku:nobody but Cell knows me
Cell:yeah your Rayku
Jay:hey what about me
Dark Kid:I know you your Jay right or Ray
Jay:no im Jay
Dark Kid:you three kids shouldn?t be walking around on aa day like this
Rayku:and why not
Dark Kid:cause I said so!!!!! Dark hyoken!!!!!!!!
Rayku: ahhhhhh
Jay: ahh dang
Vegetunks:shoot!!!!!!!!!!
Dark Kid:why aren?t you guys fighting back?
Rayku:we cant
Dark Kid:that?s what I thought
Jay: we can fight back
(Jay fight Dark Kid)
Dark Kid:not bad not bad at all
Jay:haaaaaaaaaaaaa
Rayku: (what the hecks he doing if he battles him with that kind of power then he could kill him L)
Ss13 Jay:now im giving you one last chance to run or die
Dark Kid and his men run
Rayku:Jay are you crazy or something if he had fought him you would have killed him
Jay:yeah but I wanted to scare him off so we didn?t have to fight him
Rayku:good idea
Vegetunks: hey you guys lets see if we can travel to the future with trunkses time machine
Jay,Rayku and Vegetunks travel Capsule Corp.
?
Trunks:ok you guys but don?t you think your kindav young to be driving
Rayku:don?t worry we can drive the ship
They traveled 500 years in the future not trying to
Rayku:whoa where are we?
Mintour:roar!!!!!!!!!!!I am half bull half man!!!!!
Jay:this guy might kill us if we stay hereeeeeeee HA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rayku: HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vegetunks:HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss6 Rayku:there
Ss16 Jay: im ready
Ss10 Vegetunks: ah im also ready
(they all fight the mintour)
Mintour: uhh
They travel back 410 years
Rayku: finally we are home
Jay:yeah I know
Dark Kid:ah hahahahahahahaha you guys should of killed me years ago while you had the chance to kill my father too bad he died
Dark Kid raps them up with a rope to a poll
Rayku:you wont get away with this
Older Rayku:what the he** that?s us when we were kids
Older Jay: your right but how?
Rayku: we got sent to the past and were brought ten years in the past so we were all our old ages (10,13 and 14)
Will Dark Kid succeed in killing Rayku,Jay and Vegetunks?
Next time on dbzw S.2 Baby will be born and older Goku and trunks will help out with beating him
Chapter 5
Baby is born
Dark Kid rules
Dark Kid: well who do we have here?
Cooler:that?s Vegetunks
Rayku:nobody but Cell knows me
Cell:yeah your Rayku
Jay:hey what about me
Dark Kid:I know you your Jay right or Ray
Jay:no im Jay
Dark Kid:you three kids shouldn?t be walking around on aa day like this
Rayku:and why not
Dark Kid:cause I said so!!!!! Dark hyoken!!!!!!!!
Rayku: ahhhhhh
Jay: ahh dang
Vegetunks:shoot!!!!!!!!!!
Dark Kid:why aren?t you guys fighting back?
Rayku:we cant
Dark Kid:that?s what I thought
Jay: we can fight back
(Jay fight Dark Kid)
Dark Kid:not bad not bad at all
Jay:haaaaaaaaaaaaa
Rayku: (what the hecks he doing if he battles him with that kind of power then he could kill him L)
Ss13 Jay:now im giving you one last chance to run or die
Dark Kid and his men run
Rayku:Jay are you crazy or something if he had fought him you would have killed him
Jay:yeah but I wanted to scare him off so we didn?t have to fight him
Rayku:good idea
Vegetunks: hey you guys lets see if we can travel to the future with trunkses time machine
Jay,Rayku and Vegetunks travel Capsule Corp.
?
Trunks:ok you guys but don?t you think your kindav young to be driving
Rayku:don?t worry we can drive the ship
They traveled 500 years in the future not trying to
Rayku:whoa where are we?
Mintour:roar!!!!!!!!!!!I am half bull half man!!!!!
Jay:this guy might kill us if we stay hereeeeeeee HA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rayku: HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vegetunks:HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss6 Rayku:there
Ss16 Jay: im ready
Ss10 Vegetunks: ah im also ready
(they all fight the mintour)
Mintour: uhh
They travel back 410 years
Rayku: finally we are home
Jay:yeah I know
Dark Kid:ah hahahahahahahaha you guys should of killed me years ago while you had the chance to kill my father too bad he died
Dark Kid raps them up with a rope to a poll
Rayku:you wont get away with this
Older Rayku:what the he** that?s us when we were kids
Older Jay: your right but how?
Rayku: we got sent to the past and were brought ten years in the past so we were all our old ages (10,13 and 14)
Will Dark Kid succeed in killing Rayku,Jay and Vegetunks?
Next time on dbzw S.2 Baby will be born and older Goku and trunks will help out with beating him
Chapter 5
Baby is born
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 11:34 Mar31 2005
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(Rayku yawns) well im much better now that i got rest and im doing the comic again
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 11:52 Mar31 2005
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Chapter 5
Baby is Born
Older Rayku:ok
Jay: (Rayku what should we do?)
Rayku: (im going to use im special Tech. and it will break the rope and you attacks)
Jay: ok
Dark Kid:what? Why did you say ok?
Jay: nothing I was just thinking
Dark Kid:you wanna play that way huh Doctor now!!!!!
Baby: mahahahahahaha I am alive finally I am alive
Rayku: (oh no)
Baby:hiiiiiiiiiiiahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Rayku: ah that hurt im bleeding over here ( no if he sees my cut he can take over my body)
Baby takes over Raykus body
Baby in Rayku: yes I have a great body
Jay:you may but Rayku has already used a bunch of his power
B.I.Rayku:eerrrrr haaaaaaaaaaa
Jay:ohno
Vegetunks: what the He** is happening?
Ss1 B.I.Rayku:saiyan nooooo I cant hold him in
Ss1 Rayku:im not a SAIYAN!!!!!
(ching)
Trunks cuts Raykus body with his sword
Baby:no!!!!! I lost his body
Rayku: uhh no no no!!!!!!!!! no body takes over my body!!!!!
(Rayku beats the cr*p out of Baby)
Trunks:whoa
Trunks slices Baby up into pieces
???:Kaaaa MaaaaaHaaaaamaaaaHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! (goku blasts the kamahamaha wave)
Baby was dead
Next time on Dbzw S.2 Vegetunks will learn super saiyan 11 from a master of the super saiyan forms
Chapter 6
Lady Master
Baby is Born
Older Rayku:ok
Jay: (Rayku what should we do?)
Rayku: (im going to use im special Tech. and it will break the rope and you attacks)
Jay: ok
Dark Kid:what? Why did you say ok?
Jay: nothing I was just thinking
Dark Kid:you wanna play that way huh Doctor now!!!!!
Baby: mahahahahahaha I am alive finally I am alive
Rayku: (oh no)
Baby:hiiiiiiiiiiiahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Rayku: ah that hurt im bleeding over here ( no if he sees my cut he can take over my body)
Baby takes over Raykus body
Baby in Rayku: yes I have a great body
Jay:you may but Rayku has already used a bunch of his power
B.I.Rayku:eerrrrr haaaaaaaaaaa
Jay:ohno
Vegetunks: what the He** is happening?
Ss1 B.I.Rayku:saiyan nooooo I cant hold him in
Ss1 Rayku:im not a SAIYAN!!!!!
(ching)
Trunks cuts Raykus body with his sword
Baby:no!!!!! I lost his body
Rayku: uhh no no no!!!!!!!!! no body takes over my body!!!!!
(Rayku beats the cr*p out of Baby)
Trunks:whoa
Trunks slices Baby up into pieces
???:Kaaaa MaaaaaHaaaaamaaaaHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! (goku blasts the kamahamaha wave)
Baby was dead
Next time on Dbzw S.2 Vegetunks will learn super saiyan 11 from a master of the super saiyan forms
Chapter 6
Lady Master
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 14:31 Mar31 2005
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Cool but that name is wierd Lady Master. I know dont be fooled by the name right!
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DBZ_DUDE Posted: 18:38 Mar31 2005
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Ooohhh well... Guess he is still hurt!
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Rayku Posted: 02:04 Apr02 2005
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hey everyone ... hey where is everyone?ummm i taking a break oook.cause i need to do things (like beat the new game i got Dbz sagas)unless some people want me to do the chapter called Lady master.
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abcdefg Posted: 17:41 Apr02 2005
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u got sagas im waiting for it to come out
Can you guess who i realy like on this site??? If you can tell me.
Rayku Posted: 22:28 Apr02 2005
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its out here and i have it
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 10:39 Apr03 2005
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Yeah and it also sucks!!!I garantie you!!!
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abcdefg Posted: 14:06 Apr05 2005
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it looks good and more comic plz
Can you guess who i realy like on this site??? If you can tell me.
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 21:23 Apr05 2005
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Raykus not here.And its in my opinion abcdefg!
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Rayku Posted: 19:32 Apr06 2005
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sorry i was just really happy cause i beat Sagas Sunday (three days ago)
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DBZ_DUDE Posted: 16:25 Apr08 2005
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So r you going to make the comic???
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Rayku Posted: 20:53 Apr08 2005
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yep after a long break im back to making the comic
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
Rayku Posted: 22:15 Apr08 2005
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Capter 6
Lady Master
???:hello young one how may I help you?
Vegetunks:well uhh I wanted to knw do you know how to attain super saiyan 11?
???:yes,yes I do
Vegetunks:ok but who are you though?
???: I am Lady Master
Vegetunks:lady master? Ok
Lady Master:now just do as I say
Later
Rayku:man I wish I was back at my old age cause im not really stronger this way
Jay:hey at least we aren?t old old you know what I mean
Rayku:well I was around 20 ages or was it 30s?
Jay:20s
Rayku:well at least I don?t have to go to school nowwwww
Jay: (that?s what you think)
Rayku:hellooooooooo earth to Jay!!
Jay: well actually you do have to cause you?re a Kid and?
Rayku:and?
Jay:they have to keep us busy
Rayku:errrrrr how dare them I will just show them that I have already completed school
Jay:if you had the graduation paper from high school
Rayku:what?
Jay: yeah you need a graduation paper to show them
Rayku:I don?t have one I quit school in 11th grade
Jay:too bad you cant skip school
Vegetunks area
Ss11 Vegetunks: (Vegetunks humping and punping)
Now that Vegetunks has learned ss11 will it help our heroes?
Next time on Dbzw S.2 Lady Master will be controlled by a evil villain name Namu
Chapter 7
Namu
Lady Master
???:hello young one how may I help you?
Vegetunks:well uhh I wanted to knw do you know how to attain super saiyan 11?
???:yes,yes I do
Vegetunks:ok but who are you though?
???: I am Lady Master
Vegetunks:lady master? Ok
Lady Master:now just do as I say
Later
Rayku:man I wish I was back at my old age cause im not really stronger this way
Jay:hey at least we aren?t old old you know what I mean
Rayku:well I was around 20 ages or was it 30s?
Jay:20s
Rayku:well at least I don?t have to go to school nowwwww
Jay: (that?s what you think)
Rayku:hellooooooooo earth to Jay!!
Jay: well actually you do have to cause you?re a Kid and?
Rayku:and?
Jay:they have to keep us busy
Rayku:errrrrr how dare them I will just show them that I have already completed school
Jay:if you had the graduation paper from high school
Rayku:what?
Jay: yeah you need a graduation paper to show them
Rayku:I don?t have one I quit school in 11th grade
Jay:too bad you cant skip school
Vegetunks area
Ss11 Vegetunks: (Vegetunks humping and punping)
Now that Vegetunks has learned ss11 will it help our heroes?
Next time on Dbzw S.2 Lady Master will be controlled by a evil villain name Namu
Chapter 7
Namu
Dark Hyoken Wave !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you dead yet?
abcdefg Posted: 05:39 Apr09 2005
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cool
i wish i could do this :[
i wish i could do this :[
Can you guess who i realy like on this site??? If you can tell me.
DBZ_DUDE Posted: 18:28 Apr09 2005
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Pretty awsome dude!!!
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DBZ_DUDE Posted: 13:03 Apr10 2005
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