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The Shadow Clan
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Backround info: The peaceful town of Rangar protected by the sacred guardian and the warriors of light are shaken one day when a huge explosion destroys the town gate. They wonder who did this
and who would want to.
Characters: Aura:
Weapon: The Guardian's blade.
Description: The guardian of Rangar
Skully:
Weapon: Dark Spear.
Description: An ancient being ressurected by the Shadow Clan and out of their control
Boss:
Weapon: Morning star
Description: The leader of the shadow clan.
Greg Freeze:
Weapon: Ice Spear
Description: A warrior of light who can make ice or turn into it. He's famous for stopping global warming.
Fran Flame:
Weapon: Flame sword
Description: A warrior of light who can generate fire she's famous for stopping a group of ice warriors.
Geoff Plant:
Weapon: Wood Pike
Description: A warrior of light who can make plants etc. he's famous for generating tons of oxygen.
Walter Water:
Weapon: Water whip
Description: A warrior of light who can generate water he's famous for stopping many droughts in rangar.
The Shadow Clan: The average member carries a Longsword
The Warriors of light: The greatest warriors in all of rangar
SOLGER: Aura's soilders.
note: * means some time later or # means differant location
Chapter 1. Investigating the blast.
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Aura: What was that!
Solger: I'll go check it out sir.
*
Solger: Sir all these men in black robes seem to have blown that wall up.
Aura: And why do you think that?
Solger: Because their killing and looting villagers!
Aura: What!! time to teach them a lesson!
Solger: How sir? their is to many of them!
Aura: Get you're men to hold them of while I call the Warriors of Light!
Solger: Yes sir.
Chapter 2. The Shadow Clan
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Aura: Solgers protect the villagers the Warriors of light will take care of them.
Solgers: Sir yes sir!!
Aura: Whoever you are prepare to fall against the WARRIORS OF LIGHT!
#
note shadow clan soldiers are shadow or shadows
Shadow: Boss what are the WARRIORS OF LIGHT?
Boss: Only the strongest warriors Rangar has to offer.
Shadow: so their nothing to worry about?
Boss: oh no you should be dead worried.
Chapter 3. THE WARRIORS OF LIGHT
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Aura: stand down men their here
Solgers: Yes sir.
Greg Freeze: we're all here
Aura: thank...god...look
All warriors of light: hmm...who are they?
Greg Freeze: Hang on I know them their the Shadow clan!
Aura: The what?
All WARRIORS OF LIGHT: The Shadow Clan....
Fran: Not....them...
Walter: They steal all the water for themselves
Geoff: They cut down all the forests
Aura: Wait I think my father told me about them...
Solger: Rich kid....sheltered from all life's problems
Aura: What the hell are you talking about my father was poor I got by, stealing and begging.
Solger: I'm sorr..
Aura: Shut up!!
Greg: Ha Ha Ha !!!!!
Fran: Oh shutup!! leave the poor guy alone he made a terrible mistake
Walter: Oh let Greg have his fun
Greg: Yeah!!!
Geoff: Look forget it let's just get down there an take care of the Shadow clan
Aura: I agree with Geoff get down there.....NOW!!!
All warriors of light: Yes sir...........Spoiled brat!!
Aura: WHAT!!
Warriors of light: We said you're a spoiled brat!!
Solgers: oh know...
Aura: Just!!....just..get....down there...
Chapter 4. Get out of Rangar
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Greg: Take that!! [freezing them and shattering them]
Fran: AHH!!![As she burned them to death]
Walter: BOOYAH!![as he drowned them]
Geoff: DIE!![as he choked them with vines]
#
Aura: Help me they've made it up here!!
Solger#1: DIE!!
Solger#2: You're going down!!
Solger#3: Help over here!!
Solger#4: On it!!
Aura: Come on your my bodyguards...my finest men...this should be small fry!![As he killed 20 Shadows]
Solger#5: Sorry I'm late!![As He cracked 40 shadows skulls]
Solger#6: Sorry he killed you all!![Talking to dead shadows with a smile on his face]
Solger#7: Hey sorry my little bro was talking to this woman he saved
Solger#8: No I wasn't I was just killing shadows[He said blushing]
Aura: oh..you're all here now...
All#Solgers: SORRY SIR!!
Aura: Don't be stupid I was just saying...
Aura: The Warriors of light are pretty extended tell all idle solgers to get down there...
All#Solgers: Sir...Yes Sir!!!
Aura: This could get tough...
Chapter 5. Run!!
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Boss: We may have to release Skully
Shadow: Are...you sure?
Boss: Are you questioning me?
Shadow: Uh..n..o...
Boss: Kill him!!
Shadow: But sir... he's my brother
Boss: Kill both of them John
John: But there my cousins...
Boss: Is anyone else here related to them
[Several raise their hands]
Boss: Peter...you're not related...kill all related to them...
Peter: But their my best friends...
Boss: .............THAT'S IT!!!!..i'll kill you all myself
*
Boss: There!! done!
Shadow: Sir they were the only reinforcments!!...
Boss: How are we then?....
Shadow: .......not...good
Boss: hmm..alright release Skully!!
Shadow: ...but..but...he's out of our control...
Boss: Open the cage an flee call everyone back, were leaving...this is all but a lost cause...
Shadow: Sir yes sir!!
*
opening the cage, the shadows surrounding it died....
Chapter 6. Skully...
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Aura: There fleeing....everyone up here now...
*
Aura: Victory!!
Solgers: Victory!!
All#Solgers: Ye..Ha!!!
All Warriors of light: Yes!!
Aura: Huh?....Um...what's that?
Greg: It looks like somebody...
[Fran looks over]
[Fran falls silent, stark white]
Fran: ...Oh[sob]...No[sob]
Greg: Huh?
Fran: The...demon..Skully.....
Greg: Isn't he with the Shadow clan?
Walter: They ressurected him but he's out of there control...
Geoff: But..but..they locked him up!!
Greg: Looks like they let him out to go and get us!!
#
Skully: I must Kill the Boss!!
Skully: Maybe...he up there....[Pointing to Rangar]
Skully: If he not...I kill everyone anyway...
#
Aura: I heard of him, off my father, he said to get everyone onto the major airship and get out of here.
Aura: Greg...Fran...Walter...Geoff...there's no room In the ship
Fran: Don't worry....
Greg: We'll take care off Skully
Walter: I'll back you up
Geoff: I'm with you...
Fran: Not..me!!
Aura: Too.......late....[flying off in ship]
Fran: No!!!
Chapter 7. Big Bang
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Aura: Will...they be ok...
Solger: We must...blow them up to kill Skully
Aura: No!!!
Solger: we...we...must
Aura: No!!!
Solger: but...sir..we'll all die
Aura: o...ok...
Solger: uh...sir...we'll give them 10 more minutes
Aura: ....Good
#
Greg: Freeze!!
[nothing happens to Skully]
Fran: Burn!!
[no effect]
Walter: Drown!!
[Skully drinks It]
Geoff: Suffocate!!
[Skully rips them off]
Skully: I must admit you are powerful warriors.....But!! Here's my story
Skully:
I lived 1000 years In the past where everyone fought constantly... I trained to reach my peak and destroyed all but five cities on this island before being captured and then the Shadow clan ressurected me 10 years ago and kept me in captivity... but they let me out to kill you and before I kill them I will kill you!!
Greg: Figures...
Skully: huh?
Greg: They all say that!!...Ha Ha Ha!!!
Greg,Fran,Walter,Geoff: Ha Ha Ha !!!!!!!
Skully: Time to die!!
#
Aura: Oh..no
Solger: ...Sorry sir....
Aura: It's...okay
Solger: ........................................F...............F...i..re.....
[Big Bang]
Chapter 8. Aftermath
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[The dust settles]
Aura: Skully better be gone..!!!
Solger: .....uh...sir...
Aura: .....No!!!!!!
Solger: ...y..y..es
Aura: he's alive isn't he?
Solger: Yes...
Aura: And the warriors of light?
Solger: I can't see them....
Aura: they must have gotten out of the way then...
Solger: Um...yeh..sir
Aura: oh..shut..uh
Solger: huh?
Aura: you're....right
Solger: Sir....
Aura: I can't believe it...
Solger: uh..sir..forget what I said
Aura: I won't, you're probaly right anyways
Solger: Sir, their the warriors of light!!
Aura..you're....right!!
Solger: they must be alive!!
Aura: I give them an 85% chance of living...
Solger: I'll take that bet
Solger#1,#2,#6: So you're betting on their lives?
Aura: No...it's an investment
Solgers: Ha Ha ...right!!
Aura: It is!![holding in a smile]
#
Greg: Um...am I alive?
Fran: Yes...
Walter: why do you guys always hang around each other hey?
[smiles]
Fran: Shutup!!![Blushes]
Greg: Yeh!![Blushes]
Geoff: how will it work?
Walter: huh?
Geoff: I mean Fire and Ice
Walter: you're right I mean think of the children!!
Fran,Greg: SHUTUP!![blushes]
*
All warriors of light: Oh..no..It's Skully....
Chapter 9. Skulls can be broken
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{COMING SOON}