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Cez Posted: 04:11 May05 2005 Post ID: 152712
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Good for you. Now we just wait for Virus to wake up and give us another chapter.
10000 posts at last! w00t! Okay, I'm off into a quiet retirement. Don't bother me.
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 04:12 May05 2005 Post ID: 152714
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yey... i cant wait... ;-)
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Cez Posted: 04:28 May05 2005 Post ID: 152724
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You'll have to. Soz, but he's probably asleep.
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TestVirus101 Posted: 05:57 May06 2005 Post ID: 153484
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On 05-May-2005 Cez said:It was a general question. And now a message to Mr Virus. I would appreciate it if you didn't stereotype me. I could say that Mortal Kombat is your only joy, but I'm not going to.
not really my all time favourite game is Dyansty Warriors I love Legend of Zelda and have tons of the games but really the only reason my characters are always Sub-zero is because when I first came to this forum I had just gotten my first Mortal Kombat game and well go Subzero amd then I have only onced changed my character name In the royal Hylian Combat tournament [wow that was long...]

oh and well sorry for stereotypring but for me teasing you and this year 12 guy at my school are a whole lot of fun
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 06:04 May06 2005 Post ID: 153485
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deception was your first mk game? dear child im afraid you've missed too much. im not exactly a super fan of the series but your are missing out on some awesome characters... go buy deadly alliance
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TestVirus101 Posted: 06:33 May06 2005 Post ID: 153489
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Now for the fianl Installment of part one....

Drum roll!!

Chapter 15. There Is no end to Silbar's adventures and trouble
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“ So um what Is the tape about? “ said Aura looking hugely puzzled.
“ See for yourself “ replied the head of security looking nervous and beginning to bite his fingernails. Everyone’s faces lit up with an extreme horror as they saw Skully open up a hell pit In the ground and jumped In and with that It sealed up. And with this Fran’s face seemed to lighten up realizing that Skully had opened up the ground In the cave and that Greg may still be alive fighting Skully In hell, and well those chances were doubled considering the fact that he was the Greatest Ice warrior of all time and he was a descendant of the now extinct Froston warriors clan.
“ Hey that means that Skully may still be alive “ said Walter sounding rather exited.
“ Yeh that sounds like a great possibility “ replied Geoff who seemed to brighten up as he said this.
“ I know that already “ butted In Fran who seemed to have no change In her facial expression, but really on the inside she was screaming with joy.
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“ Look a huge army, let’s go meet them, bring our best men “ said Aura staring off In the distance, squinting while he tried to see this mysterious forces face.
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“ Who are you? “ said Walter curiously to this strange, massive force. The man with a crown stepped up to Aura ignoring Walter
“ The names Lord Doom and these are my sons Grim, Reaper and Death “
three powerful looking men stepped out, and the father and these sons looked strangely like…………………Skully!!
“ Bodyguards! Go and protect the villagers.. “ said Aura warily
“ Sir!! “ replied the bodyguards with a great look of mistrust directed at this army as they headed back across the Rangarian plains back to Rangar.
“ We are Skully’s younger brothers “ said Grim In a deep, harsh voice
“ Well we got rid of him and we can get rid of you……………… “ replied Fran In an unsure voice.
“ Well then we’ll just have to see about that!!!………… boys get down here and let’s party!! “ screamed Lord Doom confidently. With this Rangar prepared for It’s hardest fight ever, they may just need the help of the other cities…………
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Meanwhile In hell:
“ You’ll never win “ shouted Greg
“ At the moment neither of us will and this has been a three day battle!! “ shouted Skully In a tired voice. As this was said Greg raised his spear and prepared for another clash In the hardest battle of his life, to make things worse…………nobody was there to make this any easier for him.

THE END FOR NOW : be prepared for part 2.
The quest For Silbar : A horde of Skulls.
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 07:08 May06 2005 Post ID: 153497
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it was good, but still could use some work in detail. ill check out part two whenever you post it
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TestVirus101 Posted: 07:14 May06 2005 Post ID: 153500
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I didn't really wan't to much detail just for that chapter to set the seen for the next story
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 07:17 May06 2005 Post ID: 153503
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i know, i was refering to whole series still could use detail work
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TestVirus101 Posted: 07:19 May06 2005 Post ID: 153505
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Wait in chapter 14. I thought I had tons of detail....
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 07:24 May06 2005 Post ID: 153507
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well, it is sort of hard to explain... i guess the way to put it would be that you have enough details but you seem rushed in putting them together. for example, i believe in one part you said ...landed staright on drake causing drake... so many ways to word it without overusing his name. another small example, hugely isnt a word

EDIT: pardon my stupidity as i havent slept in a week... hugely is a word
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TestVirus101 Posted: 07:26 May06 2005 Post ID: 153509
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hugely isn't a word oh snookogansag
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 07:30 May06 2005 Post ID: 153512
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lol... (im pretty sure snookogansag isnt a word either, lol) i could be wrong about hugely... *grabs dictionary* oops, that was porn, lol, just kidding, umm... *searches dictionary* oh shizza... i never said hugely wasnt a word... *whistles innocently *
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TestVirus101 Posted: 07:32 May06 2005 Post ID: 153515
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Is w00t a word?
I think Frandarg Is
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 07:35 May06 2005 Post ID: 153520
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do i have to explain what w00t is? no? oh well, im doing it anyway. when hackers used to gain access to there files on a game they were cheating, they'd say root accessed. they mistyped many times, saying woot accessed. then slang evolved woot into an expression of success and some wierd pointless maniac changed the o's to 0's
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TestVirus101 Posted: 07:42 May06 2005 Post ID: 153526
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wow...........
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 07:43 May06 2005 Post ID: 153530
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yes... dont ask me why i know that though
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TestVirus101 Posted: 07:48 May06 2005 Post ID: 153538
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Because you were hacked or have hacked....
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 07:50 May06 2005 Post ID: 153540
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nope, simply because w00t is my favorite word in all of existence, so i just know... but yes, my bro used to hack and he told me
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TestVirus101 Posted: 07:57 May06 2005 Post ID: 153541
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w00t
lol this is strange
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