Hyperwire_2.0 Posted: 20:47 Jun06 2005
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Episode 8: Gohan vs. Gohan
At the Lookout. . .
Teen Gohan: Look! Their coming out!
Uub: How'd it go in th. . .Whoa, little Goku's a Super Saiyan!
Kid Goku: Yep, thanks to Elliot and Goku.
Elliot: It was a bit of work, but we finally did it.
Meanwhile. . .
Back at the battle site, Vegeta is standing over Nappa's lifeless body.
Vegeta: He always was worthless. You ok Majin Vegeta?
Majin Vegeta: Yeah I'm ok, what about your butt?
Vegeta: It itches, a lot.
Back in HFIL. . .
Cell: Agh! First Raditz, then Nappa, Ok who's next?
Zarbon: I'll go if you need me to, Lord Frieza.
Frieza: Wait, why don't we just send a ton of Sibamen? We may need you later Zarbon.
Back at the Lookout. . .
Gohan: Ok well I think we could use some time in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, don't you Gohans?
Teen&Kid Gohans: Let's do it!
Goku: You think you can handle it little guy?
Kid Gohan: Of course I can Dad, but you guys don't need to push me to be a Super Saiyan, I'm ok with it if I can't become one.
Teen Gohan: Well I'm ok if he's ok. Let's go, I can finally show Gohan who's stronger.
Gohan: Really, well we'll see about that!
Next episode: The challenge.
At the Lookout. . .
Teen Gohan: Look! Their coming out!
Uub: How'd it go in th. . .Whoa, little Goku's a Super Saiyan!
Kid Goku: Yep, thanks to Elliot and Goku.
Elliot: It was a bit of work, but we finally did it.
Meanwhile. . .
Back at the battle site, Vegeta is standing over Nappa's lifeless body.
Vegeta: He always was worthless. You ok Majin Vegeta?
Majin Vegeta: Yeah I'm ok, what about your butt?
Vegeta: It itches, a lot.
Back in HFIL. . .
Cell: Agh! First Raditz, then Nappa, Ok who's next?
Zarbon: I'll go if you need me to, Lord Frieza.
Frieza: Wait, why don't we just send a ton of Sibamen? We may need you later Zarbon.
Back at the Lookout. . .
Gohan: Ok well I think we could use some time in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, don't you Gohans?
Teen&Kid Gohans: Let's do it!
Goku: You think you can handle it little guy?
Kid Gohan: Of course I can Dad, but you guys don't need to push me to be a Super Saiyan, I'm ok with it if I can't become one.
Teen Gohan: Well I'm ok if he's ok. Let's go, I can finally show Gohan who's stronger.
Gohan: Really, well we'll see about that!
Next episode: The challenge.
Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 21:03 Jun06 2005
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it is improving, but i stick to what im known for. more detail is needed.
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TestVirus101 Posted: 01:54 Jun07 2005
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Ah crap he's finally dead
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yes, I am probaly gonna cop criticism for this post but like Chaotic said improve on your detail, explain things more.
Hyperwire_2.0 Posted: 17:36 Jun07 2005
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I'm doing my best!
Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 21:38 Jun07 2005
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don't worry about it, we're not trying to make you feel bad, just to help you improve.
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TestVirus101 Posted: 00:56 Jun09 2005
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Ah crap he's finally dead
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It's true hyprewire we are only here to help.
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