Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 19:30 May12 2005
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yeah, im not being offensive or anything... i mean i dont think im a legend either. i think a legend is someone who goes and publishes a story and makes money off of it. usually someone can be called legendary if every almost single person who reads it likes it.
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Trunks245 Posted: 18:34 May13 2005
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Chapter 11 Fallen Heroes
Pan:Its gotta be around here somewhere... Aha here it is! The 4 Star Dragonball.
Giru:Dragonball Detected Dragonball Detected!
Pan:Another one?
Giru:Dragonball North!
Pan:Ok whatever you say Giru...
At West City Goten and Trunks arrive to see Majuub lieing on the ground unconsious.
Goten:Majuub! Are you OK?
Majuub:Goten...Trunks...Be careful...Hes powerful...
Trunks:Dont worry Majuub well take care of him. Haaa!! (Transforms to Super Saiyan)
Goten:Dont forget me! Haaa!! (Transforms to Super Saiyan)
Cytro:Oh look the welcome wagon. I could use a good workout.
Goten:You'll pay for what you did! Kamehameha!
Cytro:Not that attack... Big Bang!!!
Goten:What the- Arghhh!
Trunks:Goten!
Cytro:In case your wondering i know all your moves!
Goten:Rrrr
Trunks:Thats it! Burning Blast!!!
Cytro:Final Flash!!
Trunks:Ahhh...
Goten:Trunks... we have no other choice... We have to do Fusion.
Trunks:Good idea but well need a distraction.
???:Haaa!!!
Cytro:What the- Uhhn!
Trunks:Majuub!
Majuub:Fuse now! Ill buy you some time!
Goten: Thanks Majuub. You ready Trunks!
Trunks:Yeah!
Goten @ Trunks: FUSION HA!!!!
A huge explosion of energy covers the entire city. Then a figure stepped out of the mist.
Gotenks:Lets go!
At Mt. Hiro...
Pan:Are you sure the Dragonball is here Giru?
Giru:Giru sure!
Pan:Well i hope your- Wahhh Ow!!
Giru:Are you Ok Pan?
Pan: Yeah i just tripped over this rock- The Dragonball!
Giru:Yay now we have 4 Dragonballs!
Pan:Just three more...
West City
Cytro:Grr.. where are the two boys!
Gotenks:We are them...
Cytro:Impossible!
Gotenks:Well see! Super Ghost Kamikaze Attack!!
Cytro:What the- What are those things!
Gotenks:Attack!
Cytro:Huh! Arghhh!
Gotenks:What now Cytro?
Cytro:Ill show you! Solar Flare!!!
Gotenks:Argghhh!!! My eyes! I cant see!
Cytro:10x Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaa!!!!
Gotenks:Oh no! Ahh!!!
Gotenks skyrokets to the ground as Cytro laughs.
Cytro:Some technique! Hahaha
With Gotenks out of commission he still has one move that can defeat Cytro. But even unconsious, Gotenks' Fusion Timer still runs down. Can they wake up in time?
Next Episode: Pan Attacks
Pan:Its gotta be around here somewhere... Aha here it is! The 4 Star Dragonball.
Giru:Dragonball Detected Dragonball Detected!
Pan:Another one?
Giru:Dragonball North!
Pan:Ok whatever you say Giru...
At West City Goten and Trunks arrive to see Majuub lieing on the ground unconsious.
Goten:Majuub! Are you OK?
Majuub:Goten...Trunks...Be careful...Hes powerful...
Trunks:Dont worry Majuub well take care of him. Haaa!! (Transforms to Super Saiyan)
Goten:Dont forget me! Haaa!! (Transforms to Super Saiyan)
Cytro:Oh look the welcome wagon. I could use a good workout.
Goten:You'll pay for what you did! Kamehameha!
Cytro:Not that attack... Big Bang!!!
Goten:What the- Arghhh!
Trunks:Goten!
Cytro:In case your wondering i know all your moves!
Goten:Rrrr
Trunks:Thats it! Burning Blast!!!
Cytro:Final Flash!!
Trunks:Ahhh...
Goten:Trunks... we have no other choice... We have to do Fusion.
Trunks:Good idea but well need a distraction.
???:Haaa!!!
Cytro:What the- Uhhn!
Trunks:Majuub!
Majuub:Fuse now! Ill buy you some time!
Goten: Thanks Majuub. You ready Trunks!
Trunks:Yeah!
Goten @ Trunks: FUSION HA!!!!
A huge explosion of energy covers the entire city. Then a figure stepped out of the mist.
Gotenks:Lets go!
At Mt. Hiro...
Pan:Are you sure the Dragonball is here Giru?
Giru:Giru sure!
Pan:Well i hope your- Wahhh Ow!!
Giru:Are you Ok Pan?
Pan: Yeah i just tripped over this rock- The Dragonball!
Giru:Yay now we have 4 Dragonballs!
Pan:Just three more...
West City
Cytro:Grr.. where are the two boys!
Gotenks:We are them...
Cytro:Impossible!
Gotenks:Well see! Super Ghost Kamikaze Attack!!
Cytro:What the- What are those things!
Gotenks:Attack!
Cytro:Huh! Arghhh!
Gotenks:What now Cytro?
Cytro:Ill show you! Solar Flare!!!
Gotenks:Argghhh!!! My eyes! I cant see!
Cytro:10x Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaa!!!!
Gotenks:Oh no! Ahh!!!
Gotenks skyrokets to the ground as Cytro laughs.
Cytro:Some technique! Hahaha
With Gotenks out of commission he still has one move that can defeat Cytro. But even unconsious, Gotenks' Fusion Timer still runs down. Can they wake up in time?
Next Episode: Pan Attacks
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t0ms0nic Posted: 15:02 May14 2005
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Good episode,might need details,but its alright as a episode without any.Good work.
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Chapter 12 Pan Attacks
West City.
Cytro:Hahaha what a loser!
Majuub:uhh... Cytro youll pay for the damage youve caused!
Cytro:Oh really. I highly doubt that.
Majuub:Haaaa (Powers up) Fine! Lets go!
Cytro:(Sighs) Why do you keep attacking? Why dont you just fall down and die?
Majuub:Because something inside wont let me!
Majuub shoots a barrage of Ki Blasts that Cytro easily dodges
Cytro:My turn! Big Bang!!!
Majuub quickly dodges the giant ball of energy
Majuub:Why do you use the same moves over and over?
Cytro:Grr... Ill show you not to mess with a Super Saiyan 4!
Cytro uses Instant Transmission and appears behind Majuub then quickly punches Majuub out
Majuub:Uhhnn...
Cytro:Hahahaha- Whats this?
Cytro flies down to the rubble known as West City and spots an orange object then quickly pockets it.
Cytro:Ive heard of this...
Pyce Glacier
Pan:Are you sure its here Giru... Weve been searching for hours.
Giru:Its only been ten minutes Giru Giru
Pan:Rrrr. Shut Up!
Giru:Ahhhhh!
Pan:Hey whats this?
Pan looks at the object to find that its a Dragonball incased in ice
Giru: Dragonball Dragonball
Pan:I bet i could break this.
Pan throws the ice block in the air and shoots it with a Ki Blast, shaterring the ice.
Pan:Yes! Only two more! Wheres the next one Giru?
Giru:Scanners say northward
Pan:Then lets go!
Thean Mountain
Giru:Dragonball at top Giru Giru.
Pan:Then what are we waiting for?
Pan and Giru fly to the top of the mountain to find that a monster is holding it
Giru:Dragonball here!
Pan:(It looks like a mangled impression of Bigfoot...) Umm could we have that please. We need to save the Earth.
Monster:???
Pan:We dont want to have to hurt you...
Monster:...
The monster points at a piece of food hanging of a branch
Pan:Ohh your hungry! We can get you that.
Pan flies down and grabs the hanging apple and trades it for the Dragonball.
Monster:Raarrggghh
Pan:Your welcome.
Giru:Final Dragonball west.
Pan:Well lets hurry then.
West City. 27 minutes after Goten and Trunks fused
Gotenks:Uhhh... Huh! Im still fused! who knows how much time i have left. I have to use that technique... and i wanted to mess with him for a while to...
Gotenks flies off to a hidden spot where he started charging a Spirit Bomb-like technique
Cytro:Well that about does it for this place... Where should i strike next?
Gotenks:Almossstt...
Cytro:Hmm...
Gotenks:Yes ready! Hey Cytro!
Cytro:What?!?!
Gotenks:Ultimate Energy Sphe-
Gotenks gets ready to throw the Sphere when he defuses
Trunks:Oh no!!!
Goten:Hey Trunks... what happened to the Energy Sphere...
Trunks:Huh. Oh no!! Goten look up!
The Energy Sphere had dropped from their hands and hit them both sending them flying off
Cytro:Right when they dig up a powerful attack... they manage to mess it up.
Pan:Hey! Cytro!
Cytro:Huh. Oh great the girl!
Cytro turns around revealing the Dragonball he picked up earlier.
Pan:Hey thats mine!!
Cytro:Oh is it now... Back off before you end up like your friends!
Pan:Huh.. Goten, Trunks, Majuub!!!
Cytro:See you dont have a chance!
Pan:Why did you trick us Cytro! Why did you!!
Cytro:What do you care!
Pan:Rraaghhh its not fair!
Cytro:Life aint fair. Get used to it!
Pan then is engulfed in an explosion of inner energy. Does she have enough to stop Cytro?
Next Episode Cytros Second Movement
West City.
Cytro:Hahaha what a loser!
Majuub:uhh... Cytro youll pay for the damage youve caused!
Cytro:Oh really. I highly doubt that.
Majuub:Haaaa (Powers up) Fine! Lets go!
Cytro:(Sighs) Why do you keep attacking? Why dont you just fall down and die?
Majuub:Because something inside wont let me!
Majuub shoots a barrage of Ki Blasts that Cytro easily dodges
Cytro:My turn! Big Bang!!!
Majuub quickly dodges the giant ball of energy
Majuub:Why do you use the same moves over and over?
Cytro:Grr... Ill show you not to mess with a Super Saiyan 4!
Cytro uses Instant Transmission and appears behind Majuub then quickly punches Majuub out
Majuub:Uhhnn...
Cytro:Hahahaha- Whats this?
Cytro flies down to the rubble known as West City and spots an orange object then quickly pockets it.
Cytro:Ive heard of this...
Pyce Glacier
Pan:Are you sure its here Giru... Weve been searching for hours.
Giru:Its only been ten minutes Giru Giru
Pan:Rrrr. Shut Up!
Giru:Ahhhhh!
Pan:Hey whats this?
Pan looks at the object to find that its a Dragonball incased in ice
Giru: Dragonball Dragonball
Pan:I bet i could break this.
Pan throws the ice block in the air and shoots it with a Ki Blast, shaterring the ice.
Pan:Yes! Only two more! Wheres the next one Giru?
Giru:Scanners say northward
Pan:Then lets go!
Thean Mountain
Giru:Dragonball at top Giru Giru.
Pan:Then what are we waiting for?
Pan and Giru fly to the top of the mountain to find that a monster is holding it
Giru:Dragonball here!
Pan:(It looks like a mangled impression of Bigfoot...) Umm could we have that please. We need to save the Earth.
Monster:???
Pan:We dont want to have to hurt you...
Monster:...
The monster points at a piece of food hanging of a branch
Pan:Ohh your hungry! We can get you that.
Pan flies down and grabs the hanging apple and trades it for the Dragonball.
Monster:Raarrggghh
Pan:Your welcome.
Giru:Final Dragonball west.
Pan:Well lets hurry then.
West City. 27 minutes after Goten and Trunks fused
Gotenks:Uhhh... Huh! Im still fused! who knows how much time i have left. I have to use that technique... and i wanted to mess with him for a while to...
Gotenks flies off to a hidden spot where he started charging a Spirit Bomb-like technique
Cytro:Well that about does it for this place... Where should i strike next?
Gotenks:Almossstt...
Cytro:Hmm...
Gotenks:Yes ready! Hey Cytro!
Cytro:What?!?!
Gotenks:Ultimate Energy Sphe-
Gotenks gets ready to throw the Sphere when he defuses
Trunks:Oh no!!!
Goten:Hey Trunks... what happened to the Energy Sphere...
Trunks:Huh. Oh no!! Goten look up!
The Energy Sphere had dropped from their hands and hit them both sending them flying off
Cytro:Right when they dig up a powerful attack... they manage to mess it up.
Pan:Hey! Cytro!
Cytro:Huh. Oh great the girl!
Cytro turns around revealing the Dragonball he picked up earlier.
Pan:Hey thats mine!!
Cytro:Oh is it now... Back off before you end up like your friends!
Pan:Huh.. Goten, Trunks, Majuub!!!
Cytro:See you dont have a chance!
Pan:Why did you trick us Cytro! Why did you!!
Cytro:What do you care!
Pan:Rraaghhh its not fair!
Cytro:Life aint fair. Get used to it!
Pan then is engulfed in an explosion of inner energy. Does she have enough to stop Cytro?
Next Episode Cytros Second Movement
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Trunks245 Posted: 22:00 May15 2005
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Well another chapter done
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ssj unkown goku Posted: 18:05 May16 2005
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i think ur the best writer for dbz ive ever seen!!!
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I wouldnt exactly say that either lol but thanks
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ssj unkown goku Posted: 18:42 May16 2005
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would u join my role play heaven and hell.
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Chapter 13 Cytros Second Movement
West City
Goten:Uhhh... huh! What happened? I just felt something huge!
Trunks:...
Goten:Trunks!! Are you there?
Trunks:*cough cough* Uhhh... Yeah im here...
Goten:I just felt a huge energy surge and its coming from West City.
Trunks:Well lets go check it out.
At the battle
Cytro:What the- what just happened?!
The smoke cleared from the explosion and standing there was a girl with golden hair
Pan:Ill teach you to mess with my friends! Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaa!!!
Cytro:That weak attack wont do a- Uhhnnn
Pan:Hows that?
Cytro:I dont get it... that shouldnt have even left a scratch!
Pan:Looks like Super Saiyans get a big power boost.
Cytro:(Its more than that... i should be able to mop the floor with her)
Pan:Less talk more fight! Kamehamehaaa!!!
Cytro:Arrghh (Ive got to find a way to distract her... I know! theres a fault line under the Theren Sea... If i blast that it should flood the world.
Trunks:Burning Blast!
Cytro:Huh! Argghhh
The suprise attack by Trunks sent the dragonball flying off into the distance
Trunks:Hows that for weak!
Goten:Pan!! Youre a Super Saiyan!
Cytro:i hate to burst your bubble but ive got a fault line to attack!
Goten:He doesent mean the Theren Sea fault line!?!?
Trunks:Goten find Giru and look for the last dragonball and wish the Earth, its people and Vegeta back to normal!
Goten:Got it!
Trunks:Pan come with me. We have to stall him! Goten take the other dragonballs
Goten:Ok
As Goten tries to find the dragonball, Trunks and Pan set off to stall Cytro until the wish is made
Theren Sea
Cytro:Ahh the sweet smell of a flood about to start...
Pan:Not so fast!
Trunks:To get to the fault line you have to get through us!
Cytro:No problem...
Trunks:Pan on three 1 2 3!
Pan:Kamehamehaaa!!
Trunks:Burning Blast!!
Cytro:Hmmm...
Cytro dodges the two attacks easily and counters with his own
Cytro:Hyper Energy Laser!!!
Trunks @ Pan:Argghhh!!
Cytro:That will take care of you...
West City
Goten:Giru!!! Where are you?
Giru:Goten! Giru here!
Goten:There you are! Giru we need to find the last dragonball now.
Giru:Ok Dragonball North.
Goten and Giru search North for the Dragonball. After a few minutes of searching the radar gets a reading.
Giru:Dragonball under here!
Goten:Thanks Giru. Hmmm... Here it is! The Six Star Ball now we need to take this to the lookout.
Theren Sea
Cytro:Now back to business. Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaa!!!
The wave hits the line but nothing happens.
Cytro:Must need more power... 10x Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaaa!!!
This time the wave hits the line and the line breaks causing a huge wave to come up.
Cytro:Ha! This should do it.
At the Lookout
Goten:Dende i have the Dragonballs.
Dende:Good
Mr. Popo: I dont mean to rush you but theres a huge wave heading this way!
Dende:Uh oh...
Goten:Eternal Dragon I Summon You!! Shenron!!!
Shenron:I can make two of your wishes come true...
Dende:hurry!
Goten:I wish the Earth and all its people were back to normal!!!
Shenron:Your wish has been granted
The wave immediatly dies down right before it hits the Lookout.
Shenron:What is your second wish...
Dende:We wish for Vegeta to be revived!
Shenron:Your wish has been granted...
Vegeta:Ahh its good to be back... I suppose its my turn to try that traitor.
With Vegeta revived the Z Fighters may have a chance at defeating Cytro but is he enough. Can Goku and Gohan awaken in time?
Next Episode Vegetas Turn
West City
Goten:Uhhh... huh! What happened? I just felt something huge!
Trunks:...
Goten:Trunks!! Are you there?
Trunks:*cough cough* Uhhh... Yeah im here...
Goten:I just felt a huge energy surge and its coming from West City.
Trunks:Well lets go check it out.
At the battle
Cytro:What the- what just happened?!
The smoke cleared from the explosion and standing there was a girl with golden hair
Pan:Ill teach you to mess with my friends! Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaa!!!
Cytro:That weak attack wont do a- Uhhnnn
Pan:Hows that?
Cytro:I dont get it... that shouldnt have even left a scratch!
Pan:Looks like Super Saiyans get a big power boost.
Cytro:(Its more than that... i should be able to mop the floor with her)
Pan:Less talk more fight! Kamehamehaaa!!!
Cytro:Arrghh (Ive got to find a way to distract her... I know! theres a fault line under the Theren Sea... If i blast that it should flood the world.
Trunks:Burning Blast!
Cytro:Huh! Argghhh
The suprise attack by Trunks sent the dragonball flying off into the distance
Trunks:Hows that for weak!
Goten:Pan!! Youre a Super Saiyan!
Cytro:i hate to burst your bubble but ive got a fault line to attack!
Goten:He doesent mean the Theren Sea fault line!?!?
Trunks:Goten find Giru and look for the last dragonball and wish the Earth, its people and Vegeta back to normal!
Goten:Got it!
Trunks:Pan come with me. We have to stall him! Goten take the other dragonballs
Goten:Ok
As Goten tries to find the dragonball, Trunks and Pan set off to stall Cytro until the wish is made
Theren Sea
Cytro:Ahh the sweet smell of a flood about to start...
Pan:Not so fast!
Trunks:To get to the fault line you have to get through us!
Cytro:No problem...
Trunks:Pan on three 1 2 3!
Pan:Kamehamehaaa!!
Trunks:Burning Blast!!
Cytro:Hmmm...
Cytro dodges the two attacks easily and counters with his own
Cytro:Hyper Energy Laser!!!
Trunks @ Pan:Argghhh!!
Cytro:That will take care of you...
West City
Goten:Giru!!! Where are you?
Giru:Goten! Giru here!
Goten:There you are! Giru we need to find the last dragonball now.
Giru:Ok Dragonball North.
Goten and Giru search North for the Dragonball. After a few minutes of searching the radar gets a reading.
Giru:Dragonball under here!
Goten:Thanks Giru. Hmmm... Here it is! The Six Star Ball now we need to take this to the lookout.
Theren Sea
Cytro:Now back to business. Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaa!!!
The wave hits the line but nothing happens.
Cytro:Must need more power... 10x Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaaa!!!
This time the wave hits the line and the line breaks causing a huge wave to come up.
Cytro:Ha! This should do it.
At the Lookout
Goten:Dende i have the Dragonballs.
Dende:Good
Mr. Popo: I dont mean to rush you but theres a huge wave heading this way!
Dende:Uh oh...
Goten:Eternal Dragon I Summon You!! Shenron!!!
Shenron:I can make two of your wishes come true...
Dende:hurry!
Goten:I wish the Earth and all its people were back to normal!!!
Shenron:Your wish has been granted
The wave immediatly dies down right before it hits the Lookout.
Shenron:What is your second wish...
Dende:We wish for Vegeta to be revived!
Shenron:Your wish has been granted...
Vegeta:Ahh its good to be back... I suppose its my turn to try that traitor.
With Vegeta revived the Z Fighters may have a chance at defeating Cytro but is he enough. Can Goku and Gohan awaken in time?
Next Episode Vegetas Turn
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Im gonna start on Chapter 14 right now.
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Chapter 14 Vegetas Turn
At the Lookout
Goten:Vegeta! Youre back!
Vegeta:Yes and now im going to show him what a Super Saiyan 4 is all about!
Dende:Well you might want to train first...
Vegeta:Are you saying hes stronger than me!
Dende:uhh...
Vegeta:Im going. Goten stay here.
Goten:Got it.
Theren Sea
Cytro:What happened! Why did the wave disappear?
Vegeta:Because we used the Dragonballs.
Cytro:What i thought you... oh right... the Dragonballs.
Vegeta:What makes you think you can win?
Cytro:well i have beaten all your little friends at least 100 times.
Vegeta:You underestimate me... I am stronger than them!
Cytro:I know... and you still dont stand a chance!
Vegeta:Why you- Haaaa (Transforms into Super Saiyan 4)
Cytro:Well this should be interesting... Big Bang!!!
Vegeta:Big Bang!!!
The two energy blasts collide causing a massive explosion
Cytro:Well i guess we are evenly matched...
Vegeta:Well see! Vegeta moves so fast and instantly appears behind Cytro. But Cytro saw him early
Cytro:You call that speed?
Vegeta:?!?!
Cytro punches Vegeta all the way down to the water
Vegeta:Lets see you keep up with this!
Vegeta uses the Afterimage technique to try and suprise Cytro
Vegeta:Is this me... or is this me?
Cytro:Hmmm...
Vegeta:Final Flash!!!
Cytro:Hmmm... Yes!
Cytro blasts one of the Vegetas which happens to be the real one and then Vegeta plummets to the ground
Vegeta:(Hes stronger than i thought... theres got to be something i can do)
Planet of the Kais
Kibito Kai:Ancestor cant we help them?
Old kai:We cant stick our nose into other peoples business
Kibito Kai:Hmm... Why dont i help Goku and Gohan speed up their recovery?
Old Kai:Hmm that just might work...
Kibito Kai:Ok Ancestor ill do it!
Old Kai:Well dont just stand there, Go!
Kibito Kai: Oops sorry
Gokus House
Kibito Kai:Goku are you awake?
Goku:...
Kibito Kai:How bout you Gohan?
Gohan:...
Kibito Kai: Didnt think so... Ok Goku here take some of my energy.
Kibito Kai gives Goku some of his energy which is just enough to revive him
Goku:Uhhh...
Kibito Kai:Ok Gohan your turn.
Kibito Kai does the same thing for Gohan then teleports back to his planet
Goku:Uhh... How long have i been out?
Gohan:It looks like... 3 DAYS!!!
Goku:Wow.. that is one long nap.
Gohan:Dad...
Goku:Oh no...
Gohan:What?
Goku:I can sense Trunks, Majuubs and Pans energy and its running low.
Gohan:Ill go find them and go to the Lookout. You find out what caused it.
Goku:Good plan son. By the way Goten is up on the Lookout too.
Gohan:Ok ill get on it
Goku:Bye son (Vegeta where are you... i know youre alive...)
West City
Gohan:Majuub! Are you here?
Majuub:Uhhh...
Gohan:Majuub! Are you ok? Who did this to you?
Majuub: It...was...-
Majuub suddenly falls unconsious and Gohan carries him back to the Lookout
Goten:Gohan!! You wont beleive whats happened! Its all-
Gohan:I dont have time Goten. I need to find Pan and Trunks!
Gohan flies off to the Theren Beach to search for Pan and Trunks as Goku goes to find Vegeta and the one who caused all the damage
With Goku and Gohan completly unaware of the culprit of all this damage. Will they be able to figure it out before Cytro finds them...
Next Episode Gogeta VS Cytro
At the Lookout
Goten:Vegeta! Youre back!
Vegeta:Yes and now im going to show him what a Super Saiyan 4 is all about!
Dende:Well you might want to train first...
Vegeta:Are you saying hes stronger than me!
Dende:uhh...
Vegeta:Im going. Goten stay here.
Goten:Got it.
Theren Sea
Cytro:What happened! Why did the wave disappear?
Vegeta:Because we used the Dragonballs.
Cytro:What i thought you... oh right... the Dragonballs.
Vegeta:What makes you think you can win?
Cytro:well i have beaten all your little friends at least 100 times.
Vegeta:You underestimate me... I am stronger than them!
Cytro:I know... and you still dont stand a chance!
Vegeta:Why you- Haaaa (Transforms into Super Saiyan 4)
Cytro:Well this should be interesting... Big Bang!!!
Vegeta:Big Bang!!!
The two energy blasts collide causing a massive explosion
Cytro:Well i guess we are evenly matched...
Vegeta:Well see! Vegeta moves so fast and instantly appears behind Cytro. But Cytro saw him early
Cytro:You call that speed?
Vegeta:?!?!
Cytro punches Vegeta all the way down to the water
Vegeta:Lets see you keep up with this!
Vegeta uses the Afterimage technique to try and suprise Cytro
Vegeta:Is this me... or is this me?
Cytro:Hmmm...
Vegeta:Final Flash!!!
Cytro:Hmmm... Yes!
Cytro blasts one of the Vegetas which happens to be the real one and then Vegeta plummets to the ground
Vegeta:(Hes stronger than i thought... theres got to be something i can do)
Planet of the Kais
Kibito Kai:Ancestor cant we help them?
Old kai:We cant stick our nose into other peoples business
Kibito Kai:Hmm... Why dont i help Goku and Gohan speed up their recovery?
Old Kai:Hmm that just might work...
Kibito Kai:Ok Ancestor ill do it!
Old Kai:Well dont just stand there, Go!
Kibito Kai: Oops sorry
Gokus House
Kibito Kai:Goku are you awake?
Goku:...
Kibito Kai:How bout you Gohan?
Gohan:...
Kibito Kai: Didnt think so... Ok Goku here take some of my energy.
Kibito Kai gives Goku some of his energy which is just enough to revive him
Goku:Uhhh...
Kibito Kai:Ok Gohan your turn.
Kibito Kai does the same thing for Gohan then teleports back to his planet
Goku:Uhh... How long have i been out?
Gohan:It looks like... 3 DAYS!!!
Goku:Wow.. that is one long nap.
Gohan:Dad...
Goku:Oh no...
Gohan:What?
Goku:I can sense Trunks, Majuubs and Pans energy and its running low.
Gohan:Ill go find them and go to the Lookout. You find out what caused it.
Goku:Good plan son. By the way Goten is up on the Lookout too.
Gohan:Ok ill get on it
Goku:Bye son (Vegeta where are you... i know youre alive...)
West City
Gohan:Majuub! Are you here?
Majuub:Uhhh...
Gohan:Majuub! Are you ok? Who did this to you?
Majuub: It...was...-
Majuub suddenly falls unconsious and Gohan carries him back to the Lookout
Goten:Gohan!! You wont beleive whats happened! Its all-
Gohan:I dont have time Goten. I need to find Pan and Trunks!
Gohan flies off to the Theren Beach to search for Pan and Trunks as Goku goes to find Vegeta and the one who caused all the damage
With Goku and Gohan completly unaware of the culprit of all this damage. Will they be able to figure it out before Cytro finds them...
Next Episode Gogeta VS Cytro
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just got here, didnt know you'd posted knew chapter, illread it right now
*reads it*
you're improving. not bad
*reads it*
you're improving. not bad
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Chapter 15 Gogeta VS Cytro
Theren Beach
Trunks:Uhh... Pan where are you!
Pan:Over here!
Trunks:What are you looking at?
Pan:Your Dad... it looks like he is having a hard time out there
Trunks:Lets go to the Lookout... maybe we can get more help there.
As Trunks and Pan are flying back to the Lookout,they past Gohan.
Gohan:Hey guys glad to see your awake.
Trunks:Same here Gohan
Pan:You wont beleive what happened-
Gohan:You can tell me back at the Lookout.
Pan:But-
Gohan:No buts, ill get you a Senzu Bean when we get there.
Theren Sea
Cytro:Looks like the "Allmighty" prince has fallen...
Vegeta:You havent won yet boy!
Cytro:You know... it looks like i have.
Vegeta:Ill destroy you for mocking me!
Cytro:Blind threats Vegeta, blind threats.
Vegeta:Arrgghhh!!!! Ill kill you! Final Flash!!!
???:Kamehameha!!!
Cytro:That Final Flash wont hit me- What the-
The Kamehameha wave hits Cytro dead on and leaves him open to the Final Flash
Cytro:Arrgghhh!!!
???:Ive been watching your fight... you were lieing the whole time... werent you Cytro.
Cytro:Awww your not as stupid as you look are you Goku?
Goku:Thats right, and just cause you pretended to be our friend doesent mean you know everything.
Vegeta:Kakarot!
Goku:Heres where the real fight begins! Haaa!!! (Transforms into SS4)
Vegeta:Kakarot... Hes to strong... You cant beat him.
Goku:Well see about that Vegeta. 10x Kaio-Ken
Vegeta:Youre still using that attack... no offense Kakarot but its outdated.
Goku:Haaaa!!!
Goku rockets up to Cytro but Cytro blocks the Kaio-Ken- with one hand!
Goku:What the-
Cytro:Kamehameha!!!
Goku:Arrgghh! Hey thats plagerizing!
Cytro:What are you gonna do about it?
Goku:This!
Goku @ Cytro:10x Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaa!!!
The two waves collide and seem equally matched but then the giant wave tilts toward Goku
Goku:Oh no! Haaa (Powers Up)
Cytro: I dont think so! Haaa (Powers Up)
Goku:Rrrrr
Cytro:Time to die!!!
Goku:Not yet...
The wave suddenly smashes over to Gokus side and engulfs the area where he was standing
Vegeta:KAKAROT!!!
Cytro:What a pity all of you tried, and all of you failed.
Goku:(Vegeta! Can you hear me! get over to the beach.)
Vegeta:Hmm... Can you excuse me a minute... I wont leave
Cytro:Fine you have one minute to make your Last Will.
Vegeta flies over to the beach to find Goku behind a rock
Vegeta:Kakarot! Youre alive! But how?
Goku:At the very last second i used Instant Transmission to get away.
Vegeta:We are both outmatched... how do we beat him!
Goku:Fusion...
Vegeta:Argghh not my favorite thing in the world but its our only hope.
Goku:Ready?
Vegeta:Ok.
Goku @ Vegeta:FUSION-HA!!!
A huge energy explosion emerges from behind the rock
Cytro:Arrgghhh! I just walked right into that one! Come out now!
Gogeta:Here i am...
Cytro:Where are- oh right... Fusion.
Gogeta:Now lets see whos better!
Cytro:My pleasure!! Haaa
Cytro throws a punch at Gogeta but Gogeta catches it in mid-air
Cytro:What!
Gogeta:My turn! Final Kamehamehaaaa!!!
Cytro:Arrgghhhh!!!
With Gogeta back in action things have taken a turn in the Z Fighters favor.Is the unbeatable Cytro about to die?
Next Episode Cytros Retreat
Theren Beach
Trunks:Uhh... Pan where are you!
Pan:Over here!
Trunks:What are you looking at?
Pan:Your Dad... it looks like he is having a hard time out there
Trunks:Lets go to the Lookout... maybe we can get more help there.
As Trunks and Pan are flying back to the Lookout,they past Gohan.
Gohan:Hey guys glad to see your awake.
Trunks:Same here Gohan
Pan:You wont beleive what happened-
Gohan:You can tell me back at the Lookout.
Pan:But-
Gohan:No buts, ill get you a Senzu Bean when we get there.
Theren Sea
Cytro:Looks like the "Allmighty" prince has fallen...
Vegeta:You havent won yet boy!
Cytro:You know... it looks like i have.
Vegeta:Ill destroy you for mocking me!
Cytro:Blind threats Vegeta, blind threats.
Vegeta:Arrgghhh!!!! Ill kill you! Final Flash!!!
???:Kamehameha!!!
Cytro:That Final Flash wont hit me- What the-
The Kamehameha wave hits Cytro dead on and leaves him open to the Final Flash
Cytro:Arrgghhh!!!
???:Ive been watching your fight... you were lieing the whole time... werent you Cytro.
Cytro:Awww your not as stupid as you look are you Goku?
Goku:Thats right, and just cause you pretended to be our friend doesent mean you know everything.
Vegeta:Kakarot!
Goku:Heres where the real fight begins! Haaa!!! (Transforms into SS4)
Vegeta:Kakarot... Hes to strong... You cant beat him.
Goku:Well see about that Vegeta. 10x Kaio-Ken
Vegeta:Youre still using that attack... no offense Kakarot but its outdated.
Goku:Haaaa!!!
Goku rockets up to Cytro but Cytro blocks the Kaio-Ken- with one hand!
Goku:What the-
Cytro:Kamehameha!!!
Goku:Arrgghh! Hey thats plagerizing!
Cytro:What are you gonna do about it?
Goku:This!
Goku @ Cytro:10x Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Haaa!!!
The two waves collide and seem equally matched but then the giant wave tilts toward Goku
Goku:Oh no! Haaa (Powers Up)
Cytro: I dont think so! Haaa (Powers Up)
Goku:Rrrrr
Cytro:Time to die!!!
Goku:Not yet...
The wave suddenly smashes over to Gokus side and engulfs the area where he was standing
Vegeta:KAKAROT!!!
Cytro:What a pity all of you tried, and all of you failed.
Goku:(Vegeta! Can you hear me! get over to the beach.)
Vegeta:Hmm... Can you excuse me a minute... I wont leave
Cytro:Fine you have one minute to make your Last Will.
Vegeta flies over to the beach to find Goku behind a rock
Vegeta:Kakarot! Youre alive! But how?
Goku:At the very last second i used Instant Transmission to get away.
Vegeta:We are both outmatched... how do we beat him!
Goku:Fusion...
Vegeta:Argghh not my favorite thing in the world but its our only hope.
Goku:Ready?
Vegeta:Ok.
Goku @ Vegeta:FUSION-HA!!!
A huge energy explosion emerges from behind the rock
Cytro:Arrgghhh! I just walked right into that one! Come out now!
Gogeta:Here i am...
Cytro:Where are- oh right... Fusion.
Gogeta:Now lets see whos better!
Cytro:My pleasure!! Haaa
Cytro throws a punch at Gogeta but Gogeta catches it in mid-air
Cytro:What!
Gogeta:My turn! Final Kamehamehaaaa!!!
Cytro:Arrgghhhh!!!
With Gogeta back in action things have taken a turn in the Z Fighters favor.Is the unbeatable Cytro about to die?
Next Episode Cytros Retreat
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No chapter today ill have Chapter 16 done tomorrow
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Sorry for the delay (If anyone is even reading this) ill get the next chapter done "soon"
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Chapter 16 Cytros Retreat
Theren Beach
Cytro:Urrghh man that fusion is too strong...
Gogeta:Finally your going to admit youre not as allpowerful as you made yourself out to be
Cytro:Ill kill you!!!
Gogeta:Do you have a part time job as a comedian
Cytro:Arrgghhh!!! 10x Kamehameha!!!
Gogeta:Owww that hurt... NOT!
Cytro:?!?!
Gogeta:Hmmm... this will be easy... Big Bang...Kamehameha!
Cytro:Arrrggghhhh!!!
Cytro is sent spiraling to a nearby island
Gogeta:Hmmm Hide and Go Seek?
Gogeta flies off to the island that Cytro landed on
Gogeta:Or Hide and Go Die.
The Lookout
Gohan:Ok guys what is so important that you have to bother me so much?
Goten:Well-
Pan:Cytros a traitor!
Goten:Grrr... I WAS GETTING TO THAT!
Pan:Oh.. sorry.
Gohan:What do you mean?
Trunks:He betrayed us and kicked each of our butts twice!
Gohan:Grrr We should have never trusted him!
Trunks:Yeah thats how all of us feel
Gohan:Hey wheres Vegeta. Dad said he was alive.
Trunks:He went off to fight Cytro and your Dad went with him.
Gohan:We have to help!
Goten:Its Ok.. this is Dad and Vegeta were talking about. They can handle themselves.
Gohan:Yeah its just... never mind
Inoes Island
Gogeta:Come out come out where ever you are
Cytro:(Hmm... Nows my chance to give them the slip.)
As Gogeta searches the island, Cytro sneaks back to the other side and flies off
Gogeta:So you think you can leave? Think again!
Gogeta quietly follows Cytro away from the island into a remote region of Earth
The Remains of Dr. Geros Lab
Cytro:This seems a good place to hide...
Gogeta however had followed a blind trail and ended up in a nearby village
Gogeta:I know you here Cytro!
Villagers:...
Gogeta:have any of you seen a guy with big black hair come by?
Villager:No.. we havent...
Gogeta:Urrgghh Where did he go
Dr. Geros Lab
At the lab Cytro noticed something strange about the scorched floor
Cytro:Hmm... Its scorched everywhere else... but not here
Cytro blasted the strange area and discovered a hideout that was untouched
Cytro:Well what do we have here...
The Lookout
Goku and Vegeta who ran out of time while looking for Cytro came back to the Lookout
Gohan:Hey Dad!
Goku:...
Goten:He got away huh...
Vegeta:ARRGGHH we almost had him!
Trunks:Well find him. For now lets rest
As the Z Fighters rest, Cytro discovers a hidden place under Dr.Geros Lab. What secrets lie in this hold
Next Episode: Cytros New Plan
Theren Beach
Cytro:Urrghh man that fusion is too strong...
Gogeta:Finally your going to admit youre not as allpowerful as you made yourself out to be
Cytro:Ill kill you!!!
Gogeta:Do you have a part time job as a comedian
Cytro:Arrgghhh!!! 10x Kamehameha!!!
Gogeta:Owww that hurt... NOT!
Cytro:?!?!
Gogeta:Hmmm... this will be easy... Big Bang...Kamehameha!
Cytro:Arrrggghhhh!!!
Cytro is sent spiraling to a nearby island
Gogeta:Hmmm Hide and Go Seek?
Gogeta flies off to the island that Cytro landed on
Gogeta:Or Hide and Go Die.
The Lookout
Gohan:Ok guys what is so important that you have to bother me so much?
Goten:Well-
Pan:Cytros a traitor!
Goten:Grrr... I WAS GETTING TO THAT!
Pan:Oh.. sorry.
Gohan:What do you mean?
Trunks:He betrayed us and kicked each of our butts twice!
Gohan:Grrr We should have never trusted him!
Trunks:Yeah thats how all of us feel
Gohan:Hey wheres Vegeta. Dad said he was alive.
Trunks:He went off to fight Cytro and your Dad went with him.
Gohan:We have to help!
Goten:Its Ok.. this is Dad and Vegeta were talking about. They can handle themselves.
Gohan:Yeah its just... never mind
Inoes Island
Gogeta:Come out come out where ever you are
Cytro:(Hmm... Nows my chance to give them the slip.)
As Gogeta searches the island, Cytro sneaks back to the other side and flies off
Gogeta:So you think you can leave? Think again!
Gogeta quietly follows Cytro away from the island into a remote region of Earth
The Remains of Dr. Geros Lab
Cytro:This seems a good place to hide...
Gogeta however had followed a blind trail and ended up in a nearby village
Gogeta:I know you here Cytro!
Villagers:...
Gogeta:have any of you seen a guy with big black hair come by?
Villager:No.. we havent...
Gogeta:Urrgghh Where did he go
Dr. Geros Lab
At the lab Cytro noticed something strange about the scorched floor
Cytro:Hmm... Its scorched everywhere else... but not here
Cytro blasted the strange area and discovered a hideout that was untouched
Cytro:Well what do we have here...
The Lookout
Goku and Vegeta who ran out of time while looking for Cytro came back to the Lookout
Gohan:Hey Dad!
Goku:...
Goten:He got away huh...
Vegeta:ARRGGHH we almost had him!
Trunks:Well find him. For now lets rest
As the Z Fighters rest, Cytro discovers a hidden place under Dr.Geros Lab. What secrets lie in this hold
Next Episode: Cytros New Plan
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 04:33 Jun02 2005
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you are improving. it could still get better, but im starting to like it. sorry it took me so long to reply
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Trunks245 Posted: 23:23 Jun03 2005
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Wow... you bumped it... well ill try to get another chapter done tomorrow
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Chaoticjaf123 Posted: 21:53 Jun06 2005
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ill read it tomorrow if you post it.
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