FF & RP Discussion thread

Ok Cez made one of these so you should all know how to use it, but anyways
Discuss and advertise your fan fics here or Discuss/ advertise your RPs here, simple?
I thought so.

This is a sample of my latest prototype for a fan fic: {please rate}




The Quest For Silbar{Sidestory}
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March of the Imperials
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Prologue: The Republic
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Silbar had never willingly let itself be throne into darkness, although when their weaponry became more advanced and shotguns and assault rifles were replacing the much used and much loved swords and spears of the past, they began to quarrel and so began a twenty year war,

After the twenty year war, Archabald decided that it was time to make a republic to guide the people, the people wern't happy with this idea so Archabald appointed people from each territory, now including Froston to help make the decisions.

After many years the Republic was still disliked many times just for one decision that they made and had to fight off rebellions from certain groups. It was the last straw for the people of Silbar when they introduced a combined nation, Republic army.

Although that all changed when a man by the name of General Khan and such associates as the evil Gilgamesh came along and proposed and Imperial army to destroy the Republic. At first the people were with the idea until a spy reported their evil intentions and everyone turned to the Republic to help them fight off the power crazed Imperials.

Although the Imperials were to be defeated the General Khan and his main henchmen lived on and created a new type of super-human.... The Chaos Angel, these people were loyal only to their master(s) and they would rather die than retreat and this added with the fact that they attacked in Grand Mass was a problem. The republic dealt with the Chaos Angels also but all was not over....

Ten years after the fall of Khan, he reamerged with a new, more fearsome breed of Chaos Angels..... they know had the ability to posess a human and create a copy of themselves in it, although luckily the human has to be dead beforehand.

The Republic has had many feirce battles with them over the course of one-hundred years and things look bleak, the republic are down to one major city and a few roadside villages and camps, nothing to be proud off.

Thought it was over?..... not likely. The Republic over the past ten years have a few forts and things now and are determined to win the war, this is where the specialists come in. Specialists; they are elite groups of four, better than the average man, in a normal squad their will be a medic/hacker, a sniper/support fire and a demolitions expert/support fire although even these men alone wouldn't stand a chance at their extreme missions without a leader, a leader being a great combat-specialist and the stadegist of the group also.

Their was a huge assault on the fortress of Kassam recently and the people of Silbar are in Chaos.... sounds like a job for the Republic.

Chapter 1. Dark Times
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{COMING SOON} {{if good}}

It's not bad, but it's not the best I've ever read either. And to prevent flaming and damaged egos, I won't compare it to Legacy. Pretty good.

My only true FF so far is Dark Gotenks Saga.My only winning RPG is probably...Wait,i have none...cancel that thought.Dark Gotenks Saga was the first series,and the second.It takes place after DBZ and GT finished,before the rumored AF came out.The whole story behind it is Gotenks lossing control of his power,and turns into a Pure Evil mutant.The only character created so far is Gogetenks,Gogeta (Goku and Vegeta) fusing with Gotenks (Goten and Trunks).To see it,just go read the first couple of chapters on it's thread.

the prologue wasnt tooooo bad, TestVirus101. I'm not the greatest at rating, or writing prologues though.
I think the Dark Gotenks Saga is pretty good, but it could use a bit more detail.
As for discussing my writing, for those of you who have read any of the chronicles, i have them planned out with very very rough storylines through part five.

Ok heres a Roleplay called :


The Mystery of the Death of Shadow Pokemon
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The Escape
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Prologue:How it all started
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It all began at the evil Pokemon snatchers Hideout,(Siren Sounds)(over intercom)We have just had a Pokemon knockout an Admin in "Sector 3." All Admins Report to Sector 9 to gather your equipment for pokemon gathering.(Intercom shuts off.) "Ok did anyone see the Pokemon that escaped"??? Asked one of the Admins. ""Sir No Sir." said another Admin. "Boss Cipher all we know is that the Pokemon that escaped was a Fire type." said a Cipher Admin. "There were burned spots where the Pokemon escaped."



Later on the Cipher Admins,Admins, and the Leader of Cipher found the Pokemon it lay dead.

They found out that the reason it died is because the door to its heart was closed so tight that its heart just stopped.

The mission,To destoy the Cipher base to make sure that nothing like that ever happens again.


Well what do you think of it??????

way too much like Pokemon Colloseum. otherwise, its decent

thankyou all for your thoughts I am currently working on a smash bros fan fic{side project}

Well, good luck with that. Should be interesting, and I look forward to seeing the result.

yes my friend who has super smash melle and loves it has decided to use some sprites to picture the battles and I am going to write them, it's a joint project.

On a side note, on RotSB what happened after pg. 55, anymore shards of Elemos, because thats the last pg I read and you had four.

Yeah, we've got 5 now. Just need Ice and Thunder.

ok and I think that Time war died or something because you guys have yet to post in a thread that was so active, see what happens when you kick me out? lol jokes

It didn't die because we kicked you out, Virus. It died because we let you in to start with. As it satys in your sig, "Once a spammer, always a spammer". Your very presence in that thread put others off joining it.

whats this??? so you admit it is dead... and I find that offensive.....{muttering}= "I'm gonna change my sig" {sobs}

Yes, I admit that the thread has died. And I will not retract my previous statement, because it is the truth, Virus.

ok thats cool I was just joking anyways... you don't like me and think I am a spammer... I accept it. How did it die?..... it was going so well...

It died because I allowed it to. Wait, what am I saying? It isn't even officially dead yet. The thread isnt dead until one month after the last post. So far, it's been... what? Three days? Four, tops. Four days of non-postage, a dead thread does not make, Virus.

well yes I agree, although I only sais dead because I couldnt think of something else to describe it with. But how did it lose interest then?

It just did. Okay? My crystal ball's on the blink, so I can't read people's minds and find out why they didn't want to join. Ask a stupid question, get a stupid answer.

Not join Cez, why yourself and Chaotic didn't continue to post. On a seperate note, when will you end the love stuff on City of the angels?, so Greg can have a fight with Chaos again?

When Jamarie and I are both ready. And Greg never fought Chaos, you monkey.