dark_wolf_33 Posted: 15:22 Apr20 2008
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Okay, I think I might be back into my groove. I would like some C, C and R on this one.
Mr.Clueless Posted: 16:23 Apr20 2008
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Better, but you still need to touch up on your compo/depth/flow things. And the text could be placed better, but... what's new, right? Not like that's something you never hear. Maybe place it on top of the right (NOT her right, her left) shoulder. And it's monotone. And, what's the lighting? The top left, or that big white splotch near the middle?
And so he said, "and there will be delicious cake", and with those words, I said, "I see what you did there..."
teh Fable Posted: 18:36 Apr20 2008
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The floral doesn't work, and neither does the text. Decent otherwise though.
dark_wolf_33 Posted: 20:22 Apr20 2008
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Yeah, I agree. Not my best, I still have some catching-up to do to return to my former glory.
cheating-is-good Posted: 20:26 Apr20 2008
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Did you make those tears on her face, or is it just me... Good to see another champloo fan here though
Great, I'm moving. Who knows when you'll see me again.
Gamerad Posted: 01:56 Apr21 2008
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Reds the only real color, add some purple or something.
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