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A Father's Atonement-My best fanfic yet, according to Cez...

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shiny zapdos Posted: 19:46 Jul23 2005 Post ID: 281464
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Thank you folks, great avatars there =P and e-mail some stuff woman! Lol [email protected], like it says up there somewhere... anyone want to guess what happens next?
Jirachi X Posted: 19:53 Jul23 2005 Post ID: 281492
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i think i know what might happen, but i dont want to spoil it
I'm gone - bye
shiny zapdos Posted: 20:10 Jul23 2005 Post ID: 281553
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On 23-Jul-2005 Jirachi X said:i think i know what might happen, but i dont want to spoil it
E-MAIL ME!
joslifer1 Posted: 20:18 Jul23 2005 Post ID: 281567
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As far as I'm concerned, Bura 'pushes up daisies' later on. Other than that, great story hol.
General, if you're not using it, could I have the army for a few days?
Jirachi X Posted: 20:40 Jul23 2005 Post ID: 281613
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On 23-Jul-2005 shiny zapdos said:E-MAIL ME!
ok, i will
my email address is [email protected]
I'm gone - bye
Cez Posted: 06:08 Jul24 2005 Post ID: 282647
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Back on topic, if you don't mind. There's a mod in the vicinity. Anyway, it's not bad. The first bit was much better, though.
10000 posts at last! w00t! Okay, I'm off into a quiet retirement. Don't bother me.
shiny zapdos Posted: 06:09 Jul24 2005 Post ID: 282648
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On 23-Jul-2005 joslifer1 said:As far as I'm concerned, Bura 'pushes up daisies' later on. Other than that, great story hol.
O___O Did he just use an English saying?! *Uses wooing emoticon*
t0ms0nic Posted: 06:37 Jul24 2005 Post ID: 282651
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*coughs* Two good chapters there...
Cleaning up the cobwebs and un-covering a old Legend... t0ms0nic, thy name is Stupid. Approach with 50 foot long (advised more) poking stick. http://i1.tinypic.com/s3fpqa.gif = My Sprites. Don't use without permission from me. MSN me at [email protected]
jamarie Posted: 07:04 Jul24 2005 Post ID: 282666
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You ok Tom?
And yeah,MINT dudette.:D


[right]~ J A M A R I E // C R Y S T A L U T O P I A ~[/color][/right]


shiny zapdos Posted: 16:13 Jul24 2005 Post ID: 284469
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Thanks... should I kill someone?
Cez Posted: 16:18 Jul24 2005 Post ID: 284485
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After all this time, you have to ask? Yes! Of course you should! Kill anyone! Everyone, even!
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shiny zapdos Posted: 16:31 Jul24 2005 Post ID: 284509
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LOL... OK, I will. Well, I might make a plot twist anyway... =P
shiny zapdos Posted: 07:40 Jul25 2005 Post ID: 285522
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Alright guys. This is my next bit... I want to play a little guessing game-what am I going to do to these two?

OR, what SHOULD I do to them?

::We're going to find your mother-now, you either tell me where her room is, or I painfully invade your memories, like I did with your father, and find out myself,:: The man snapped of her, walking over to the door with the child.


Bura began to cry, not understanding an iota of what the telepath was attempting to do to her or Bulma...


"WHY DO YOU WANT MUM?!" The half-Saiyan child shrieked, bawling now, attracting the attention of the woman who resided next door...


Bulma Briefs sat up in bed, a little worried as she realised her husband wasn't lying next to her...


"He's probably gone to train-or else, he's drinking coffee," she acknowledged, her anxiety ebbing away slightly.


"GET OFF ME!!!"


"Bura?" Bulma whispered, terrified... desire to protect her daughter fought fright and uncertainity-what was happening to her?! She had to protect her... but, if the half-Saiyan couldn't deal with the intruder-how could she?


"Of all the times to go out, Vegeta!" Bulma quietly fumed, rising from the bed and grabbing her fuchsia dressing gown from the wardrobe. She slipped it on gently, and fumbled towards the door in the absolute darkness.


Bulma prised the door to her and Vegeta's room open, incredibly apprehensive, and snuck quietly out of it, almost slamming into her daughter.


"Bura, why are you awake, honey? Are you alright?" Bulma enquired in concern, staring at Bura sternly and worriedly. If this was a stunt, that girl was in serious trouble...

^^^^^^ It's no stunt, Bulma... oh man, this just can't be good =P lol have a guess, and tell me what you think...
Cez Posted: 07:45 Jul25 2005 Post ID: 285523
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Bulma is about to get NIL-8ed, methinks. And about time, too.
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shiny zapdos Posted: 07:56 Jul25 2005 Post ID: 285530
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w00t?! That's so mean lol but yeah, sounds fun =P
Cez Posted: 08:05 Jul25 2005 Post ID: 285534
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You know it's the right thing to do. Go on, do it... Do it...
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jamarie Posted: 08:09 Jul25 2005 Post ID: 285538
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You already know my theory Holly.


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t0ms0nic Posted: 08:29 Jul25 2005 Post ID: 285567
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Awesome. (is that all I ever say now?...Know what?Forget it...)
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shiny zapdos Posted: 09:59 Jul25 2005 Post ID: 285659
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Lol I don't think I've ever heard you say that, Thomas dear. What do you think I should do?

Indeed I do Jam =D

Cez... well, you would say that.
joslifer1 Posted: 11:30 Jul25 2005 Post ID: 285768
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Short but sweet...Reminds me of a piece of a Hershey's bar!
General, if you're not using it, could I have the army for a few days?
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