DaReconGuy Posted: 13:03 Aug16 2010
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roadkillman997 Posted: 13:10 Aug16 2010
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Hmm...
This is pretty nice, however it could do with some more lighting on the left
The text.. ehh try a different font.
I don't like the "exploding" effect coming off the render.
Ehh... I'd say 6/10
This is pretty nice, however it could do with some more lighting on the left
The text.. ehh try a different font.
I don't like the "exploding" effect coming off the render.
Ehh... I'd say 6/10
Nic21 Posted: 13:50 Aug16 2010
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Dude, this is pretty beastly(:
To start off, it seems kind of chaotic and messy at first look. Maybe try and get rid of some of the clipping masks and add some more C4D's? and like RKM said, it could just use a tad bit more lighting in general. As for the text, I like that font, I'd just put the two words closer together, then put the whole thing closer to the focal. Try lowering the opacity of the text, or give it that "glowing" feeling. I'd probably blend in the focal some more too, just a tad on the sides. Then last bit of advice, I'd add in some C4D's, just a few colors to spice it up(;
Other than that, lovee it. Keep it up yo! ;D
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To start off, it seems kind of chaotic and messy at first look. Maybe try and get rid of some of the clipping masks and add some more C4D's? and like RKM said, it could just use a tad bit more lighting in general. As for the text, I like that font, I'd just put the two words closer together, then put the whole thing closer to the focal. Try lowering the opacity of the text, or give it that "glowing" feeling. I'd probably blend in the focal some more too, just a tad on the sides. Then last bit of advice, I'd add in some C4D's, just a few colors to spice it up(;
Other than that, lovee it. Keep it up yo! ;D
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