Might want to pick a more mature thread title, it'll make more people take the thread seriously. Also, I'd copy and paste the poem into the forum rather than linking to an externel site; it just looks neater that way.
So, onto the poem. It's interesting, to say the least. May I take it you don't care much for school?
Overall it's pretty good. A couple of minor points spring to mind however.
Point the first: in stanza two, your third line is twice as long as any other. It looks less neat, and doesn't flow as well as it could.
Point the second: in stanza four you use the same sound to end each line, which sounds inferior to how you were rhyming it before.
Point the final: In the last stanza you abandon rhyming entirely. Couldn't you find anything that rhymed with tomorrow? How about sorrow? Borrow? There's plenty to choose from.
Anyway, that's my thoughts on the matter. Hope they were helpful!
Seeing as I now have three short stories posted, I figure I may as well put all of them in my bio, so go there for links to "The Lab", "Daemon" and "Afterlife". Additionally, you should read my fic,
The Crystals of Narlkant