Chocol4teChip99 Posted: 16:40 Aug06 2011
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Give me advice and critique please
Sig#1
Sig#2
Sig#3
Credit goes to Yogi for sig
CLICK MY SIG AND JOIN MY CREW PLEASE
YOU MAY CALL ME COCOA OR CHIPPY
Alana is my best girl and an adorable frog
Sig#1
Sig#2
Sig#3
Credit goes to Yogi for sig
CLICK MY SIG AND JOIN MY CREW PLEASE
YOU MAY CALL ME COCOA OR CHIPPY
Alana is my best girl and an adorable frog
peanut butter ownage Posted: 16:58 Aug06 2011
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What is the Poll for exactly?
Chocol4teChip99 Posted: 17:12 Aug06 2011
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Oh and I just wanted to know it seems my smaller sig looks better XD
Credit goes to Yogi for sig
CLICK MY SIG AND JOIN MY CREW PLEASE
YOU MAY CALL ME COCOA OR CHIPPY
Alana is my best girl and an adorable frog
Credit goes to Yogi for sig
CLICK MY SIG AND JOIN MY CREW PLEASE
YOU MAY CALL ME COCOA OR CHIPPY
Alana is my best girl and an adorable frog
geezerguy Posted: 17:14 Aug06 2011
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Probably to see which one is the best?
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.Impact Posted: 21:02 Aug06 2011
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Your first sig is good, the Pika one. Although I dont really like the black thing on Pikachu.
The second one doesn't work because Zoroark is blurry. Always make your focal clear.
The third one plain and lacking in effects.
How do you make your backgrounds?
The second one doesn't work because Zoroark is blurry. Always make your focal clear.
The third one plain and lacking in effects.
How do you make your backgrounds?
Craizen Posted: 21:55 Aug06 2011
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The first one is dang good, though I kinda want xcf proof no offense. Its just waaay better than the others.
Second is, typical beginner. Work on blending and cleaner brushing, no text.
Third has potential, its just too airy and soft. Add a second color please.
Second is, typical beginner. Work on blending and cleaner brushing, no text.
Third has potential, its just too airy and soft. Add a second color please.
Cyndevia Posted: 22:07 Aug06 2011
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^Yeah I gotta agree with Craizen with that one :P
Symphony Posted: 23:14 Aug06 2011
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I'm positive he didn't make it. Quality aside, it's uploaded from PB while the others are from Tinypic. The other tags in that PB gallery look nothing like the other two either.
Assuming you made the other two though, the second one has an interesting background but perhaps too chaotic. Some nice foreground effects could've made this look good, if it weren't for the bad choice of render. Zoroark is too blurry.
While in that one you have may have done too much in the background, in the third one you didn't do enough. Also, any foreground effects that obstruct the focal (the caterpillar's head, I don't know its name) should be erased. Text is completely out of place, but if I were you I just wouldn't worry about text for a while since almost everyone struggles with it at some point.
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Assuming you made the other two though, the second one has an interesting background but perhaps too chaotic. Some nice foreground effects could've made this look good, if it weren't for the bad choice of render. Zoroark is too blurry.
While in that one you have may have done too much in the background, in the third one you didn't do enough. Also, any foreground effects that obstruct the focal (the caterpillar's head, I don't know its name) should be erased. Text is completely out of place, but if I were you I just wouldn't worry about text for a while since almost everyone struggles with it at some point.
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Zaltias Posted: 23:27 Aug06 2011
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Definite steal.
The other tags in the photobucket outclass the other two posted
General random link to the album (it's supposedly private, but this is the best google can give me)
http://partneryahoo.photobucket.com/albums/h394/RagePB/Tags/
10 - Supply Depot (1)
13 - Barracks
15 - Marine (1)
16 - Orbital Command + Supply Depot (2)
16 @100% Marine (1) - Command Center (2)
21 - Bunker (1) + Barracks (2) (3)
The other tags in the photobucket outclass the other two posted
General random link to the album (it's supposedly private, but this is the best google can give me)
http://partneryahoo.photobucket.com/albums/h394/RagePB/Tags/
10 - Supply Depot (1)
13 - Barracks
15 - Marine (1)
16 - Orbital Command + Supply Depot (2)
16 @100% Marine (1) - Command Center (2)
21 - Bunker (1) + Barracks (2) (3)
Symphony Posted: 23:30 Aug06 2011
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I don't think it's private Zalt. I got in the normal way just fine haha
http://s1107.photobucket.co...PB/Tags/
http://s1107.photobucket.co...PB/Tags/
Craizen Posted: 23:46 Aug06 2011
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Thanks Guys. I can't check links from the wii.
Choco, RIPPING is a SERIOUS OFFENSE in the Graphics World. I CANNOT stress this enough. It's down right dirty and shameful. IT WILL get you banned from any Graphic site and even get you in copyright, infringement issues if the wrong person. Honestly, its like STEALING a famous painting and calling it your own. Also, most importantly here, it can get you BLACKLISTED PERMANETLY from our forums. If we catch our hear about this elsewhere, its curtains.
« Last edited by Craizen on Aug 6th 2011 »
Choco, RIPPING is a SERIOUS OFFENSE in the Graphics World. I CANNOT stress this enough. It's down right dirty and shameful. IT WILL get you banned from any Graphic site and even get you in copyright, infringement issues if the wrong person. Honestly, its like STEALING a famous painting and calling it your own. Also, most importantly here, it can get you BLACKLISTED PERMANETLY from our forums. If we catch our hear about this elsewhere, its curtains.
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Zaltias Posted: 23:47 Aug06 2011
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Ahh probably because I tried getting through from the image and backtracing to get that
http://i1107.photobucket.com/albums/h394/RagePB/Tags/
Change the i to an s and it works.
10 - Supply Depot (1)
13 - Barracks
15 - Marine (1)
16 - Orbital Command + Supply Depot (2)
16 @100% Marine (1) - Command Center (2)
21 - Bunker (1) + Barracks (2) (3)
http://i1107.photobucket.com/albums/h394/RagePB/Tags/
Change the i to an s and it works.
10 - Supply Depot (1)
13 - Barracks
15 - Marine (1)
16 - Orbital Command + Supply Depot (2)
16 @100% Marine (1) - Command Center (2)
21 - Bunker (1) + Barracks (2) (3)
.Impact Posted: 23:53 Aug06 2011
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Glad to see I'm not the only one.
Craizen Posted: 23:55 Aug06 2011
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After awhile on PR, you get kinda good, even layer ripping. Though this was quite obvious.
Seriously, my friend, we're somewhat nice about.
Seriously, my friend, we're somewhat nice about.
.Impact Posted: 00:10 Aug07 2011
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Well, I like to give people the benefit of the doubt but I guess I went overboard this time :P
Xeta Posted: 00:28 Aug07 2011
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Blimey Chocol4teChip99 why you steal other peoples? It no make you look cool crikey! Don't let it happen again or Craisen will beat you with stick!
2: Focal blurry, ruins everything
3: yaaaaaawn. Also text bad.
Righto chap don't post other people's work. There really is no competiton around here. I mean there is the sotw (do they still do that?) but it's not really that serious. Keep improving your own and you'll eventually be able to make stuff like the first one.
2: Focal blurry, ruins everything
3: yaaaaaawn. Also text bad.
Righto chap don't post other people's work. There really is no competiton around here. I mean there is the sotw (do they still do that?) but it's not really that serious. Keep improving your own and you'll eventually be able to make stuff like the first one.
Chocol4teChip99 Posted: 00:33 Aug07 2011
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Ok fine I didnt make my sister NiNjA WoLf 46 did She uses Photobucket just dont hate on me she asked me to put it on here so I did
Credit goes to Yogi for sig
CLICK MY SIG AND JOIN MY CREW PLEASE
YOU MAY CALL ME COCOA OR CHIPPY
Alana is my best girl and an adorable frog
Credit goes to Yogi for sig
CLICK MY SIG AND JOIN MY CREW PLEASE
YOU MAY CALL ME COCOA OR CHIPPY
Alana is my best girl and an adorable frog
Craizen Posted: 00:41 Aug07 2011
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Right. I'll be checking. Tempted to close this for the time being.
.Impact Posted: 00:41 Aug07 2011
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I think you should.
qwertyuio Posted: 01:18 Aug07 2011
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Chocol4teChip99: In order to prove that NiNjA WoLf 46 is a sibling and requested you to post this, I'm going to need you to have her send me a message or post in the general graphics discussion thread confirming it.
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