dbz: good and evil chapter 1-12

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Chapter 11
Janemba is back
Rayku:uh uh uh (hes gonna kill me)
Janemba:I shall kill you with all my might roarrrrrr Victory Cannon!!!!!!!
Rayku:what!! That?s Gotenkses move!!!!!
???:Big bang attack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rayku:what the?
Janemba:who dares block my move
Someone or something flies over to them
Vegeta:I did because im not letting Rayku get killed I want to have a great fight with him one day
Janemba:like that will happen I will bring you to your forever death
Vegeta: shut the He** up Janemba
Janemba:you shut up Vegeta
Rayku:vegeta lets fight this guy
Vegeta:only if you don?t mess up again
Rayku:what do you mean mess up?
Vegeta:you remember when me and you faced Ray and Goku
Rayku:ohh that don?t worry I wont
Vegeta:fine then lets kill him
Rayku:Haaaaaaaaa Hyyyyyoooooooookennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vegeta:Final flash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So they fought Janemba
A smoke screen was made after the two attacks were launched
And no body can see anything
Janemba was knocked out but not damaged too much vegeta was surprised and was in shock
Vegeta:what!!!!! Hes only ko(ed) with both of those attacks I cant even stand both attacks
Janemba:uhhhhhhhhhh Vegeta you are weak and so are you Rayku ur even worse I bet your parents were even weaker than you
Rayku:what you say haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss4 Rayku:do you still want to fight me
Vegeta:im going super saiyan 5 haaaaaaaaaaa
Ss5 Vegeta:there now lets fight this guy and see how weak he calls us
Wow Vegeta is dead and helping Rayku defeat Janemba I cant wait until the next chapter this is amazing how Rayku used ss4 from anger instead of going to super saiyan 3 he used super saiyan 4. will Vegeta overcome super saiyan 5?just wait until the next chapter
Chapter 12
Raykus power

Sneak peek
(part of episode 40)
Chapter 40 (Last episode)
The Future
Rayku is now 24 years old
Ray returned to his timeline years ago (not many)
Goku:is still alive with super saiyan 6
Rayku only went up to super saiyan 4 (assent saiyan in ss4)
Ray is only 11 years old right now
Rayku:Rayku are you happy to be my son?
Ray:yes dad
Sango:hey Rayku do you know why we got married?
Rayku: no I don?t
Goku:RAYKU HURRY both RAYKUS COME QUICK!!
Rayku:whats wrong?
Goku:somethings in the city
That?s all I don?t want to spoil the surprise

Chapter 12
Raykus power
Rayku:man this guy is powerful my gosh we need Goku or some body
Vegeta:no I don?t need kakorot
Rayku:y don?t we ask him for help?
Vegeta: I cant tell you leave it at that Rayku
Rayku:ok
Meanwhile on
Earth
Ray:so you mean I cant even go to otherworld to see my dad
Goku:no you can go there he cant come here
Ray:ok so im going see ya Goku
Chichi: my gosh Ray has gotten so big I never knew he was so strong and tall
Goku see ya Ray!!!!
Ray flies to the otherworld
Ray: well im hoping that I make it in time cause there are two strong powers and my dads
AT OtherWorld
Ss2 Rayku: Vegeta cant you beat him im losing power
Ss5 Vegeta:not alone I need you cause im not even strong enough to beat this guy alone
Ss1 Rayku:yeah but Vegeta face him for a few minutes and then I could help you
Ss5 Vegeta:errrrrrrrrrrr
Vegeta punches Rayku
Rayku:what was that for
Ss5 Vegeta:for being weak
Rayku:im not weak I just need to regain my power
Ss5 Vegeta:your weak to me
Rayku:errr
Ss5 Vegeta:shut up and recover
So Vegeta fights the huge creature Vegeta doesn?t beat him but he does so much harm Janemba is very angry now that Vegeta ****** him off
Ss4 Vegeta: Rayku do you think you could help now
Rayku: ummmm ok
Meanwhile Ray is still traveling
Ray:hello
???: hi is that you Rayku?
Ray:no im his son Rayku
???: his son?
Ray: yes from the future whats your name please
???: King kai
Ray: ok King Kai
King Kai: who or what are you looking for?
Ray:im looking for my dad
King Kai:ohhh Rayku hes in HFIL (home for Infinite losers)
Ray: my dads not a loser
King Kai:I know that,he went there with his own will
Ray: ok King Kai thanks
King Kai:hope you come again goodbye
Ray: see ya
Ray left
King Kai: I wonder if theat really is Raykus son
At HFIL
Rayku and Vegeta kept up there fighting but Janemba was too powerful he was barly hurt by them
Ohh my gosh how will Rayku and Vegeta live in this battle?can they stay alive long enough for Raykus son to get there no body knows until chapter 13
Chapter 13
Will Ray make it?

im sorry guys but chapter 13 will only be on dbz: Good and Evil and so will the rest

oh o.k...

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no the other chapters will be on dbz good and evil cause the title of this thread "dbz:Good and Evil chapters 1-12" thats why the rest will be on the othher thread

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