The Evil of Team Ultimate

This is set 3 years after Ash gets through Sinnoh if he does that I'm not sure but anyway heres the story.



4 men walk towards a extremely tall building. All men were hooded so no hair or face was shown. (From the position of the camera we could only see their backs and all of the coats had a light blue U on it. The building suspiciously has no windows. The only clue of what was going on in there is the whirring sound every 10 minutes or so. The door is sealed tightly and a small machine is sticking out from the wall beside it. It looks like a credit card scanner but on the screen was a light blue U. One of the men produced a key card from his coat pocket and swiped it through the slot. It asked for a password. He typed in a 4 numbered number but the other 3 men could not see it(either could we from where the camera was positioned) .
The 4 men put their hood down as they walked in. 1 had black hair, 1 had grey hair, one had a red bandana on his head and the other had a blue bandana on his head.

They chuckled evilly as they walked in

Ding Ding. Ding Ding. Ding Ding. Ding Ding

A Pikachu scampered over to the Pokegear on the grass. Pikachu's trainer had taken it off to have a nap. Pikachu pressed 2 buttons on it. One to make sound and one to display who was calling. (The tech was a bit better) A hologram of Erika was displayed.
"Hello? Ash? Anyone there"? She said in a sleepy voice.

"Pika Pika" Pikachu answered.
"Oh hello, Pikachu. Lovely to see you." She smiled.
Pikachu smiled back and ran over to Ash.
Update rest tomorrow.

Don't double post and both are way to short if they were [b]longer[b] I would actually read this.

I concur. Typos before the story even began also rofl
read the rules. And legit chapter needs to fill up the average moniter, if you don't start doing this, then don't expect it to stay open.

What the hell is this? You've made a double post and your capter 1 is eight lines long. I suggest changing this.

Or closing it.