Cyber_Worm Posted: 11:51 Jul30 2007
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An epic zelda adventure without a Link... Let's start!(this is a mix between Majoras Mask och Ocarina of Time).
Namne:Shishuka Sharai
Age:21
Blood-type:B(at least, I think it is!)
Height:6'2
Weight:125 lbs
Weapons:A holy sword with a shimmring holy Aura around it.
Personality:He likes to eat, he's happy, he's cheerful and he's brave.
Skills:Frozen Storm(gives 3+ additional defense and damage, upgrades with 1+ each level), Healing(heals 10+ HP to two units), One Last Chance(triples the damage within critical HP, special skill, costs 5 Stamina)
History:When Shishuka was 12 years old, his country got invaded by Ganondorf's followers and killed his parents. He was the only one that could make it out alive, and now he lives with Raiku(sorry, copyright infirgiment), his best friend.
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Raiku Kosuka
Age:16
Blood-type:A
Height:5'4
Weight:120 lbs
Weapons:A magic staff with legendary light power.
Personality: A happy girl, stubborn, likes to help and it often causes trouble to other.
Skills:Magic Aura(Gives 2+ damage, 1+ critical hit), Poison(poisons a enemy), Time Steal(steals time from enemy, can only be used once in a battle.)
History:She's Shashuki's best friend. You don't know much more about her, then I do. That's all I know.
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What happends when Ganondorf and Majora's Mask get together? They are trying to destroy the world, but five brave heroes from diffrent countries tries to stop them from destroying it... A epic adventure filled with romance, action, comedy and drama! A story you just can't miss!
« Last edited by Cyber_Worm on Jul 31st 2007 »
Namne:Shishuka Sharai
Age:21
Blood-type:B(at least, I think it is!)
Height:6'2
Weight:125 lbs
Weapons:A holy sword with a shimmring holy Aura around it.
Personality:He likes to eat, he's happy, he's cheerful and he's brave.
Skills:Frozen Storm(gives 3+ additional defense and damage, upgrades with 1+ each level), Healing(heals 10+ HP to two units), One Last Chance(triples the damage within critical HP, special skill, costs 5 Stamina)
History:When Shishuka was 12 years old, his country got invaded by Ganondorf's followers and killed his parents. He was the only one that could make it out alive, and now he lives with Raiku(sorry, copyright infirgiment), his best friend.
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Raiku Kosuka
Age:16
Blood-type:A
Height:5'4
Weight:120 lbs
Weapons:A magic staff with legendary light power.
Personality: A happy girl, stubborn, likes to help and it often causes trouble to other.
Skills:Magic Aura(Gives 2+ damage, 1+ critical hit), Poison(poisons a enemy), Time Steal(steals time from enemy, can only be used once in a battle.)
History:She's Shashuki's best friend. You don't know much more about her, then I do. That's all I know.
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What happends when Ganondorf and Majora's Mask get together? They are trying to destroy the world, but five brave heroes from diffrent countries tries to stop them from destroying it... A epic adventure filled with romance, action, comedy and drama! A story you just can't miss!
« Last edited by Cyber_Worm on Jul 31st 2007 »
Pandaemonium Posted: 11:57 Jul30 2007
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Needs moar plot and profile. Read the rules, and try again.
Cipher_Wizard Posted: 19:56 Jul30 2007
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Here Cyber, let me explain a little more...
What you're missing completely in each bio is appearance (you know what that is, so we move on). The next thing you really need to describe more is your magic; tell us what exactly it does (most people prefer you don't do it with game lingo or damage counters) and if there are any conditions that need to be fulfiled before spells can be used. For your weapons, if they have any power, describe the power well enough so that you won't get busted by Teh Mod Squad for god-modding.
In your plot you haven't put in the five W's... and you already know what those are, so i won't post them because I'm lazy. Explain the timeline (because not everyone plays LoZ), the enemy, what side the main characters are on, and other stuff you usually learn when you start an adventure (even in a video game). If you want you can even start off your plot with a scene.
kthxbye
What you're missing completely in each bio is appearance (you know what that is, so we move on). The next thing you really need to describe more is your magic; tell us what exactly it does (most people prefer you don't do it with game lingo or damage counters) and if there are any conditions that need to be fulfiled before spells can be used. For your weapons, if they have any power, describe the power well enough so that you won't get busted by Teh Mod Squad for god-modding.
In your plot you haven't put in the five W's... and you already know what those are, so i won't post them because I'm lazy. Explain the timeline (because not everyone plays LoZ), the enemy, what side the main characters are on, and other stuff you usually learn when you start an adventure (even in a video game). If you want you can even start off your plot with a scene.
kthxbye
If you see me posting, it's because I've been asked to. Which I guess would mean I'm taking requests.
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