Interesting....The render quality seems bad, maybe that's cuz of the lack of richness in color and the glossyness. Interesting FX, they're well-peiced, but I just think everything is too dull. The flow seems to be out of place too. Text could be a bit better, and I guess the duplicate could work. Light source could be a bit stronger, as if you look on his shoulders and cap the light's pretty strong. The effects are unique, I like the effects. Could have a bit more "action" and detail on the right, but that could be just me. MEh, not the BEST, but I guess it'll work. Good job.
There I go once again, large critique to the detail. XD
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Goodbye, SC...The person he reminds you of must be a failure of epic proportions in order for there to be any similarity whatsoever.[i] -Pandaemonium