PhilXZ Posted: 11:06 Nov29 2008
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Well the time is coming so I thought I'd prepare. I tired to keep the colors on red shades, a Christmas color. Added a few small effects here and there. My GIMP forze when I first tried it and I lost the work, but this one looks better than the one I was about to make. CnC!
-R.R. Posted: 11:42 Nov29 2008
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Um...
It's highly too monotone, and the text just doesn't fit, like there was a lack of effort.
The brushes of overdone, and take up too much of the tag, and I fail to see any other effects.
It looks like you put everything in and just colorized it all red, and no lighting is present either.
I'm going to be honest, and probably hated for this, but the render or stock or focal or whatever it is looks like a scrotum... ._.
It's highly too monotone, and the text just doesn't fit, like there was a lack of effort.
The brushes of overdone, and take up too much of the tag, and I fail to see any other effects.
It looks like you put everything in and just colorized it all red, and no lighting is present either.
I'm going to be honest, and probably hated for this, but the render or stock or focal or whatever it is looks like a scrotum... ._.
Nashdar Posted: 11:49 Nov29 2008
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Add some colors to the focal or add some colors to the BG. Do something to seperate the two. They are on different levels and are two different things and need something to seperate them from each other.
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Green_Fire Posted: 11:56 Nov29 2008
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I agree with -R.R. I looked closer and saw...Christmas tree ornaments?
It has been said before though....
NOT ALL TAGS NEED LIGHTING.
You do need a few more colors in there though. Perhaps some green to go with the Christmas theme?
Still looks great, I see effects around the ornaments, and THANK YOU FOR NOT SAYING X-MAS! Hate it when people do that. ._.'
It has been said before though....
NOT ALL TAGS NEED LIGHTING.
You do need a few more colors in there though. Perhaps some green to go with the Christmas theme?
Still looks great, I see effects around the ornaments, and THANK YOU FOR NOT SAYING X-MAS! Hate it when people do that. ._.'
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v-gamer Posted: 15:48 Nov29 2008
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It would probably look better if you didn't go mad with brushing the entire sig and without the text. I don't care if it's supposed to be monotone; it looks bad with only one color. Lighting is off, composition is bad, effects are dreadful and are nothing related to Christmas, and depth could use more work. The focus is decent, though.
Phil, I haven't been doing graphics much longer than you have. Unfortunately, I haven't seen you improve the past month. Perhaps you're in a slump?
Just something to consider. However, if you are in a slump, this is a horrible time to continue relying on Brushes for effects in every sig you make.
Phil, I haven't been doing graphics much longer than you have. Unfortunately, I haven't seen you improve the past month. Perhaps you're in a slump?
Just something to consider. However, if you are in a slump, this is a horrible time to continue relying on Brushes for effects in every sig you make.
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Brøken Posted: 16:13 Nov30 2008
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If you believe tags don't need lighting, read up or dont post here.
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ozzo Posted: 16:28 Dec01 2008
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well if you didnt tell me it was to do with christmas I wouldn't have known what the hell you just made
it's very monotone. christmas is about gold, greens, silvers etc too. more colour. the composition and font of the text is disturbing.
by now you should really have improved, phil.
good concept, tho
it's very monotone. christmas is about gold, greens, silvers etc too. more colour. the composition and font of the text is disturbing.
by now you should really have improved, phil.
good concept, tho
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