...Can we only vote for one? Cuz I like both Coach's and Shadow's. If I had to choose one though, it would be Shadow's as it's base dmg sounds about right and is quite creative.
But, Coach, your's is also creative, but when you mentioned "tall shadowy figure with red eyes" it made me think of how Giratina came out in Platinum, but it's still quite creative.
Shiny_Explosion: I'm not really likin your's. For one thing, it's be a Physical attack, not special as you clearly said, "slashes the foe with a blade made as hard as steel and sends a shock wave with the other or tail, or slashes twice," sounds Physical, not Special.
I also think the damage and description could be better. The dmg is way too high for an attack without recharge or severe drawbacks. And the rest of the description isn't very thouightout, imo. But it was a nice try, keep it up.
P.S. What's with all the punch-based move themes?
My move:
HM/TM: TM
Name: Toxic Shower
Type: Poison
Attack Type: Special Attack
Damage: 100
Accuracy: Always Hits Target(Hits Flys and Bounces. Cannot hit Digs, Dives, Shadow Force, etc.)
Description: The Pokemon collects as much poison as it can in it's cheeks. After three(3) turns, it unleashes a barrage of Poison-laced, wisp-looking ball(s). Target has a 30-50 percent chance of being poisoned.
I just noticed that at first, it sounds somewhat similar to Poison Sting, but of course it's stronger and has a harder drawback.
Edit: Stupid filter. Added ().
Edit: Percentage marks aren't working. Used full word.
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