And I though I was a grammar Nazi >.>
Generally, I think I like commas a little too much. That, and I've been out of English class for too damn long. As for the quotes that end in periods when they should end in commas and be finished after the quote, please reffer to the last sentance. I haven't taken an English class in a year and a half, and I'm puzzled why I haven't. Still, thanks for the comments, they're quite helpful.
Blade's Four Sword style was, obviously, me trying to find a way to surpass One Piece's Zoro and his Three Sword style. So, while I was pondering how one would use four swords effectively in combat, I figured "Hey, why would he need to hold on to all of them at once?" I was very pleased with the outcome. I planned for his swords to be massive Cloud-Swords at first, but then I realized that that would be just a tad too obnoxious. Now his swords are all roughly the size of ******* swords.
Devin's fighting style will prove to be quite interesting as well.
What sucks is that I'm trying to make my characters have these really interesting fighting styles that I want to make as original as possible, but a character I plan to introduce later into this saga as one of the last introduced character has a pretty boring style so far. I'll work on that and see what comes out of it.
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