dbz: good and evil chapter 1-12

here is all the chapters that i have posted onmy other place but up to 12 only
chapter 1
Rayku and Marky

ss2 automatic
pow boom haaaaaaaa
(then rayku blasts the hyoken wave)
HYyyyy-ooooookk-eennnnn waveeeee!!!!!!!!
cell: No!!!!!!!!!!
Rayku:yes nobody beats me
Marky:nice Rayku this competition is having much more action now
Rayku: hey im mad good at fighting
Marky: say what you want but im better than you
Rayku:what i could kill you if i wanted!!!!!! but since your my friend im not so be happy
Marky: what (Marky sais in his head whatever)
Rayku: i heard that
Marky:what
Rayku: what you said in your head
Marky:...
Rayku: yeah i can read your mind
(marky leaves)
???: hey Kid
Rayku:im a teenager thank you
???: whatever
Rayku:loser im 14 shut your mouth
???:lets fight then if im a loser
Rayku: no id rather not
???:do you even know who i am?
Rayku: yeah i bet Jason evil Jason
evil Jason:well howd you guest
Rayku:well cause my brother Jason doesnt call me a kid thats how
Evil Jason: ha good thinking
ss4 Goku: hey Rayku you need help with this guy
Rayku:nah hes a nobody
ss4 Goku:ok if you need help tell me
Rayku: sure
(Goku flies away)
(Rayku transfroms)
Rayku: Haaaaaaaaaaaa
Rayku:beat me now im a super saiyan 2 now
Evil Jason: uhh uhoh
(fighting sounds)
Rayku: Darkness punch!!!!!!!!
Evil Jason:what Nooo please ahhhhhhhhhhh
Rayku:haaa mahahahahahahaha
evil Rayku :now i have control...
little did the Z warriors know Rayku had an evil side it came out once he was mad who know is his evil side going to help or kill the Z warriors who knows
Next Chapter
Evil Rayku

Chapter 2
evil Rayku

evil Rayku:mahahahahaha finally i got out of his control now i have control
Goku:hey Rayku you beat that guy down i see
evil Rayku:... uhh yeah i sure did
Goku:(somethings not right)
Evil Rayku:(uhh it looks like hes thinking but how do i use Raykus mind reading powers
Goku:(let me a ask him some questions that the real Rayku would now only)
Goku:Rayku whats your highest super saiyan mode?
Evil Rayku:hmmmm ss3
Goku:aha i thought there was something strange about you Haaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!
ss3 Goku:lets fight
evil Rayku:no i cant!!!!!!!!
ss3 Goku:yeah looks like i over came your power
Evil Rayku:What!!!!!!!!!NO!!!!!!!!!
ss3 evil Rayku:i told you my highest mode is ss3
ss3 Goku:well than lets fight
(fighting sounds)
ss3 evil Rayku:Darkkkkkk Hyoooookennnn!!!!!!!!
ss3 Goku:(whoa!) no im too weak well then i need as much power as posible haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ss3 evil Rayku:what the Hell is he doing?
ss5 Goku:NOw look at ny Golden hair black skin and orange redish clothes im too strong now
ss3 evil Rayku:noo i must get more power haaaaaaaaaaaaa
ss3 evil Rayku:what nooo
Rayku:what the where am i
ss5 Goku:Rayku your back
Rayku:who are you your power level is off the charts
ss5 Goku:i am Goku
well it looks like evil Rayku is gone but who knows if its the end
next Chapter
Gokus has little time

Chapter 3
Goku has little time
Rayku:well i see that no one bad is around so i bett
???:better scram thats what you better do
Rayku:who are you?
???:you could call me Ray because i have the same name as you unless you want to call me Rayku
Rayku:Ray huh well ill kill you in no time
Ray:like you can
Rayku: Haaaa Hyoken wave!!
(The Hyoken had no effect but it hit)
Ray:ha power to my body
Rayku: wait if that dint effect you then
Ray: got you Hyoken wave!!!!!
Rayku:ahhh
Ray:ha that tell us both that im stronger if your hyoken wave dont effect but my does
Rayku:tell me Ray why are you here? and how?
Ray: because i am your son in the future that you named Rayku and you did something to me so bad that i came here to hurt you while you were still a kid or teenager.
Rayku: so tell me how old are you then?
Ray:im 16
Rayku:it looked like you were older then me but still (a super strong son) you are strong but im better!!!!!
Ray:dad i dont think so
Rayku: dont call me dad call me Rayku
Ray: fine Rayku
Rayku: (Goku hurry up and get here before Ray/Rayku kills me)
Goku: (hold on Rayku im coming)
Ray: now its time!!!! darknes punch
Rayku what thats my move though!!!
Ray: to bad
Rayku: ahh ahhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
(Rayku falls to the floor)
Ray:there now i will leave him here
Goku: noooo how Dare you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ss4 Goku:this should be enough power
Ray: Goku is that you?
ss4 Goku: how do you know my name?
Ray: because im from the Future
ss4 Goku: ohh i see like trunks
Ray: Trunks is he still alive
ss4 Goku: yeah he is. Rayku are you ok?
Rayku: yeah Goku just fight
ss4 Goku: ok
Ray: fine you fight me too then haaaa
ss4 Goku: fine then
ss1 Ray:lets go
(pow boom super powerful attacks sounds)
ss4 Goku: man hes tough
ss1 Ray: theres no point Goku im stronger
Rayku: Goku dont fight to the death
ss4 Goku:Rayku dont worry i have your back
Ray: hey if you kill mei will never be born Goku and i gave you the idea of the fusion in the future time to kill the evil King.
ss4 Goku: but why do you have that kind of hair and clothes i never seen anyone but Rayku have clothes and hair like that
Ray: well im Raykus son
ss4 Goku: what you mean i was going to kill Raykus son
Rayku: you got it
so now we know Rayku had a son in the future is this son going to try and kill any z warriors is he going to help or return to his time no body know until the next episode
Next Chapter
Raykus son
commets/questions(hey is this guy good or evil?)

Chapter 4
Raykus son
Rayku:so Ray I disrespected you and hurt your feelings and you come to the past and try to kill me!!!!!!!!
Ray:yeah you got it
Goku: well Rayku this is your fault you know
Rayku:hey I didn?t know I became I mean father in the future
Ray: well you did become a mean father
Rayku:im sorry Ray
Ray:its okay but I need to show you guys something
Rayku and Goku: what
Ray:follow me
(so they follow Ray)
Rayku:what and who is that
Ray: that is the eternal King who was born in the Future
(shaking sound)
???: who dares!!!!!! Awake me
Ray: ohh no I see how he got birth someone found him and he awoke
Rayku: hey even my power isn?t enough for this
Goku: maybe mine is
Rayku: you think so try him
Goku: ok haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss4 Goku: is this enough power Rayku?
Ray and Rayku: no
Rayku: hey he was asking me
Ray: no me
Rayku:shut up!!!!!!
Ray: say that to my face and ill kill you
Rayku then you will die
ss4 Goku: guys please don?t keep that up we have the eternal King to face
Ray: Gokus right lets do it
(so they battled )
ss4 Goku:errr hes powerful but not strong enough for ss5 Haaaaaaaaaa
ss5 Goku: now I can win
(they battled again)
ss5 Goku: what this guy is invicible/immortal
Ray: why don?t you and my dad fuse
Rayku:stop calling me your dad I may be it but im too young to be a dad
Ss5 Goku: ok that works I just need to power down
Ss2 Goku: there now lets fuse Rayku
Rayku:you got it
Ss2 Goku and Rayku: fuuuu sionnnnn haaaaaa
Raygeta: yes we did it
Eternal King: who the hell are you
Raygeta:I ask the questions not you now
Who the Hell are you
Eternal King:nobody disrespects me!!!!!!!!!Die super Victory kamhamaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Raygeta: you must be a ******* a stupid one Super Hyoken kamahamaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eternal King:what how was my blast blocked?
Raygeta:because were stronger than you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eternal King: then I will kill the other one dieeeeee Dark kamahamaha!!!!!!
(Goku and Rayku unfused)
Rayku: Ray watch out
(Rayku jumped in front of Ray to protect him)
ss2 Goku: wheres Raykus body?
Eternal King: hahahahahaha mahahahahahaha I killed him
Ss2 Goku: nooooooooo this cant be
Dead world
Rayku: where am I?
King yemma: you are dead and you are in the dead world
Rayku: whoa that blast killed me
King Yemma: yes
Rayku: well I better get on a plane I need to go to HFIL for a few minutes
King Yemma:?
HFIL
dead Rayku: I better travel all over HFIL
dead Vegeta:how are you I never seen you before?
Dead Rayku: im Rayku Vegeta what are you doing here?
Dead Vegeta:I got killed by this guy he said his name was Rayku
Dead Rayku: it must be my son
Dead Vegeta: your son your too young to have a son
Dead Rayku: I mean from the future
Dead Vegeta:ok now I see
???:listen up everyone you may return to earth for 5 days then you will have to come back go and do what you need every second counts
dead Rayku: ok peace Vegeta
dead Vegeta: see you on Earth
well it looks like Rayku got killed at the right timing or else he would still be in HFIL
now he will be brought back to life for 5 days who knows what will happen until the next episode
Chapter 5
Rayku and Vegeta return to Earth

Chapter 7
Is Rayku dead or alive
Goku :I better travel back to earth
Vegeta: let me come with you
Goku: how?
Vegeta: tell them if they don?t let me out you will blow this place up
Goku:who King Yemma?
Vegeta: yes kakorot
Goku:ok I will
Vegeta:if he sais you wont blow something up or do anything just do it (blow something up)
Goku: (ok Vegeta I will if he sais something I will be right back)
Goku leaves
Vegeta: (I hope he gets it right)
Goku:King Yemma !!!!!! you better let vegeta Goooooo
King Yemma: are you a ******* or something I could if I wanted but he is evil
Ss1 Goku: let him out !!!!!!!!!!
King Yemma: NO!!!!! Goku!!!
Ss3 Goku:yes you better before I blow this place up
King Yemma : (if he blows the place up I may get killed in the blast L)
Ss4 Goku: well!!!!!!!!
King Yemma :ok! Ok! Ok ! go get him hes free
Goku :Vegeta your free to go
Vegeta (yes!!!!!! Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
Vegeta leaves to earth in a hurry with Goku
Goku: r u happy to be back on earth
Vegeta:now Babadi take over my mind
Goku: what!!!!!!!!! Vegeta!!!!! Nooo!!!!!!!!!!
Ss1 Majin Vegeta :now Kakorot fight me
Goku: fine then haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss4 Goku: lets go!!!!
Ss1 Majin Vegeta: (ha the ******* hes needs all that power to beat me)
Ray arrives
Ray:Hey Goku hey Vegeta
Ss1 Majin Vegeta:dieeee Kakorot
Ray: no
Ss1 Majin Vegeta:move out of my way Ray
Ss4 Goku:Ray its ok even if your almost a man I can handle Vegeta
Ray:alright Goku but wheres my dad?
Ss4 Goku: I dont know sorry
Ray:well I hope hes still alive
Ss1 Majin Vegeta: I killed him in the other world before kakorot came mahahahahahahaha Yemma knew I told him if he told anyone I would kill him
Ray:errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Dad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where r u!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ray goes and trys to kill Vegeta
(the battle rages on with Vegeta using full power)
ss1 Majin Vegeta:how can this be im too weak ahhhhhh whats happening!!!!!!!!!!
Ss1 Vegeta:no Babidi let off his control nooooooooooo
Ray: what is he?
Ss3 Vegeta:now I have reached power but im still not strong enough **** off from this Ray and let me and Kakorot
Ray:you need to control yourself or **** off
Ss3 Vegeta: haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss5 Vegeta:yes!!! I went right past super saiyan 4
Goku and Vegeta fight with rage all over the battle
Ray blasted the hyoken trying to hit Vegeta unfortunately it missed Vegeta and hit Goku
Now Ray has his super saiyan 1 and 2 to help him beat Vegeta how will this battle go
On the next episode Rayku saves his son from getting hurt but takes a lot of damage Vegeta may still have a plan if he loses the battle who knows hopefully no
Chapter 8
Gokus anger

Chapter 8
Gokus anger
Goku is on the floor from the hyoken
Ray: (awww man Vegeta is super saiyan 5 and im all alone here)Dad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please help me!!!!!!!!!
ss5 Vegeta:I al ready told you hes dead so shut up and fight me haaaaa
So they fought and ray was losing so far
Ray: awww man Vegeta is too powerful haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss1 Ray: there now lets figt then
So they fought again and Ray lost all his fighting power now Vegeta had the power to defeat him
Ss5 Vegeta: now Galick gun of the all mighty
Rayku suddenly comes out of no where and blocks Ray from harm
Rayku:uhhh I think im going to faint
Rayku fainted in the second Vegeta used so much power that he went back to super saiyan 2
Ss2 Vegeta:what the I lost all that power
Ss1 Ray:now I can kill him Hyyyyy oookkkkeeeennn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Goku awakes meanwhile a creature grew and grew strong enough to kill even Ray even Vegeta even The Eternal King
Goku:wait Ray
Ss1 Ray :yeah Goku
Goku:don?t kill him he should live
Rayku:after all that he did he should live
Goku:yes I am mad but I cant kill a fellow friend
Ray:ok Goku hyoken stop
Wow outstanding Goku convinced Ray to stop his Hyoken wave it looks like Vegeta lives another day next time this strange creature will come alive and will do something who knows what will happen in the next episode
Chapter 9
???? Rayku/Ray
for the first time ever Raykus son has a part of his own

Chapter 9
???? Rayku/Ray
Goku:Ray when r u returning to your timeline
Ray:I don?t know?
Rayku: (how could he get away like that)
Ray: (whatss!!!!!!!!!! Happening !!!!!!!!!!) ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Goku: ! Ray whats wrong!!!
Rayku: ray whats the matter?
Dark Ray: im no longer Rayku im Dark Rayku
Dark Rayku: you got that
Rayku:I had an evil form but never a dark form
Goku:we better try to help ray
Dark Rayku:my name is dark Rayku not Ray
Goku: You B*st**d how could you do that to him
Rayku: Ray !!! y you haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss2 Rayku:lets fight then Dark Rayku
They fought and Rayku was too weak even as a super saiyan 2
Rayku falls to the ground from the battle
Goku:no Rayku well I better fight then haaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss4 Goku: Now!!!!!! Lets fight!!!!!
Dark Ray and Goku fought
Goku won but his two friends were really damaged up
Goku: don?t worry guys I will save you
So it looks like Goku saved Rayku and Ray but now we know that Ray has a dark side/form
Next time Janemba will make a come back to life but not norm,al he will be dark/evil and not normal (half good half bad)

Thats a lot of writing u got there. U guys ever think about makin comics?

that is a comic all that i typed so far

Its good. 2 thumbs up.

thanks go to dbz:good and evil to see how fans liked it and to even get in the comic if you want you can choose the first dbz good and evil has 5 pages

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lol,i like the comic,but its a hard choice for people to chooses between mine and Jays,Rayku's and Chaotic-thingys comic.

well this thread is only for up to chapter 12 instead of to the last chapter (i dont know how many im going to have yet).

whoops i forgot to add chapter 5 and 6 i will add then in a few minutes

Chapter 5
Rayku and Vegeta return to Earth
Rayku:well im back on earth
Vegeta:great so now what
Rayku: lets go find Goku and Ray
Vegeta:fine
(Rayku and Vegeta found Goku and Ray)
Ray:dad your ok I mean Rayku
Rayku: yeah I came back to earth
Goku:great so you and Vegeta got to come home
Rayku and Vegeta: for 5 days
Goku:what
Rayku and Vegeta: for 5 daysssss
Goku: well we better use our time wisely then
2:13 pm day 1
Goku:Vegeta how about me and Ray verse you and Rayku?
Rayku:yeah that would be
Vegeta: shut up I will choose my decision soon enough ... Fine
Rayku:yesss
Goku:alright lets go then
(pow kaboom kamhama hyoke haaaaaaaaaa kennnnnnnn)
Goku: tough battle
Ray: but we won
Vegeta: we lost because of you
Rayku: hey I cant beat Ray
Vegeta: Kakorot was simple
Ray: admit it we won
Rayku and Vegeta: we did stupid
Ray: hey I was just saying admit it
Rayku:whetever
Ray: you better respect me as your son at least
Rayku: if I am your father who did I get with or Marry
Ray: this girl named Sango
Rayku: Sango!!!!!!!! Thats who I married with
Ray: yeah
Rayku I dont know if im going crazy or hearing things
Ray:come Rayku I need to tell you secretly
Rayku:what
Ray:Sango has had a crush on you since 6th grade thats what she told me dont tell her though
Rayku:ok (wow I never knew she had a cruch on me thats why she married me in the future)
Ray:ok keep it a secret
Rayku:fine
Goku and vegeta leave
Ray:lets leave since they left
Rayku: nah id rather stay here and train
Ray:ok fine be that way
Well now that Rayku and Vegeta returned who knows who else returned next time on this comic ???? and ?????? fuse to make ?????? and defeat ??????? who knows what will happen I do
Chapter 6
Gogeta comes

Chapter 6
Gogeta comes
Day 5 comes today
Goku:well Vegeta travling to HFIL with you was a great idea
???:roarrrrrrrrrr
Vegeta:what the Hell was that?
Goku:I dont know but it sounded dangerous
???: fight me fight meeeeeeee
Goku:come on vegeta lets go find that beast
Vegeta: alright kakorot lets go
So they went and found a beast called Janemba
Janemba:Roarrrrrrrrrrrr fight me now!!!!!!!!!!
Goku:lets fight him haaaaaaaaaaaa
Vegeta: right haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss3 Goku:alright then lets go
Ss2 Vegeta: Kakorot wait who is that he has in his hand
Ss3 Goku: uuuuhh its Rayku!!!!!!!!
???: nobody hurts my dad Hyoken waveeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss3 Goku: nice job Ray you beat him
Ray: yeah simple
Janemba:errrrrrrrrr
Ss3 Goku :Ray behine you
Ray:what the
Janemba uses a power that knocks ray out and grabed him
Ss3 Goku: ohno we better fight him
Goku and Vegeta fight but they are too weak to beat him so Goku asks Vegeta to fuse
Piccon: you ******* Janemba ill kill you haaaaaaa
Janemba: dieeeee you foolsssss
Goku and Vegeta: fuuuuu sioooonnnnnnn haaaaaaaa
Gogeta:now we will kill you spirttaul beam of deathhhhhh
Janemba:nooooooo how can this be?
Gogeta:yes we beat him
???:you may have beat him but not me
Gogeta turns around
Gogeta:uuhhhh its Cooler no problem I will kill him easily haaaaaaaaaaa
Cooler:yes im dead because of Goku that saiyan is going to pay hes a dumbass punk saiyan
Gogeta unfused
Goku:&
Cooler:Goku its you now its time to dieeeee
So they fought and Vegeta worked with Goku to beat Cooler so they succeded on winning
Now two Villans down 2 to go how willGoku or Vegeta win these next two or will Vegeta be a battle next time Goku fights ????? ??????
Chapter 7
Is Rayku dead or alive
Chapter 8 is
Gokus anger

here is the whole thing corrected by me below

chapter 1
Rayku and Marky

ss2 automatic
pow boom haaaaaaaa
(then rayku blasts the hyoken wave)
HYyyyy-ooooookk-eennnnn waveeeee!!!!!!!!
cell: No!!!!!!!!!!
Rayku:yes nobody beats me
Marky:nice Rayku this competition is having much more action now
Rayku: hey im mad good at fighting
Marky: say what you want but im better than you
Rayku:what i could kill you if i wanted!!!!!! but since your my friend im not so be happy
Marky: what (Marky sais in his head whatever)
Rayku: i heard that
Marky:what
Rayku: what you said in your head
Marky:...
Rayku: yeah i can read your mind
(marky leaves)
???: hey Kid
Rayku:im a teenager thank you
???: whatever
Rayku:loser im 14 shut your mouth
???:lets fight then if im a loser
Rayku: no id rather not
???:do you even know who i am?
Rayku: yeah i bet Jason evil Jason
evil Jason:well howd you guest
Rayku:well cause my brother Jason doesnt call me a kid thats how
Evil Jason: ha good thinking
ss4 Goku: hey Rayku you need help with this guy
Rayku:nah hes a nobody
ss4 Goku:ok if you need help tell me
Rayku: sure
(Goku flies away)
(Rayku transfroms)
Rayku: Haaaaaaaaaaaa
Rayku:beat me now im a super saiyan 2 now
Evil Jason: uhh uhoh
(fighting sounds)
Rayku: Darkness punch!!!!!!!!
Evil Jason:what Nooo please ahhhhhhhhhhh
Rayku:haaa mahahahahahahaha
evil Rayku :now i have control...
little did the Z warriors know Rayku had an evil side it came out once he was mad who know is his evil side going to help or kill the Z warriors who knows
Next Chapter
Evil Rayku

Chapter 2
evil Rayku

evil Rayku:mahahahahaha finally i got out of his control now i have control
Goku:hey Rayku you beat that guy down i see
evil Rayku:... uhh yeah i sure did
Goku:(somethings not right)
Evil Rayku:(uhh it looks like hes thinking but how do i use Raykus mind reading powers
Goku:(let me a ask him some questions that the real Rayku would now only)
Goku:Rayku whats your highest super saiyan mode?
Evil Rayku:hmmmm ss3
Goku:aha i thought there was something strange about you Haaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!
ss3 Goku:lets fight
evil Rayku:no i cant!!!!!!!!
ss3 Goku:yeah looks like i over came your power
Evil Rayku:What!!!!!!!!!NO!!!!!!!!!
ss3 evil Rayku:i told you my highest mode is ss3
ss3 Goku:well than lets fight
(fighting sounds)
ss3 evil Rayku:Darkkkkkk Hyoooookennnn!!!!!!!!
ss3 Goku:(whoa!) no im too weak well then i need as much power as posible haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ss3 evil Rayku:what the Hell is he doing?
ss5 Goku:NOw look at ny Golden hair black skin and orange redish clothes im too strong now
ss3 evil Rayku:noo i must get more power haaaaaaaaaaaaa
ss3 evil Rayku:what nooo
Rayku:what the where am i
ss5 Goku:Rayku your back
Rayku:who are you your power level is off the charts
ss5 Goku:i am Goku
well it looks like evil Rayku is gone but who knows if its the end
next Chapter
Gokus has little time

Chapter 3
Goku has little time
Rayku:well i see that no one bad is around so i bett
???:better scram thats what you better do
Rayku:who are you?
???:you could call me Ray because i have the same name as you unless you want to call me Rayku
Rayku:Ray huh well ill kill you in no time
Ray:like you can
Rayku: Haaaa Hyoken wave!!
(The Hyoken had no effect but it hit)
Ray:ha power to my body
Rayku: wait if that dint effect you then
Ray: got you Hyoken wave!!!!!
Rayku:ahhh
Ray:ha that tell us both that im stronger if your hyoken wave dont effect but my does
Rayku:tell me Ray why are you here? and how?
Ray: because i am your son in the future that you named Rayku and you did something to me so bad that i came here to hurt you while you were still a kid or teenager.
Rayku: so tell me how old are you then?
Ray:im 16
Rayku:it looked like you were older then me but still (a super strong son) you are strong but im better!!!!!
Ray:dad i dont think so
Rayku: dont call me dad call me Rayku
Ray: fine Rayku
Rayku: (Goku hurry up and get here before Ray/Rayku kills me)
Goku: (hold on Rayku im coming)
Ray: now its time!!!! darknes punch
Rayku what thats my move though!!!
Ray: to bad
Rayku: ahh ahhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
(Rayku falls to the floor)
Ray:there now i will leave him here
Goku: noooo how Dare you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ss4 Goku:this should be enough power
Ray: Goku is that you?
ss4 Goku: how do you know my name?
Ray: because im from the Future
ss4 Goku: ohh i see like trunks
Ray: Trunks is he still alive
ss4 Goku: yeah he is. Rayku are you ok?
Rayku: yeah Goku just fight
ss4 Goku: ok
Ray: fine you fight me too then haaaa
ss4 Goku: fine then
ss1 Ray:lets go
(pow boom super powerful attacks sounds)
ss4 Goku: man hes tough
ss1 Ray: theres no point Goku im stronger
Rayku: Goku dont fight to the death
ss4 Goku:Rayku dont worry i have your back
Ray: hey if you kill mei will never be born Goku and i gave you the idea of the fusion in the future time to kill the evil King.
ss4 Goku: but why do you have that kind of hair and clothes i never seen anyone but Rayku have clothes and hair like that
Ray: well im Raykus son
ss4 Goku: what you mean i was going to kill Raykus son
Rayku: you got it
so now we know Rayku had a son in the future is this son going to try and kill any z warriors is he going to help or return to his time no body know until the next episode
Next Chapter
Raykus son
commets/questions(hey is this guy good or evil?)

Chapter 4
Raykus son
Rayku:so Ray I disrespected you and hurt your feelings and you come to the past and try to kill me!!!!!!!!
Ray:yeah you got it
Goku: well Rayku this is your fault you know
Rayku:hey I didn?t know I became I mean father in the future
Ray: well you did become a mean father
Rayku:im sorry Ray
Ray:its okay but I need to show you guys something
Rayku and Goku: what
Ray:follow me
(so they follow Ray)
Rayku:what and who is that
Ray: that is the eternal King who was born in the Future
(shaking sound)
???: who dares!!!!!! Awake me
Ray: ohh no I see how he got birth someone found him and he awoke
Rayku: hey even my power isn?t enough for this
Goku: maybe mine is
Rayku: you think so try him
Goku: ok haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss4 Goku: is this enough power Rayku?
Ray and Rayku: no
Rayku: hey he was asking me
Ray: no me
Rayku:shut up!!!!!!
Ray: say that to my face and ill kill you
Rayku then you will die
ss4 Goku: guys please don?t keep that up we have the eternal King to face
Ray: Gokus right lets do it
(so they battled )
ss4 Goku:errr hes powerful but not strong enough for ss5 Haaaaaaaaaa
ss5 Goku: now I can win
(they battled again)
ss5 Goku: what this guy is invicible/immortal
Ray: why don?t you and my dad fuse
Rayku:stop calling me your dad I may be it but im too young to be a dad
Ss5 Goku: ok that works I just need to power down
Ss2 Goku: there now lets fuse Rayku
Rayku:you got it
Ss2 Goku and Rayku: fuuuu sionnnnn haaaaaa
Raygeta: yes we did it
Eternal King: who the hell are you
Raygeta:I ask the questions not you now
Who the Hell are you
Eternal King:nobody disrespects me!!!!!!!!!Die super Victory kamhamaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Raygeta: you must be a ******* a stupid one Super Hyoken kamahamaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eternal King:what how was my blast blocked?
Raygeta:because were stronger than you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eternal King: then I will kill the other one dieeeeee Dark kamahamaha!!!!!!
(Goku and Rayku unfused)
Rayku: Ray watch out
(Rayku jumped in front of Ray to protect him)
ss2 Goku: wheres Raykus body?
Eternal King: hahahahahaha mahahahahahaha I killed him
Ss2 Goku: nooooooooo this cant be
Dead world
Rayku: where am I?
King yemma: you are dead and you are in the dead world
Rayku: whoa that blast killed me
King Yemma: yes
Rayku: well I better get on a plane I need to go to HFIL for a few minutes
King Yemma:?
HFIL
dead Rayku: I better travel all over HFIL
dead Vegeta:how are you I never seen you before?
Dead Rayku: im Rayku Vegeta what are you doing here?
Dead Vegeta:I got killed by this guy he said his name was Rayku
Dead Rayku: it must be my son
Dead Vegeta: your son your too young to have a son
Dead Rayku: I mean from the future
Dead Vegeta:ok now I see
???:listen up everyone you may return to earth for 5 days then you will have to come back go and do what you need every second counts
dead Rayku: ok peace Vegeta
dead Vegeta: see you on Earth
well it looks like Rayku got killed at the right timing or else he would still be in HFIL
now he will be brought back to life for 5 days who knows what will happen until the next episode
Chapter 5
Rayku and Vegeta return to Earth

Chapter 5
Rayku and Vegeta return to Earth
Rayku:well im back on earth
Vegeta:great so now what
Rayku: lets go find Goku and Ray
Vegeta:fine
(Rayku and Vegeta found Goku and Ray)
Ray:dad your ok I mean Rayku
Rayku: yeah I came back to earth
Goku:great so you and Vegeta got to come home
Rayku and Vegeta: for 5 days
Goku:what
Rayku and Vegeta: for 5 daysssss
Goku: well we better use our time wisely then
2:13 pm day 1
Goku:Vegeta how about me and Ray verse you and Rayku?
Rayku:yeah that would be
Vegeta: shut up I will choose my decision soon enough ... Fine
Rayku:yesss
Goku:alright lets go then
(pow kaboom kamhama hyoke haaaaaaaaaa kennnnnnnn)
Goku: tough battle
Ray: but we won
Vegeta: we lost because of you
Rayku: hey I cant beat Ray
Vegeta: Kakorot was simple
Ray: admit it we won
Rayku and Vegeta: we did stupid
Ray: hey I was just saying admit it
Rayku:whetever
Ray: you better respect me as your son at least
Rayku: if I am your father who did I get with or Marry
Ray: this girl named Sango
Rayku: Sango!!!!!!!! Thats who I married with
Ray: yeah
Rayku I dont know if im going crazy or hearing things
Ray:come Rayku I need to tell you secretly
Rayku:what
Ray:Sango has had a crush on you since 6th grade thats what she told me dont tell her though
Rayku:ok (wow I never knew she had a cruch on me thats why she married me in the future)
Ray:ok keep it a secret
Rayku:fine
Goku and vegeta leave
Ray:lets leave since they left
Rayku: nah id rather stay here and train
Ray:ok fine be that way
Well now that Rayku and Vegeta returned who knows who else returned next time on this comic ???? and ?????? fuse to make ?????? and defeat ??????? who knows what will happen I do
Chapter 6
Gogeta comes

Chapter 6
Gogeta comes
Day 5 comes today
Goku:well Vegeta travling to HFIL with you was a great idea
???:roarrrrrrrrrr
Vegeta:what the Hell was that?
Goku:I dont know but it sounded dangerous
???: fight me fight meeeeeeee
Goku:come on vegeta lets go find that beast
Vegeta: alright kakorot lets go
So they went and found a beast called Janemba
Janemba:Roarrrrrrrrrrrr fight me now!!!!!!!!!!
Goku:lets fight him haaaaaaaaaaaa
Vegeta: right haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss3 Goku:alright then lets go
Ss2 Vegeta: Kakorot wait who is that he has in his hand
Ss3 Goku: uuuuhh its Rayku!!!!!!!!
???: nobody hurts my dad Hyoken waveeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ss3 Goku: nice job Ray you beat him
Ray: yeah simple
Janemba:errrrrrrrrr
Ss3 Goku :Ray behine you
Ray:what the
Janemba uses a power that knocks ray out and grabed him
Ss3 Goku: ohno we better fight him
Goku and Vegeta fight but they are too weak to beat him so Goku asks Vegeta to fuse
Piccon: you ******* Janemba ill kill you haaaaaaa
Janemba: dieeeee you foolsssss
Goku and Vegeta: fuuuuu sioooonnnnnnn haaaaaaaa
Gogeta:now we will kill you spirttaul beam of deathhhhhh
Janemba:nooooooo how can this be?
Gogeta:yes we beat him
???:you may have beat him but not me
Gogeta turns around
Gogeta:uuhhhh its Cooler no problem I will kill him easily haaaaaaaaaaa
Cooler:yes im dead because of Goku that saiyan is going to pay hes a dumbass punk saiyan
Gogeta unfused
Goku:&
Cooler:Goku its you now its time to dieeeee
So they fought and Vegeta worked with Goku to beat Cooler so they succeded on winning
Now two Villans down 2 to go how willGoku or Vegeta win these next two or will Vegeta be a battle next time Goku fights ????? ??????
Chapter 7
Is Rayku dead or alive
Chapter 8 is
Gokus anger

Chapter 7
Is Rayku dead or alive
Goku :I better travel back to earth
Vegeta: let me come with you
Goku: how?
Vegeta: tell them if they don?t let me out you will blow this place up
Goku:who King Yemma?
Vegeta: yes kakorot
Goku:ok I will
Vegeta:if he sais you wont blow something up or do anything just do it (blow something up)
Goku: (ok Vegeta I will if he sais something I will be right back)
Goku leaves
Vegeta: (I hope he gets it right)
Goku:King Yemma !!!!!! you better let vegeta Goooooo
King Yemma: are you a*******or something I could if I wanted but he is evil
Ss1 Goku: let him out !!!!!!!!!!
King Yemma: NO!!!!! Goku!!!
Ss3 Goku:yes you better before I blow this place up
King Yemma : (if he blows the place up I may get killed in the blast L)
Ss4 Goku: well!!!!!!!!
King Yemma :ok! Ok! Ok ! go get him hes free
Goku :Vegeta your free to go
Vegeta (yes!!!!!! Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
Vegeta leaves to earth in a hurry with Goku
Goku: r u happy to be back on earth
Vegeta:now Babadi take over my mind
Goku: what!!!!!!!!! Vegeta!!!!! Nooo!!!!!!!!!!
Ss1 Majin Vegeta :now Kakorot fight me
Goku: fine then haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss4 Goku: lets go!!!!
Ss1 Majin Vegeta: (ha the*******hes needs all that power to beat me)
Ray arrives
Ray:Hey Goku hey Vegeta
Ss1 Majin Vegeta:dieeee Kakorot
Ray: no
Ss1 Majin Vegeta:move out of my way Ray
Ss4 Goku:Ray its ok even if your almost a man I can handle Vegeta
Ray:alright Goku but wheres my dad?
Ss4 Goku: I dont know sorry
Ray:well I hope hes still alive
Ss1 Majin Vegeta: I killed him in the other world before kakorot came mahahahahahahaha Yemma knew I told him if he told anyone I would kill him
Ray:errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Dad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where r u!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ray goes and trys to kill Vegeta
(the battle rages on with Vegeta using full power)
ss1 Majin Vegeta:how can this be im too weak ahhhhhh whats happening!!!!!!!!!!
Ss1 Vegeta:no Babidi let off his control nooooooooooo
Ray: what is he?
Ss3 Vegeta:now I have reached power but im still not strong enough****off from this Ray and let me and Kakorot
Ray:you need to control yourself or****off
Ss3 Vegeta: haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss5 Vegeta:yes!!! I went right past super saiyan 4
Goku and Vegeta fight with rage all over the battle
Ray blasted the hyoken trying to hit Vegeta unfortunately it missed Vegeta and hit Goku
Now Ray has his super saiyan 1 and 2 to help him beat Vegeta how will this battle go
On the next episode Rayku saves his son from getting hurt but takes a lot of damage Vegeta may still have a plan if he loses the battle who knows hopefully no
Chapter 8
Gokus anger

Chapter 8
Gokus anger
Goku is on the floor from the hyoken
Ray: (awww man Vegeta is super saiyan 5 and im all alone here)Dad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please help me!!!!!!!!!
ss5 Vegeta:I al ready told you hes dead so shut up and fight me haaaaa
So they fought and ray was losing so far
Ray: awww man Vegeta is too powerful haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss1 Ray: there now lets figt then
So they fought again and Ray lost all his fighting power now Vegeta had the power to defeat him
Ss5 Vegeta: now Galick gun of the all mighty
Rayku suddenly comes out of no where and blocks Ray from harm
Rayku:uhhh I think im going to faint
Rayku fainted in the second Vegeta used so much power that he went back to super saiyan 2
Ss2 Vegeta:what the I lost all that power
Ss1 Ray:now I can kill him Hyyyyy oookkkkeeeennn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Goku awakes meanwhile a creature grew and grew strong enough to kill even Ray even Vegeta even The Eternal King
Goku:wait Ray
Ss1 Ray :yeah Goku
Goku:don?t kill him he should live
Rayku:after all that he did he should live
Goku:yes I am mad but I cant kill a fellow friend
Ray:ok Goku hyoken stop
Wow outstanding Goku convinced Ray to stop his Hyoken wave it looks like Vegeta lives another day next time this strange creature will come alive and will do something who knows what will happen in the next episode
Chapter 9
???? Rayku/Ray
for the first time ever Raykus son has a part of his own

Chapter 9
???? Rayku/Ray
Goku:Ray when r u returning to your timeline
Ray:I don?t know?
Rayku: (how could he get away like that)
Ray: (whatss!!!!!!!!!! Happening !!!!!!!!!!) ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Goku: ! Ray whats wrong!!!
Rayku: ray whats the matter?
Dark Ray: im no longer Rayku im Dark Rayku
Dark Rayku: you got that
Rayku:I had an evil form but never a dark form
Goku:we better try to help ray
Dark Rayku:my name is dark Rayku not Ray
Goku: You B*st**d how could you do that to him
Rayku: Ray !!! y you haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss2 Rayku:lets fight then Dark Rayku
They fought and Rayku was too weak even as a super saiyan 2
Rayku falls to the ground from the battle
Goku:no Rayku well I better fight then haaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ss4 Goku: Now!!!!!! Lets fight!!!!!
Dark Ray and Goku fought
Goku won but his two friends were really damaged up
Goku: don?t worry guys I will save you
So it looks like Goku saved Rayku and Ray but now we know that Ray has a dark side/form
Next time Janemba will come back to life but not normal, he will be dark/evil and not normal (half good half bad)
Chapter 10
Janemba returns (Evil)
Rayku:whoa where am I?
Chichi:you?re here at Gokus house
Rayku:what happened Goku?
Goku:ummmm you and Ray got the fight of a life time and I stoped Ray and saved you both
Rayku:ok reminde me of that when I want to fight Ray
Goku: ok Rayku
Rayku: wheres Ray though
Goku and Chichi:hes over in the frint room watching Tv (Tele-vision)
Rayku:ok I just wanted to make sure hes safe
Chichi:y?
Rayku: Goku didn?t you tell her yet?
Goku:what?about you and your son
Rayku:yeah
Chichi:son?Rayku is too young to have a Son is it possible?
Goku:in the future
Chichi:what do u mean by the future
Goku:Ray is Raykus son from the future
Chichi:no wonder why hes taller then him
Rayku:hey it?s the future what do you think hes going to be shorter than me and beable to travel back in time
Chichi:well its possible right?
Goku:yeah I think so
Rayku:ok Goku I think im ok but I need to return to the otherworld they only let me come here on earth to help my son Ray
Goku:ok see ya
Chichi:bye Rayku
Ray:hey wheres Rayku?
Goku: he just left to go back to otherworld
Ray: huh he?s still dead
Goku: yeah he just came back to try and save you
Ray leaves
Chichi: Goku do you really think that Rayku will have a son named Ray when he grows up
Goku: yeah but Rays real name is Rayku we call him Ray cause they both have the same name
Rayku:hey why is everyone here dead?
???:Roarrrrrrrrrr I am back and Evil
Rayku:who are you? and y r u here?\
???:my name is Janemba I am back and evil
it looks like Ray is all alone in otherworld and has to face Janemba evil will he get killed or will someone rescue him who knows hopefully Rayku kills Janemba or some body
Next chapter
Chapter 11
Janemba is Back

WELL RAYKU MY FAVOUR IS CAN I HELP YOU WITH ANY THING???AND YOU EVER CONSIDER TAKING A JOB AS A DBAF EPISODE DESINGER????

yeah can you put me in the comic please

YEAH ME TOO PLZ AFTER ALL I AM THE BIGGEST FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeah you have to put your biggest fan in

AND SECOND BIGGEST LIKE JAY!!!

yeah