dbz: good and evil

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Chapter 25
Jasons super saiyan 13/
Jack the Ult. Fighter
Jack:hey Jason is it ok if I teach these guys some moves?
Jason:yeah as long as there not evil
Jack:ok I just wanted to check on you
10:00 PM
Jay:ok Vegetunks see you at school
Vegetunks:fine bye
Vegetunks and Jay leave
Jason(Jays half bro/Jhb):hey Jay
Jay:hello Jason
Nancy:hey Jay don?t you think its time to go to bed?
Jay:in a few
Nancy:ok
10:10
Vegetunks and Jay are sleeping
OtherWorld
Dead Rayku:HEY ELDER KAIIIIII
Elder Kai:yes Rayku
Dead Rayku:can I come up there with you?
Elder Kai:fine
KibitoKai:hello Rayku
Rayku:hey Kibitokai/shin
Elder Kai:so why do you want to be here?
Dead Rayku:cause I want you to train me
The next day
School started
Teacher:hey Jay do you have any idea where Rayku is?
Jay:no
Teacher:ok
Jay:why?
Teacher:because you always hang out with him
Jay:nope I have know idea where he is (if I tell her hes deadn then she will think im lieing so id rather say I don?t know)
Later?
Sango:hey,Jay
Jay:yeah Sango
Sango:have you seen Rayku?
Jay:if you will believe me I will tell you where he is
Sango:ok promise
Jay:well hes dead
Sango:who killed him
Jay:Drak Kid but, Dark Kid got killed by his brother
Sango:you mean Jason
Jay:yeah
(make a note that Jays bro will be named Jake instead of Jason cause theres two Jasons in this comic)
Sango:k thanks Jay
Sango leaves
Jay:your welcome
Vegetunks:hey Jay lets walk home together
Jay:ok
Well now that Raykus dead it looks like nothing bad has happened ever since but theres a weak power coming and he/she is evil and old who is it
Next time on Dbzw Frieza and Cell will return and face Jack,Jay,Jason and Vegetunks and they will battle to the end

Chapter 26
Frieza and Cell return

hey you guys im trying to get up to Chapter 30 today so i have ten more chapters to go then the Future Saga

if no body respondes im not going to post the next chapter cause its already im just not posting it.
im making the nxt one too and soon there will be so many done but none here so you guys should start chatting/talking

Please post this in the General Area

ok.... im now just feeling lonley now cmon people talk say something so a can post these next few Chapters

Chapter 27
Raykus ReBirth
Rayku:well I guest all that training was for nothing
Elder Kai:hey Rayku your Halos gone why is that?
Rayku:dunno
KibitoShin:hey now you can go back to earth
Rayku returns to Earth and makes it to school
Jay whispers to Rayku:yo where you been?
Rayku whispers to Jay:umm trying to get back to earth
Teacher:well Rayku im glad your back
Rayku:?
Jay: (well I bet Raykus mad to be back in school)
(ka pow boom)
Rayku leaves
The smoke screen wheres off
Teacher:errrrrr wheres Rayku now?
Class:?
Rayku:now its time to get to Kamis look out
Kamis lookout

Rayku:hey what the heck
???: Z balls now come above me and grant my wish
Rayku:hey what the heck are you doing?
Garlick Jr.:I no its you I wish he was an 55 year old adult
Shenron:your wish is granted
Ss4 Rayku: you know making me older made me stronger
Garlick Jr.:what the oh no I wish he was a kid again
Shenron:your wish is granted anything else?
Kid Rayku:well I may be a kid but im still stronger then you haaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!
Garlick Jr.:what the He**
Ss1 Kid Rayku:I may have only super saiyan 1 but im really strong
Garlick Jr. leaves
Kid Rayku:errr that coward
Will Rayku being a kid help out with his battles? maybe maybe not there are some advantages being a kid
Next time on Dragonball z warriors Rayku will tell Jay and Vegetunks about what happened and he will explain why he cant go back to school
Chapter 28
Raykus child age

ben you still here?

Dbz WARRIOR! where are you!!!!??????

cool comic Rayku can you make some more

Please dude, put this where it belongs. I don't want to see you get into trouble (hint, hint).

ok now im really lonley now

what?
put what where what belongs?

every time i say im lonley dbz warrior speaks

Me too sorry i was just watching tv awsome COMIX BY THE WAY!

hes not done

Chapter 28
Raykus Child age
Jay:hey Vegetunks wheres Raykus this time?
Kid Rayku:hey guys
Jay:who are you?
Kid Rayku: its me Rayku
Jay:you cant be Rayku
Kid Rayku:if im not Rayku how do I know this
Jay:what
Kid Rayku:that your 10 Jay and Vegetunks your 13
Vegetunks:he cant be lying if he knows our ages
Jay:no ok then whats my brothers name?
Kid Rayku:its either Jake or Jason
Jay:so Rayku how?d you get small like that im wonmdering?
Kid Rayku:well remember when I caused that smoke screen and left the class room
Jay:yeah I bet since you left the classroom with out permission so this happened to you
Kid Rayku:what I couldent help it to leave the classroom
Jay:you look like an 8 year old kid
Kid Rayku:hey its Garlick Jr.s fault
Vegetunks:maybe but you?re the one who left the classroom Rayku
Kid Rayku:ok maybe you guys are right but hey don?t blame me for all of this
Jay:no we should blame you for all of this go see your son
Kid Rayku:are you crazy, he might try to kill me for getting turned into a kid
Jay:yeah but you need to tell him what happened and maybe he could help
Kid Rayku: fine
Rayku and his friends go to Gokus house
Kid Rayku:hey Chichi wheres Ray
Chichi:hey who are you
Kid Rayku:its me Rayku
Jay:yeah its him he got turned in to a Kid
Chichi:oh hes at Bulmas place
They Travel to Bulmas house at Capsule Corp.
Kid Rayku:hey Bulma wheres Ray?
Bulma:hey who are you little boy?
Kid Rayku:its me Rayku
Bulma: huh lol (Laugh out loud)
Jay:its true
Bulma:oh
Bulma:he in the frontroom
Kid Rayku:hey Ray
Ray:huh hey who are you
Jay:its Rayku
Ray:oh what happened to you Rayku?
Kid Rayku:Garlick Jr. first tried to turn me into a adult so I was extra powerful then then he turned me into a kid and ran away
Ray:and where was this at
Kid Rayku: Kamis lookout
Kid Goku:hey you guys
Jay:huh Gokus a kid too
Kid Goku:yeah Garlick Jr. did it
Kid Rayku:yeah the same thing happened to me
Is this true both Goku and Rayku have been turned into kids by Shenron will this effect there life a lot?
Next time on Dbzw Rayku and Goku will stay with each other through out the day and fight Cooler he is dead but on earth
(Note make sure you noticed I skpied chapter 29 cause I didn?t feel like doing it now or ever)
Chapter 30
1 year later

It's my "job" dude, I'm not trying to be rude or anything like that.

cool comics

Really cool!!!