FF&RP Discussion Thread: Generation IV

Cool now to wait for menace to return and post another chapter for his story.

Menace?

Why do you think Menace is going to?

MenaceSG he posted a short opening for some story, its pretty interesting you should read it Craiz.
I don't necessarily thing he will return I am more of hoping he will.

Menace never really did stick around much though. Been ages

Pessimistic one aren't you? I am sure he will return gotta believe in him. So whose got next chapter in FRP?

Realistic.

Umm I can look over what we got from my phone but I won't be near a decent keyboard till monday

I'll take the next chapter, then. But I hope you guys can wait a bit for the style of narrative that I am aiming for has been changing of late. Nonetheless, I'll do my best, so fret not.

Uhh so hi

Pessimists are not allowed to say greetings, NO!

So what part of you guys being able to continue he FRP without me don't you understand. I was enjoying some nice relaxation but no then my FRP not continuing senses started tingling at full power.

Honestly night, stop being so jumpy and trust other people for once. I mean we've put spiders in your pillows, yeah, but that doesn't mean they were poisonous. Or if they would be.

Shoot, messed that up.

((on-topic; Part 2 coming soon))

« Last edited by Spiegel on Jul 23rd 2013 »

Sorry for the absence guys, been really busy.

Spiegel, nice work so far. Just please keep in mind that no one, save for maybe that previous leader of the Unknowns you mentioned, is supposed to know Garm is in charge of them aside from loyal members of the group. No. One. They're called the Unknowns for a reason.

And I'd like to just mention that Garm is supposed to be the founder, but this doesn't mean he was the leader initially. I rather like this development, very good idea on your part. This is why I love working with multiple authors on the same story. It's just so interesting!

Spieg good chapter. Read first little part when I get more time I will read the rest but so far very interesting and glad you chose to contribute. Nice to see you back pengy. Nice to see Spieg enjoying the power he has over the story when taking a chapter.
The issue of leader of Unknowns and all that just make sure you do clarify in your chapters what you want to be set in stone. Can't remember if ya did or not. If ya did then Spieg and everyone else just needs to make sure they check and all.

Oh and pengy go delete that guys post about life. It is unworthy of being in my FRPs glorious thread.

Hmm I may come back to writing here. I ended up in one of my moods and it lasted longer than most times before

Thats good to hear. Activity here would be welcome so um go bang your head till that writing mood returns or you get dizzy. Either is fine.

Night, I'm not a mod anymore. I can't do that. Craiz or someone that is will have to do it. I think you might be able to, it is your thread.

Mmaky

I'll right for the FRP soon and Joka. I really don't wanna RP atm

Alright. Let's get some life back in here people!

Name: Jak
Gender: Male
Age:250 (but due to memory loss he thinks he is only 25)
Height: 5'11
Weight: 180
Race: Unknown (I will elaborate later)
Powers: Strong attention to detail, faster health regeneration, telekinesis
Weapons: Specialized revolver that reloads in cartridges rather than individual rounds equipped with a flashlight, 14 inch titanium machete, and a lighter
Skills: marksman, repair, investigative skills
Appearance: a military uniform from before the city was built
Bio:Served in the military of this planets past but due to an accident he lost all his memory so now he doesn't know his real age or race but the reflexes and muscle memory he learned in the military still exist
Here's my Advent of the Nexus bio.

Okay. So, keep an eye on what's being said in Advent. There are two points at which you can enter soon.

The first is when the current conversation ends and the Nexus is accessed. You just have to fall into view. People randomly falling into the Nexus isn't uncommon. To give you an idea of what the Nexus is like, it's basically a black circular platform with leather couches lining it and at one end is a second platform that serves as the entry point/landing pad. All around the platform in the air, above and below, is a matrix of golden lines crisscrossing every which way. Those are the paths available. Currently the focus is on Zada's path as I'm using it to steer the plot in the direction I want. It is my story after all, you and the other two are just providing characters to react to the situations.

The second is when Omega offers help in the next few posts. This can lead to method one as well, by having you crash into the Nexus after that and then Pan will open a portal and things will proceed to the second stop on Zada's path with a few little bits added into it. Either way, if you see me mention that the Nexus has been accessed, just drop Jak into it somehow.

And a little tip to make things easier for us to respond to and to make it more interesting to read is to describe your character's movements and reactions in the post, not just what they say. And use things like italics to indicate thought.

If you want some prime examples of this look up an old RP by a guy called KOG. It's titled Ragnarok II: The Prophecy of Death and Resurrection. I'd recommend you read it through for kicks in your free time, it was a lot of fun to be a part of. It's over now though, but I'm hoping KOG will bring back the idea for a third RP.