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Gryphon_Exelsior Posted: 15:53 May02 2007 Post ID: 1573908
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name: Angoras
age: 71(he looks to be about 20)
race: Elven
gender: male
height: 6'9
weight: 125 ilb
appearence: he has the green eyes that mark the elves. He wears a
saphire-colored tunic addorned with beryls which he stores his magic in. Has
a pair of black boots and shoulder-length golden hair, and carries an elven
bow and quiver quite capable of destroying the undead.
personality: he is caring and brave, and believes in preserving the lands of
Arthania and wiping out the scourge of the Undead. He was one of those which
opposed the elves opening the portal, and grieved when they were destroyed.
weapons/armor: an elven bow which he calls K'shelyn, and a dagger hidden in his boot. He wears a shirt of closely woven chain maille under his tunic, which is enough to keep nearly any weapon off him. He keeps himself closely warded against mage attacks.
skills/abilities: he is a journeyman mage, and is powerful in wards and spells. He is swift, and posseses elven strength. He is an excellent archer.
beast:a silver gryphon, which he found after the war and named Valyn.
history: his history is darker than one would expect. When he was near 50, quite young for elves, the revolt began, in which is older brother, Lothyn, participated. In the war, he was forced to fight his undead brother, releasing his soul with one of the enchanted blades. He now seeks to find a way to destroy the high elves, therefore gaining vengeance. He travels with his gryphon Valyn, searching for the armies of the High Lords.
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Krahn Posted: 18:20 May08 2007 Post ID: 1584007
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Name:Shade
Age: 16
race: demon/elven
gender: male
Height: 5'2
weight: 100lbs
appearence: a black tunic with a black hood, black pants, black gloves, and black boots. Since he always wears a hood all you can see of his face are his blood red eyes. He also has pouch which shrinks anything to big to fit inside small enoguh to fit.
Persnality: arogant, semi-social
Weapons: a great sword forged from energy and a rare metal found only in hell, he carries it around in a small pouch which shrinks it to fit inside and unshrinks it as he takes it out.
Armour: He has no armour
Abilities: use's mostly black magic which allows him to teleport,unlock, and mainly helps in his thievery. He can also use black magic to heal himself and other demon, and demon half breds. He understands any langauge, and can also melt into shadows.
History: When his mother was taken by demons to hell they accidently created a demon half bred. While Shade Grew up the demons shuned him, but no one knew of his talents, one knight Shade used his magic to sneak into a major demon wepons storage and steal a greatsword, and a small pouch. While he was escaping an accideitn occured which empowered him with the ability to use dark magic. With that magic he open a portal from hell to the surface in order to escape, but since he was still a novice he didnt know how to close his portal and demons from hell have been searching for him every since.
Dragonsliveforever Posted: 23:42 May10 2007 Post ID: 1587964
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Name: Dolen?Faraar (Hidden Hunter)
Age: 120 (looks about 25)
Height: 5?4 �?
Weight: 135 lbs
Race: Forest Elf
Weapons:
Cu en Thoron?Elea (Bow of Eagle Sight) ? a bow, made of ironwood that has been stained black; each end is toped with a carved eagle?s head. Has the Elven runes of the eagle and of sight burned on to its surface, near where the thumb would be placed while aiming. The magic is activated by rubbing the runes, rapidly, three times. The bow was handed down through Dolen?s family for two millennia.
Aimegil en Pelektad?Loki (Short sword of the Striking Snake) ? a short sword, taken during the attack of an enemy caravan. Its magic is activated by speaking a word of power (nak). The sword lets him strike with the speed of a cobra at the expense of a small portion of his life energy.
Various daggers hidden throughout his clothing.
Armor/Clothing: wolf skin armor. The armor fits him like a second skin, acting as both a form of medium leather armor and a way to conceal him.
Skills: Dolen is a master of stealth and tracking. His skill with a bow is unmatched, even by other Forest Elves.
Appearance: Dolen has long, dark brown hair, brown eyes, tanned skin and is lean and muscular. He wears his hair in a long ponytail. His wolf armor covers his whole body except for his hands and head, which are bare.
Personality:
Pre-Slavery ? Dolen is very outgoing, talkative, and cheerful. Raised during a time of relative peace, he enjoys spear fishing and hunting, and has a crush on a girl in his village.
During Slavery and Post-Slavery ? Dolen is very solemn; he dislikes talking and is very short spoken when forced to do so. He still enjoys hunting, but now uses it to escape from his own inner turmoil, throwing himself fully into the hunt, in mind and body.
History: Dolen grew up in a time of relative peace. Sadly, he was abducted by a band of ogres and taken away to be a slave. He escaped after a month of slavery when he killed his overseer and ran for it. He traveled for two months to get back to the forest of his birth. However, all that was left of it was a few charred stumps scattered along the fifty-mile radius where the forest used to be. He went through the fire-scarred forest to where he used to live. Seeing the mangled and badly burned bodies of his tribe, he could no longer keep his composure. Sinking to the ground, he wept. Several hours later, when his tears had dried up, he stalked over to his burned hut and gathered up his belongings. He thanked the gods that his bow was not harmed in the inferno, and made his way through the forest once more. He now wanders the world seeking out the people that destroyed his home, to get revenge.

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LTD Crown Victoria Posted: 16:16 May19 2007 Post ID: 1605088
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Name: Leautenant James
Age: 30
Sex: Male
Height: 6'4
Weight: 150 lbs.
Weapons: SPAS 12, and a magnum pistol with AP bullets
Personality: Serious in pursuits, but fun-loving and cheerful, everywhere else. Usually uses force and strong will to get things done in chases, or with unruly criminals. In his spare time, he drives around the test track, and helps new officers learn the ropes of the RPD and works on cop cars.
Pursuit Tactics: PIT manuervers, boxes, ramming, smashing, arresting, cop car repairs and tuning and upgrading
What he's known for: Using aggresive techniques, and busting criminals
Drives: usually a level 2 civic undercover car, or a level 3 GTO.
History: Joined the RPD at the age of 15, and was better than most drivers at the track. He set new chase records and developed new pursuit techniques. Now a leautenant, he is highly respected and looked up to in the RPD. Now, he runs the Civic and State Patrol.

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Bekah_the_Pikachu Posted: 17:43 May19 2007 Post ID: 1605307
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Name: Bekah (can't think of a better name)
Height: depends on age
age: depends on other peoples age (usually 11-14)
Appearence: Short, spikey, vivid violet hair, a light purple t-shirt, jeans, and a blue and khaki baseball cap with a salamence on the front. She sometimes(depending on rp/rules and such) has espeon ears and tail.
Pokemon:
Absol and Luxray: act like her parents away from home(always alert and cautious, everything she's not)
Aipom: just Bekah's daily dose of laughter. He's the joker of the group and isn't used for battles.
Blazeken: Her first pokemon and her best friend.
Ditto: Not used for battles. A symbiotic ditto that can't transform unless he's attached to a host, and when he transforms, the host does too. The host can even be a human. Bekah uses him for her pranks and to hide.
Mew: (sometimes used in rp) only follows her around, and is a wild pokemon.

Personality: Crazy, funny, strange, outgoing, and niave. She's a unique type of person who is really smart, but makes stupid choices. It seems that only unluck things happen to her (she's trips over things alot, mostly her tail), but when good things happen, they're really good (like her finding her ditto).

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Crest_of_Honor Posted: 13:51 May26 2007 Post ID: 1619629
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Name: Torsan Storm
Age: 19
Height: 6'3
Weight: 178 Very well built
Magic/Skills: Torsan has the ability to control the force we now as Weather. Torsan also has mastered the complete art of Karate, becomeing the youngest person in the world to master the art. Torsan can also fly at speeds up to Mach 6.

Appearance: Torsan is clothed with an ancient robe. The robe is white with symbols surronding the waist. The anceint robe twists around Torsans waist and folds over his shoulder, then hangs from the waist down. He has gloden braclet around his left wrist. The robe attaches to the braclet adding to the ancient look.

History: Torsan was born on the planet Sorath. When he was 15 years old a war know as Armaggedon broke loose. Destruction everwhere you looked. What had caused the war was unknown. Some scientist say that a virus they call the, "Aggression Virus", triggers the humans addrenaline in the body and aggression in the brain, causinh the victim to loose all sense of his/her surroundings and thus snaping into a blind fury that will never go away.
Torsan had lived with his grandmother and grandfather ever scicne he was 15. His mother and father were killed in the Armaggedon War. Torsan practiced an ancient art with his grandparents for years. The ancient art was the art to control the weather through focus. He trained with his granparents until his granfather was infected with deadly aggresion virus. Tosan's grandmother, with deep sorow, destroyed Torsans grandfather in a great battle. His grandmother new that it was only a matter of time before she was infected. So she did the only thing that could save her grandson. She summoned enough strength to teleport him to a safe planet, or so she hoped. But before she teleported him, she gave him a mystical item known as the Kamora Staff. She knew that it would increase his power tremendisly, until he turned the age of 20. At the age of 20, Torsans full potentiel would be unlocked.
Torsan's grandmother ,knowing that a teleport would drain so much of her energy and thus kill her, summoned the strength and cast Torsan to the nearest planet to start a new life....


Weapons/Armor: Kamora Staff: Torsan wields a staff called the "Kamora Staff", that is made of a material not known to this world. The Kamora Staff is five feet in length and has a madalian with a K on it. The "K" has grew jewels imbeded into it.
The Staff increases a Weather Weilders power greatly. Until the Weilder becomes of age, in which case the Weilder simply uses the Staff the to help use his/her power and pull off moves more fluently.
The Kamora Staff was aquired by Torsans grandmother. When Torsan left his home planet due to the Aggresion virus, his grandmother gave him the Staff, hoping it would help him survive on the new world he was destined to arrive at.

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Big Shady Posted: 18:30 May28 2007 Post ID: 1625041
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Name: Paulio Montesagi

Age: 23

Height: 6 "8

Power(s): All Ninjitsu Arts of The Hidden Snowfall Village, even Ghoztchi (Ghu-o's-t-chi)((which is similar to Chidori and Rasengan and if you don't know what those are you don't need to read this.)) and when is filled with the memories of his past he become possesed by the Demon White Tiger, Biademoger (Be-uh-de-mo-ger) and has the power to create control snow.

Weapons(not necesary, depending on power/s): He carries many Shurikens as any ninja should, and small katana called Sygie which he uses to parry, and the Katana Nevocerpitation (Nev-o-cerpit-a-shun) while human, as Biademoger possesed he had giant fangs from his mouth, claws and enhanced senses.
Appearance: He wears a complete black ninja uniform with the symbol of the Hidden Snowfall Village on tied on his forehead. As Biademoger, he has a white aura which looks like flames coming up form him and his ninja uniform turns into white tiger fur, gets large fange from his mouth and his Index, Middle and Ring finger grow large claws from the nails. And his eyes only have a pupil which goes thin, like a cats.

Personality: He has a dark personality, lonely, depressed, and angered, but fakes laughing and being happy most of the time.

History: Abandoned as a baby in the snowy mountains for being possesed, he was found by a white tiger and taken back to the village and raised by the Snokage, the leader of the Hidden Snow Village. He fell in love with a girl around his 14th birthday, but she had no attraction to him whatsoever, but was in love his greatest enemy, then the two fought over her and Paulio killed him when he unlocked the demon form, she never wanted to see him again, this haunted Paulio so much that a couple months later when no one neared him, even on his birthday he left only saying goodbye to the Snokage promising to never reveal the Snow Village and never kill anyone who had someone who loved them. He is even more powerful than Snokage, knowing all Snokage knew, and being possesed made that happen. When he turned 14 he left to fight other villages best ninjas, the only he had the most trouble with was Uchiha Sasuke((spelling possibly inaccurate)), but he had defeated him along with Uzumaki Naruto, both in their Demon forms but did not kill them seeing how they were loved by some.

Other add-ons: From the same dimension as the show "Naruto".


Name: Chokurio Lortik

Age: 36

Height: 5"'11

Power(s)(This includes magic and other abilities): Can *almost teleport (even enemies), levitate, and use the Ninjitsu Arts from the Hidden Snowfall village.

*= he can send enemies 2km away, and himself 5km.

Weapons(not necesary,depending on magic): Shurikens.

Appearance: A giant scar in his right arm, and a long cape, with long blue hair and an upside down oval shaped head with a maniacle look.

Personality: Insane, and hates Paulio.

History: Always tortured as a child, he left his village and vowed to take revenge on the one who was born on that day. That one was Paulio, not a good choice on his part, the demon in Paulio emerged to protect him and gave Chokurio a giant scar. Now he hates Paulio because everyone he met ran, or did not even take a second glance. One day he was alone in a dark place when all of the sudden he dissapeared and was given a mission by something unkown to him to free Sucro. So he is currently unlocking him right now and with soon unleash him. To get his revenge on all, especially Paulio.

Other add-ons: He is from the same dimension as in the show Naruto.

Paulio

Age: 20

Weight: 270 lbs.

Height: 6ft""8

Appearance: Has pure black hair which is very thick, a giant scar on his face, black leather trenchcoat (u know the long ones detectives wear in old movies, but black), Black sunglasses, a normal, silver watch on his arm; black comfortable dress shoes, black gloves which let his fingers and knuckles stand out, very tall, and pretty large, superbly muscular and his hieght makes up for his weight.

Skills: Very fast and agile for his size, can hide in shadows which means that is reveald by a medium light (like a flashlight), mastered the skills of his blades, he can shatter through walls with punches and can take being hit by a truck.

Personality: Very dark, never shows any good emotion, he is easily brought into a all-out fighting frenzy.

History: Paulio grew up on this desolate planet, while he was young he was put in to sword classes, there he was givin his small blade, and large blade. He mastered the sword technique. One day he and his parents went for a walk and a drunk driver hit the three of them, at this time Paulio was 14, the car split in hlaf as it went through him, but killed his parents. Since then he has hated the whole world for taking his parents insted of him. The dirver was from the Hate group so he has joined Spiteful to get his revenge.

Group: Spiteful.


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KOG Posted: 18:27 Jun13 2007 Post ID: 1657019
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Name - Eric "Frost" Phoenix
Sex - Male
Age - 24
Height - 6'3"
Weight - 205 lbs
Weapons - Twin Draggers which can manipulate the element of ice. Named "Iris and Dice" in tribute to parents.
History - Born in a poor village, destinated near a mountain on far side of the world, Eric was blessed with the privilege of seeing both his parents. Dice and Iris Phoenix were their names. Eric grew up hearing stories about the wonders of the world, never learning about its evils. When he was 16, he began his training in the art of the water element. His father, Dice Phoenix, would take Eric up to the penticle of the mountain once a week and teach him all he knew in the art of the water element. Then after each training lesson, they would pray to the Element Gods to keep their village safe from harm. All through it was grueling, it taught Eric to be strong through tough situations and strengthened his heart. However, one day, their village was seized and attacked by the army of the Reborn. To save his life, Dice and Iris ordered Eric to flee to the mountain and never come down until the army had left. Reluctant at first, Eric obedied and fled to the top of the mountain, where he hid for 1 whole day. After the army had left, he returned to the village to find both of his parents dead. The youngling wept for hours before returning to the mountain and praying to the Gods once more for aid on what to do next. After days of fastening and praying, the Gods sent Eric a gift, two daggers who can manipulate the element of water, but in a way that was totally different from anything else. These daggers were concealed with the power of ice. Receiving the daggers, Eric gave them the names "Dice and Iris" in rememberance to his parents and took up the name Frost. Ever since then, he's travelled world in search of the Reborn army who killed in his family, in hopes of one day getting revenge.
Skills - Relys heavily on his quickness and Tai-Kwon Doe fighting style to accompany his ice powers.
Ability - Powers of the element of Ice.
Appearance - Young man. Blue eyes. Pale skin. Some muscular physic. White spiked hair. Attire consists of a black chest plate with blue leather pants that reach to his toes. A blue hood-jacket covers the young warrior. He wears two long white cloths in rememberance to both his parents. His fathers he wears across his waist to support his pants and his mothers across his head.
Personality - Good natured. Has a playfully side to him, but gets serious when it's time.
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SUPERMAN5 Posted: 19:39 Jun16 2007 Post ID: 1664208
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Name: Tidus

Age: 27

Gender: Male

Height: 6?2

Weight: 185 lbs

Race: Human

Job: Warrior

Weapons: A long, blue sword he obtained from Wakka(is it?), named the Brotherhood, water element, and a sword he got from his father, the plain sword, no element.

Magic: He can use shell, protect, and abilities to increase attack, defense, etc, he also uses element strikes in the future, currently, he can only use Fire Slash.

Appearance:Tidus wears his local Zanarkland team uniform, pant with a short right leg sleeve, and his left arm sleeve is also short, his left leg's covered in metal and his right arm's also covered in metal(he lost his right arm and his left leg in the process of reviving himself to stop Seymour). He has faded blue eyes, blonde hair and tan skin.

Personality: A kind man, which belives he must help people in a great need, most of time, he got in trouble for it! Anyway, he also wants to stop the evil like he did to his father, in the form of Sin.

History: He was born in Zanarkland, when his father dissappeared, his mother suddenly died and he was rasied by Auron, the friend of his father Jecht(is it right?). When he became the star of the Zanarkland team, he was famous, until Sin attacked the stadium, and send him toppling through time into 1000 years into the future with Auron. When He woke up in Spira, he at first wanted to leave, but he got "sent" to Luca with Wakka and the Besaid blizball team. When the fiends attacked the stadium, he met Auron, then learned the fate of Jecht. Later, he bacame a guardian, but later, he relized that Seymour wants to destroy Spira, so he resuced Yuna from him, then fought him. When he defeated him, he managed to escape, with his friends. When he met his friends except of Yuna at the Machine City, he relized, when Yuna summons the final aeon, she's going to die. Then when they located her at Bevelle, they saw her in a marriage with Seymour, then he went crazy, only a cold barrel of a rifle stopped him. After witnessing a terrible event, they managed to escape with Yuna, to get the last Aeon before the final, they went to the temple of Bevelle. When they got out, they were captured, put to trial, then sentenced to death. When they escaped the sentence, they went to Zanarkland for the final aeon. But Yuna changed her mind, they fought Yunalesica, beat her, then saw Sin outside, waiting to die. But they got on Cid's ship, blew Sin's arms off, ripped a hole into Sin. Once they flew in, they fought a endless army of fiends until they once again met Seymour. They fought him, then send him to the farplace. Finally, they found Jecht, fought him, then defeated him, but Sin's not yet dead. One by one, Yuna summoned her Aeons, then only to kill them, then they finally fought Yu Yevon, the soul of Sin. Once Sin was sealed away, forever, Tidus faded away, hearing Yuna say the last words, "I love you...". But he suddenly came back, without his right arm and without his left leg, instead, he had mech right arm and mech left leg instead. To him, it was a day, but it looked like he aged 2 years, Yuna met him again, explained him that 2 years pasted since that fateful day. Yuna explained how she defeated Vegnagun, and fought a person who looks just like him! Now, he leaves his wife behind at Besaid, to fight his worst nightmare, Seymour. He never thought Seymour will return, Yuna was also suprised, "he must have stolen some of Sin's power before he was sent" Tidus thought. But he's afraid, because he don't know if Seymour might have the power to
sent him back, but he must fight Seymour, but he don't know the price he has to pay...

((Note: This character have been altered to be accepted, because I can't remember much of his appearance))
EspeonDude_ Posted: 13:20 Jun18 2007 Post ID: 1668344
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For my Roleplay:


Name: Hunter Deval

Age: 23

Height: 6' 4"

Weight: 165

Race: Devalia.

Weapons: Battle Axe, Master Swords, and a Pistil.

Skills/Magic: Summon all Devalias, shoot Proton Beams.

Apperence: Brown Hair and Brown eyes, has a buzzcut, and likes to dress like a soldier.

Personality: Calm, cool and collected. Pretty timid at times.

History: A guy with brains, and strength. With his power, he could defeat much of the Litalian army.


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dark_wolf_33 Posted: 13:19 Jun22 2007 Post ID: 1679394
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Name: Vash Floyd
Age: 19
Height: 5'10
Weight: 159 lbs.
Gender: Male
Weapons: A Buster Sword he uses like it has the weight of a slim katana. His strength is only multiplied by the sheer sharpness and weight of this blade. In each of Vash's forms, it holds a different color to match it, going to a radiant yellow to a couragous red to an icy blue. It never has to be sharpened due to the fact it sharpens itself with an unknown magic everyday. The hilt is made from steel, padded with strips of thick leather so it is comfortable to hold in his hands. It measures about four feet long and about a foot and a half wide, and it's about two inches thick in the middle.
Skills/Magic: Vash has control over every elemental power, which are Fire, Water, Ice, Earth, Wind, Darkness, and Light. He has a respective form for each of these elements, unlocked only by tapping into his soul and the spirit of his sword. The sword chooses the form at random, surveying the battle at hand and choosing the element that will work best. He is also able to enchant everyday objects with the essense of an element, sometimes changing the chemical makeup of said item.
Appearance: Vash's appearance is anything but normal. The trait that most stands out in his persona is his wild, spikey, blonde hair. It shoots out and stays without the need of hairgel or any subsance. It only goes down a little when it gets wet. His eyes are in perfect unison with his hair, they're a handsome, cold, dark blue, but they shine like the moon in the night with courage, bravery, and pride. Upon his neck is a leather necklace with an old coin tied onto it. One side of the coin has the sign for "light", the other has the sign for "dark", sybolizing the eternal struggle between light and dark. Upon his torso, he has a sleeveless, black, tight-fitting shirt that shows off his toned muscles. His pants are a dark blue-violet color, secured with a simple belt. His sword is secured by a sheath that hangs from his belt. His body is toned but not huge? he still has a lean figure.
History: Born in the small village of Longoria, which he has sworn to protect ever since he was little, although he has gotten much more serious about it in his teenage years. He once traveled with two other warriors about the lands, but they soon got seperated for purposes Vash still doesn't know. That didn't stop him from still journeying through the land and stopping any evil threat he could find. He usually heads back to Longoria every once in a while to stay at his favorite place: the Kappa-Koppa Inn.
King of Hell Posted: 20:50 Jun25 2007 Post ID: 1688219
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Name: Thraxx

Age: 17

Race: Human

Height: 6 feet

Weight: 135 lbs

Appearance: Long black hair (Just look at my signature, and imagine that in black), gray short sleeve shirt under a long black dragon skin trench coat (baby dragon's shed their skin), black pants and black boots.

Weapons: A 4 foot long sword called "Fallen". A red blade, black cross guard in the shape of raven wings, and a large ruby as the pommel. The sword was created by the gods, and therefore cannot be bent or broken, never dulls, increases its wielder?s physical strength, magical ability, and erases their fatigue.
A hunting knife with an obsidian handle and a silver blade.

Magic: Elemental magic (fire, water, earth, wind, darkness, limited control of light, and a basic knowledge of time magic), basic telekinesis, and a limited form of telepathy. This means that Thraxx can control these elements to the best of his abilities, which are better in some areas than they are in others.

Skills: Master swordsman, expert mage, decent tracker, intelligent, agile and fast on his feet.

Personality: Good natured with a sarcastic sense of humor. Enjoys making jokes at other people?s expense. Arrogant in battle, and calm during ordinary situations. A leading figure as a child, Thraxx is comfortable taking charge of a situation; however, he is also content with doing what he needs to do, while letting the others sort out leadership issues. Although he doesn?t mind company, he is equally as comfortable being left to his own devices.

History: Thraxx was a prince of a kingdom whose name has long been forgotten. After his father was murdered by an army of un-dead, and his kingdom over-thrown, Thraxx left to pursue adventure in the lands surrounding, trying to take his mind of the grisly events of that horrible night. Spent some time as a mercenary to cover expenses, Thraxx is constantly waiting for some event that will really let him show his potential. Could this be the adventure he?s been waiting for?

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Well, it's fine, but the character seems too powerful
King of Hell Posted: 15:31 Jun26 2007 Post ID: 1691017
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Hmmm... I don't know what to do about that. I have him set up as a character already halfway through his life's story. Any suggestions would be welcome.

SUPERMAN5 Posted: 16:01 Jun26 2007 Post ID: 1691102
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you could explain the magic more specific, for example if Thraxx has that many magic, you should explain their uses, like you can fly using the wind magic and hide in the night using darkness, and you could also explain their weaknesses, like you can't use darkness in a well-lit situation, etc.
King of Hell Posted: 17:56 Jun26 2007 Post ID: 1691417
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Oh. Thanks. Congratulations. You've just helped a newbieThumbs Up

King of Hell Posted: 18:17 Jun26 2007 Post ID: 1691477
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((Okay, sorry. Next time I'll use the edit button))


Name: Thraxx

Age: 17

Race: Human

Height: 6 feet

Weight: 135 lbs

Appearance: Long black hair (Just look at my signature, and imagine that in black), gray short sleeve shirt under a long black dragon skin trench coat (baby dragon's shed their skin), black pants and black boots and black fingerless gloves with red and silver designs on the backs.

Weapons: A 4 foot long sword called "Fallen". A red blade, black cross guard in the shape of raven wings, and a large ruby as the pommel. The sword was created by the gods, and therefore cannot be bent or broken, never dulls, increases its wielder?s physical strength, magical ability, and erases their fatigue.
A hunting knife with an obsidian handle and a silver blade.

Magic: Mainly combat oriented elemental magic (fire blasts, water, earth and wind manipulation, control over darkness (creates shadow blasts, and can cloak himself in shadows) (works best at dusk, but is still potent during the day), a basic knowledge of time magic (can slow time for brief periods)), basic telekinesis, and a limited form of telepathy. This means that Thraxx can control these elements to the best of his abilities, which are better in some areas than they are in others. For example: Thraxx?s strength in magic lies in his shadow and fire spells. His time magic is limited at best, and his telekinesis is just enough to accomplish what he needs done. His control over the other elements is superior to some, and inferior to others, but all he really needs them for is to expose weakness in his foes.

Skills: Excellent swordsman, expert mage, decent tracker, intelligent, agile and fast on his feet.

Personality: Good natured with a sarcastic sense of humor. Enjoys making jokes at other people?s expense. Arrogant in battle, and calm during ordinary situations. A leading figure as a child, Thraxx is comfortable taking charge of a situation; however, he is also content with doing what he needs to do, while letting the others sort out leadership issues. Although he doesn?t mind company, he is equally as comfortable being left to his own devices.

History: Thraxx was a prince of a kingdom whose name has long been forgotten. After his father was murdered by an army of un-dead, and his kingdom over-thrown, Thraxx left to pursue adventure in the lands surrounding, trying to take his mind of the grisly events of that horrible night. Spent some time as a mercenary to cover expenses, Thraxx is constantly waiting for some event that will really let him show his potential. Could this be the adventure he?s been waiting for?


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SUPERMAN5 Posted: 09:10 Jun27 2007 Post ID: 1692947
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Bravo, Bravo, the bio's seems to be made by a pro.
King of Hell Posted: 23:11 Jun27 2007 Post ID: 1695807
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Thumbs Up I try my best. By the way, if there was any sarcasm in that sentence, I missed it, and I apologise for that. It's 12:09, and I woke up at 7:00 today. Normally, I'm good with jokes. If anybody needs help with their bio, contact me! Apparently I write them like a pro. Right, Superman5?Smile Keep in touch!

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((Just to let you all know,this isn't an discussion thread,you post bios here, and that's it. They copy and paste them into an rp, we fix thier mistakes. Thank you all for your kindness, it's what makes this forum a great place. Thumbs Up ))

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